Date: 06/07/09 03:29 pm Title: When They Swim and Talk
aw i luvlz it, but I am a bit worried for Bill. Will he ever go into remission?
Author's Response: Just keep your eyes open! :D Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/07/09 03:20 pm Title: When They Swim and Talk
Aw this story is making me smile the more and more I read it, I love it! I'm hoping Bill gets better.
Author's Response: ;) I'm glad you're smilin' Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/07/09 02:18 pm Title: When They Swim and Talk
So far this story is really good, I am really enjoying it. I'm not sure why I started reading it as i avoid character death like the plague, so I am sincerely hoping that Bill is going to go into remission. Besides, he and Tom should get to go to Disneyland, have sex, all those fun things. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Hahaha. That'd be cute ^_^ Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 06/07/09 11:44 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
i'm sorry but that makes me wanna cry, poor poor Bill.
Author's Response: Don't cry!!
Date: 06/07/09 11:19 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
Oh, I hate it when Bill says he's not going to live long :(
I just wanna shake him and demand he be more optimistic, haha.
Anyway, I really liked it! =] And I don't think it was uneventful at all ;)
Author's Response: Don't worry. ;) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 06/07/09 10:42 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
I feel so wierd! I feel like crying, saying 'Awwww' and breaking into a grin!! I love this story so much!!! Its really really amazing ^-^ Pleaseee keep going? (and soon) xD
Author's Response: Aww, thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 06/07/09 10:18 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
oh billa you have to be careful! and tom is so sweet to him..he's going to be bill's cure..it has to be!
i really hope to see (ehm read) them in disney world!it would be a good sign!
and 40 chapters long? oh wow! this is goign to be a long journey..you can count me in!
thanks!!!
Author's Response: :) Maybe, you never know. Yeah... 40! :P Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 06/07/09 07:49 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
O.O uneventful? You call THAT uneventful?? Geez, I call that GREAT! But blame yourself for telling me you wanted a long review, because actually I've been trying to hold myself back in this field but since you asked... hehe, here it comes! :D
I really felt the slight change in Tom's behaviour, the way he acts... more firm, a little less secure but still stubborn, sweeter than ever with Bill and if possible even more caring, but the thing that struck me the most was the shower. :) Wasn't Tom self conscious the last time they showered together? Well, the fact that he himself started it this time and Bill was the shy one, well it says a lot of things, like Bill now thinks more about it because they're together and suddenly Tom is more sure about it again because they're together... did I even make sense there? XD At least, that's how it feels to me.
I'm glad Bill got some strenght and forced against his sickness, though I wished he had a little more hope... hearing those things sucks for Tom, and I wish Bill was a little more careful about that... OH! What if you add a little 'moment' of Tom showing weakness about that? ;) You might put Bill there or not, that is up to you, however I said my wish out loud. :) I really like this Tom-character you know!
I sooo hope you post soon! :) And that Bill gets a bit better. :( great story, great!
Author's Response: I LOVE LONG REVIEWS. YOU NEED TO KEEP MAKIN' 'EM LONG! Okay, the whole shower thing, yes, Tom was self conscious last time but this chapter more got Bill's emotions. I wanted to get more of him in there, ya know? And I'm glad you like my Tom. ;) Don't worry about how strong Bill is (Or rather, isn't...) I have plans. And Tom's strength, I have plants for that too. :) Thanks so much for reviewing. It made my day!
Date: 06/07/09 05:22 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
Hey hun, sorry I haven't reviewed lately and if I have I'm still sorry that I forgot that I reviewed!
I've been trying to find a copy of Sadako for you to read online, but so far its a no go. Aside from the teachers guides tell you about Japan at the time she was alive, (Yep Sadako's story is real, so were her cranes!)
Anyways I love the chapter even if it wasn't so eventful.
Author's Response: ;) Awww thanks! I'm glad you reviewed.
Date: 06/07/09 04:47 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
I loooooved it, as usual. :D
Update soon!! :)
Author's Response: Of course ;D
Date: 06/07/09 02:36 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
Aw!
I absolutely ADORE this story!
It is amazing.
I just speechless.
Haha Great Job!
Please keep up the amazing work. :D
Author's Response: aww. thank you!
Date: 06/07/09 01:53 am Title: Prologue
*squee*
i fell super special
*clap joyfuly*
good luck on this chapter...even though i know it's gonna be awesome!! ;D
Author's Response: hehehehe. ;)
Date: 06/07/09 01:41 am Title: When They Swim and Talk
idk if i can write a long review but i can try...
well, i love the fact that Tom & Bill takin it slow also the fact that they are really startin to REALLY find the love in their relationship
oh and bill was nerves in the shower,even though he's done it times before, AWWW bill is in love..so is tomi..i think they are so cute together!
not to crush some peoples hopes on getting into a "relationship" with Tom or Bill. but i would really wish that they weren't brothers so they can be toether...
hell, tom even said they were soulmates..at an interveiw!*wink wink* i wonder
*daydream*
well, it worth a shot/thought!
Author's Response: ;) this made me smile big and i just opened word to start the next chapter because of it! thanks!
Date: 06/03/09 05:33 pm Title: When Bill's Paranoid
AT LEAST 30 MORE?
OH MY GOD.
I'M SO FUCKING EXCITED NOW.
i like capslock, btw.
Author's Response: xD i did the outline and now this story is going to be 40 chapters long. forever right? ugh. D:
Date: 06/03/09 05:27 pm Title: When Bill's Paranoid
“I could get used to that,” Tom whispered, his lips just barely brushing against Bill’s again and he laid another soft, careful kiss upon Bill's mouth.
So cheesy but absolutely adorable ;)
Author's Response: ;)
Date: 06/02/09 11:55 am Title: When Bill's Paranoid
This is a great story. Good job. My godmother died from breast cancer that eventually spread everywhere. This reminds me of her...in a good way. She would have liked Tokio Hotel if she was still alive. :)
Author's Response: Aww. Thank you. I'm glad it's a good reminder. :)
Date: 06/02/09 06:55 am Title: When Bill's Paranoid
HOLY- you changed the banner??? It's even more beautiful than it was before!!! :) geez, you got your touch at this, honey!
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you, sweetie. :)
Date: 06/02/09 06:28 am Title: When Bill's Paranoid
Oh my forking God! That was so amazing and i loved it so much! PLease update soon!
Author's Response: I'll do my very best, dear!
Date: 06/01/09 10:02 pm Title: Prologue
*claps joyfully*
okay =]
Author's Response: ;D
Date: 06/01/09 09:56 pm Title: When Bill's Paranoid
i really like this chapter...they are finally together *squee* but, i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: ;) the next chapter will HOPEFULLY come by Saturday but i'm not sure yet.