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Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 11:52 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Oh my gosh the crane thing was so sad!

Author's Response: thanks,

Reviewer: sarahyellow Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 11:51 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Oh my gosh the crane thing was so sad!

Author's Response: thanks,

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 05:46 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!!

Author's Response: thanks.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 05:45 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

OMG OMG OMG! I always wanted to make one thousand cranes too! But I was too lazy... Awww... Man... This chapter totally touched my heart man... One thousand cranes? Great job that was a very good idea. SSSOOOOOO SSSWWWEEETTTTTT!!!

Author's Response: lol. me too. thanks.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 04:38 pm Title: When Fire Meets Ice Cream

Awww....

Author's Response: mhmmm.

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 04:22 pm Title: When Tom Feels Different

Dude... Dude, DUDE!!! This story is awesome! I wish I have a best friend like that! I seriously hope Bill doesn't die! Or loose his sexy hair! BIG FAN BIG FAN BIG FAN OF YOUR STORIES!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: ;) thanks

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 04:03 pm Title: Prologue

Noooo... I hope Bill doesn't die!

Author's Response: dont worry. thanks.

Reviewer: Katie_09 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 03:05 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Oh, wow, my throat is clenched. Thatwas just too nice. I love that you had an asian woman in it, that part about the cranes was, well, amazing.... plus I love the way your not rushing them into it. It gives it a proper meaning and story. :)

Author's Response: aww. thanks!

Reviewer: cigimuz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 10:41 am Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

I really loved this chapter! Oh my god! They kissed! ARGH! Please update soon, this is getting far too good!

Author's Response: Hhehehe. ;)

Reviewer: Kariiin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 03:47 am Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! *can't stop 'aww'ing*

That end was SOOOOOOOOOOOO cute. Sosososososo. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Omggg, I fell in love with them.! And the story... and ahh... AWW!
PLZ UPDATE SOON! I LUV IT SO MUCH!

XD

Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: DivineArtemis Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/28/09 03:36 am Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

haha the 1000 cranes. i made a 1000 silver cranes for my sister's wedding. Very stubborn things since they were 3.5" by 3.5". That took forever!!...well a year seems like forever to me....I could probably make those in my sleep now. ^-^ It was for good luck and health. Very sweet story! I absolutely love it

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 11:54 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Awww.... That was so beautiful. I'm crying or at least trying not to. I once read about a little girl with cancer. She was from Japan and she made 1000 paper cranes. I don't know why I didn't think of it when my Dad was sick. ( Sorry, that's why this story is hard for me ). I'm not sure if I can handle it if Bill dies, but I'm trying. This is the first time I've been able to read or watch anything about cancer since my Dad ( like 9 years ) update soon please.

Author's Response: Thank! And don't read this if it makes you sad. I don't want to make you cry. ):

Reviewer: Tokio Jax Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 10:54 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

That was very bittersweet...waiting for more...

Author's Response: ;D

Reviewer: xXXBills_LuvrXXz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 09:54 pm Title: Prologue

lol
;) little did she know!! =]

Author's Response: lol. mhm (;

Reviewer: xXXBills_LuvrXXz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 09:39 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

i love that woman!!!

she help them...

in more than one way!!!

=] cant wait for the next chapter[=



Author's Response: i know! and she only thinks she promised health. pshhhh. lol.

Reviewer: dantereznor Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 09:06 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Sadako and the thousand paper cranes, she died of radiation poisoning that developed into cancer..

I noticed it connection almost at once.. I loved the book very much. And I actually have a gold wish crane and a small note book paper crane.


I kinda wanna start making Cranes for Bill now.

Author's Response: thanks ^_^ i didn't know there was a book about it! lol.

Reviewer: thywillbedone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 08:55 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

AWGOD, this made me sniffly. They are truly so sweet and perfect for each other! <333

Author's Response: ;]]]]]] thanks!

Reviewer: InvisibleTears96 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 08:50 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Wow this is beautiful! I was so surprised about the thousand paper cranes! I had been wondering about where you were going to take this and The origami is such a creative and new route! I just love it and I can not wait until the next update! You truly have a gift =)

Author's Response: :]

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 07:38 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy

Awww that is SO sweet and kind of that elderly woman to give Bill and Tom the wish, my sister told me about the legend of the cranes, she's been making them for a while so I dunno if she'll finish or not, but the chapter was great! Glad to see Tom and Bill are FINALLY together, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: You think they're finally together. ^_^

Reviewer: Nia Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/09 07:02 pm Title: When They Visit Mount Baldy



Loved it =]

Author's Response: yay!

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