Date: 07/31/09 09:33 pm Title: When Days Are Slow
wow. I'm pretty much speechless. The ending of this chapter is absolutely beautiful!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) It's greatly appreciated.
Date: 07/31/09 09:20 pm Title: When Days Are Slow
Can I have one of those? Sniff sniff sniff. I can't stop crying. That was so wonderful! They were so sweet and I love that Tom is not holding everything in anymore but still protecting Bill from his emotions. I hope Bill's vision of happiness comes true for him soon. He has worked hard for it and so has Tom. I wonder what number crane that woman is on? She must be just over about half way. It's getting brighter and I hope it stays that way. Update soon:)
Author's Response: Yes you can. *gives tissues and tolds you* It's okay. The woman won't be in the story much. Only twice more, I think. (I don't actually remember.) Thanks for reviewing. :) It's greatly appreciated.
Date: 07/31/09 09:06 pm Title: When Days Are Slow
I thought the chapter was perfect. Thinking is very important and considering what they're going through right now, I think their thoughts NEEDED to come out. And I quite like Bill's way of thinking now. I totes do that too, make up my own perfect world.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think tha way too. :) I do too, I usually write stories in my own though. :) Thanks for reviewing dear. :) It means so much!
Date: 07/31/09 09:04 pm Title: When Days Are Slow
aww=] update sooon thx=]
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :) It's greatly appreciated.
Date: 07/28/09 10:22 am Title: When Isolation Begins
Awww. :( Poor thing... I don't think I'd ever want to live through this, but the way you write it just makes it look real - it's creepy but at the same time amazing. :)
I hope Tom will sneak by everyday to go see Bill, if not inside his room at least by the window. o_ò And I also hope that Simone will be invited at Tom's house or something... don't let her be alone in the house in a moment like this, please. :(
Hope you post soon, it's a really nice read. :) As nice as it can be with a subject like this, but I like your writing and it's getting better and better day by day! My compliments. :)
Author's Response: :) I was hoping to write it as real as possible! :) I don't think I'd ever leave Simone alone in a time like this. Ever! Aww, you are so dang sweet!! Thank you soooo much!
Date: 07/28/09 10:03 am Title: When Tom's Worried
Awwww. :) You know, reading this chapter felt like... something new. I kinda felt like you grew in your writing, you know? It's absolutely positive and you should be proud of that. :) I'm glad you've got so good after so much exercise! I liked the chapter, it was so carefree in a way. However I can't stop worrying for Tom, he seems like the one into labour the most. o_O"
Author's Response: I tried to make it feel that way the best that I could. :) I hope to have more carefree chapters asap too. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 07/27/09 05:55 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
Hey!
Great story.
You've made me laugh so hard and completely burst into tears these past few days while I was reading it!
I simply loved the way you've characterized both Tom and Bill. Tom character is just so strong and tender!
You've done an amazing job.
Thanks for sharing!
Keep the good writing!
Author's Response: Awww! I'm so happy to hear you like the story. :)
Date: 07/26/09 05:45 am Title: When Isolation Begins
oh dear.... UPDATE
Author's Response: I update this usually on Fridays but I think I might be able to update Thursday! :) Keep your eyes open for it. :):):) Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 07/25/09 07:27 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
i hope everything turns out ok with bill
Author's Response: Me too. :)
Date: 07/25/09 02:51 am Title: When Isolation Begins
OMG that was so sad but I'm feeling hopeful after that totally sappy but perfect end there... This is really well written and I can't wait to read more! Love
Author's Response: Thanks times like, ten. :) I like hearing it's well written. Busts the ego//confidence, ya know? ;) Thanks!!
Date: 07/24/09 10:54 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
Omg! I really hope Bill would survive!!
Author's Response: Me tooo!!! :)
Date: 07/24/09 09:54 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
OMG! I teared up at this chapter *Cries a little* I really wanted to climb and hold Bill and tell him it was going to be ok and Tom too and Simone.
Author's Response: Awww. I hope you didn't cry too much! I don't want people to cry! (Even though that seems to be the way I've been writing this since the beginning... :P) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 07/24/09 09:53 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
oh god oh god!!!!
*crosses fingers and hopes that everything will be all right.
Author's Response: Keep your fingers crossed! Maybe it'll help Bill!!
Date: 07/24/09 09:05 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
Aw man, I hope he's gonna be okay! I'm not mentally prepared for anything else otherwise. :S
Author's Response: I'm not mentally prepared for anything else, either. D:
Date: 07/24/09 08:41 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
I really hope you make Bill survive this all okay. . .
Author's Response: Me too. :P
Date: 07/24/09 07:00 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
plz update sooon thx=]
Author's Response: of course. :)
Date: 07/24/09 05:56 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
Oh Bill.... He's so scared and unsure of everything. I think that would suck so badly not to know. I just really hope he gets through this and he and Tom can be together. Simone, what she must feel right now. I'm sure Tom will take car of her while Bill is in the hospital. I'm so sad again:( but this is one step closer to Bill being better yes? Update soon:)
Author's Response: I'd be scared too though, wouldn't you?
Date: 07/24/09 04:45 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
Poor bill! :( why must they punish him so...omg i'm totally wearing exotic coconut right now xD hehe i love that stuff.
Author's Response: Exotic coconut is going to be a joke throughout the story now. It was just too funny to only use once. :)
Date: 07/24/09 04:40 pm Title: When Isolation Begins
Oh god! This was so... emotionel! I almost cried here! This was so amazing! It really was!
Author's Response: No crying! That's bad!
Date: 07/23/09 03:33 pm Title: When Tom's Worried
I don't like Worried!Tom, it makes my heart throb. ):
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)