Date: 12/04/09 11:32 pm Title: When Time Flies
Chapters need to be longer so that the reader can get into the story. It's the short chapters that irritate me. There usually is not enough substance preseted in short chapters and it doesn't leave you enough of the story to tide you over until the next installment. There should be a law in fan fiction that chapters have to be a minimum of 2000 words. I think I'll start the battle cry for longer chapters!
Date: 12/04/09 09:40 pm Title: When Time Flies
Don't be sorry for writing a long chapter. I like it when their long. Anyway... What a great time for Bill. Tom is so wonderful! I love that he is so very thoughtful and so tender with Bill. Their love is so pure and sweet I want them to be together forever and happy. I hope that will happen for them :)
Date: 12/04/09 09:34 pm Title: When Time Flies
Aw what a sweet chapter. x]
I'm glad that Bill got his prom. :]
And yeah it did take a long time for a chapter. :[ but don't apologize for making it long, those are the best kind! :D
Hope for more soon!!!
Date: 12/04/09 08:24 pm Title: When Time Flies
love it, love it, love it!
Date: 11/28/09 12:59 am Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Wow. I just finished reading this story and it's so amazing! You need to hurry up and update it!I don't know how much longer I can wait! I've been reading on or two chapter before I go to bed every night and now I have nothing to read! :( Please update soon! It's soo good!!
Date: 11/02/09 04:27 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
That's so sweet!!! That's like the sweetest gift ever and Tom is the best:) so very cute I love it!
Author's Response: n_n Tom's a great friend, huh?
Date: 10/28/09 09:29 am Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
it's good that they can talk about the things that are happening in their relationship...and tomi is a very thoughtful boyfriend...
Author's Response: I thought so too. n_n
Date: 10/27/09 05:25 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
aaww, sweet :D What didn't Tom do? oO
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see. :O
Date: 10/27/09 12:41 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
When is the last chapter of the story *wants to know why he didnt*
Author's Response: 4 chapters away. :P # 30 will be the last.
Date: 10/27/09 05:59 am Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Aw, that present was so sweet! I'm glad Tom was so understanding, not that I thought he wouldn't be, but. :))
Author's Response: :) I get it. He's a great person. LOL. As I write him out to be at least.
Date: 10/27/09 03:42 am Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Awww that was really sweet. I'm glad Tom understood where Bill was coming from and isn't trying to push him. :]
Great update, and Tom's present to Bill was perfect. Do we get to see the other presents too??
Anyway, great job as usual. :]
Author's Response: At some point, maybe. There are only four chapters left though so we'll see.
Date: 10/27/09 12:01 am Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
love it! update cherie!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 10/26/09 11:09 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Next chapter-4 months later....GAHHHHH, the suspense....man I can't wait! Loved this story from the get go!
Author's Response: Haha. Don't worry. ;) It'll be worth it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/26/09 11:08 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Still loving this story.
Awesome chapter as always.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/26/09 10:42 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Awww!! Thats one of the sweetest gifts ever :D
Author's Response: I thought so too. ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 10/26/09 10:41 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Ah! The last chapter?! Amazing as always.
Author's Response: I know. Lol. It shouldn't be too far from now though!
Date: 10/26/09 09:41 pm Title: When Bill Turns Eighteen
Oooooh this was so beautiful! I loved it. That last line just made me go 'awwww. so sweet!'
This was just so much fluff and cute. I loved the image in my mind of Bill in a blanket cocoon. Too damn adorable. But that last part was just the best part. It was beautiful in its simpleness, but it was so meaningful as well. :D
Oh boy for dreads and cornrows in the next chapter. Lol. Love!
Author's Response: I'd love to see Bill all wrapped up in blankets. ^_^ He'd be adorable.
Date: 10/24/09 06:38 pm Title: When Things Get Heated
I adore your writing ;) and this is the biggest cliffhanger in the world D: lol
Author's Response: LOL. I know it is. I'm working on updating! :)
Date: 10/24/09 02:47 am Title: When Things Get Heated
yay! they are so cute and i cant wait for the adorable conversation! keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 10/22/09 09:21 pm Title: When Things Get Heated
Yeahp, I'm sure it be adorable!
Can't wait to read it.
Now thayt they are all happy and moving forward on their relationship, I'm sort getting uneasy about Bill's health. Hope there will be no mean and terrible complications for him in the future.
Keep writting, please!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :D