Date: 09/21/09 05:06 am Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
Aw I really like that TOm's trying to take it slow. :] Evenn with... that er... problem. XDD
Ten chapters really? I can't wait to read them. :D
I think you should try reading the story, if you're into it then read what's there. :]
Author's Response: Hahaha. Yeah. He ran away and Bill, though I didn't say anything about him, was like O_O 'uh, what?' You'll see about that in the next chapter. ;) Thanks for reviewing! And I'm going to take a look at Got A Call :D
Date: 09/20/09 11:35 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
So cute and fluffy. I love it and I love where Tom and Bill's relationship is going. They are so considerate of eachother and Tom is so good about not rushing Bill. I love them and I can't wait to see how they like UVS! Yay :)
Author's Response: ;D I'm glad you like the cute and fluffy and how they're interacting. :) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/20/09 11:11 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
Awesome, I love this story!
Author's Response: ;D I'm happy to love it! :D
Date: 09/20/09 10:24 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
i would definately take the time to read it...it's well worth it...
i like your story and how their relationsip is building...i think it's adorable...
Author's Response: I think so too. I read the first couple chapters then got distracted now I REALLY want to read it. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 09/20/09 09:30 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
answer: read it. you could probably skim and do ok, but i really like it so at least skim it. :)
review: how come tom thinks bills so innocent?? lol if i was bill i would proooobably have raped tom by now. or you know, even if i wasnt bill ;) lol keep up the good work maddam
Author's Response: I'm going to read it, maybe this Friday after school or Sunday after my homework is finished. Lol. And the thing about Bill and Tom will kind of be touched base on in a few chapters, nearing the ending of the story, right around prom, if you catch my drift. ;) Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/20/09 07:55 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
hahaha i hate the same problem with that story. i think i'm gonna do it too so yeahh. great chapter btw
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 09/20/09 07:07 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
DO it, setting the night aside, I mean. It's worth it, really.
As for this story...well, it's got me rapt. Can't really say much more because it fills me with such emotion that I lose speech ability.
Author's Response: I'm going to, when I get the chance. :) I hope it's before they add another 10 chapters to it. Lol. 40 is a lot to read in one night! xD Thanks for the advice and the review. :)
Date: 09/20/09 06:23 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
I love this! update more soon please!
Author's Response: I'll have another on Wednesday! :D
Date: 09/20/09 05:28 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
Oh I knew I was gonna love this chapter. I love how innocent Tom and Bill are yet at the same time, it was so sexy and sensual. I love that, how there doesnt have to be any sex, only touching and kissing and its just as hott. =D
I'm getting kinda sad that soon enough the story will be finished. But alas, you still have your other wonderful stories. Woot!
Author's Response: I'm trying to make it hot but sweet at the same time. :) Thanks for reviewing! <3
Date: 09/20/09 05:27 pm Title: When Emotions Go Crazy
First; oh, holy shit *__*
That was better than I could’ve hoped for. This chapter is so beautiful, so outstanding, I love the way you make Bill so innocent, but yet he’s curious. And how Tom feels about Bill, the fact that he feels like he’s using him with the kisses, I think makes Bill seem even more innocent. And I adore it.
Like I said on twitter, I never think I’ve wanted an update as bad as this one. Now I do though, since I can’t wait for the next chapter.
I can’t explain how much this story means to me, and the fact that it’s coming to an end so fast is almost unbelievable. I always get this feeling when I’m reading this, the feeling of excitement, happiness and everything else at once. This is why I look up to you as a writer and a person, its admirable how you write, portray and let the feelings live through the characters. I’m just awestruck.
Author's Response: I'm trying to keep them as sweet and loving but also show that they're still teenage boys with hormones that need to be taken care of. :) The next chapter is going to be a ton different than this one. Lol. Honestly, I'm awestruck by this comment. This is what makes me try harder and harder on each chapter. And knowing that I'm inspiring you in someway is a great feeling. Thanks for reviewing, sweetie. <333
Date: 09/19/09 12:07 pm Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
Hi!
Oh my, Bill must have felt so nervous about telling Tom. I'm so glad everything gone well in the end.
I didn't have a chance to review on last chapter, but I really must to say that it was great. I simply loved the part when Tom is thinking about what 'fading' means for Bill. It was utterly sweet and in such, it kind of summarizes the whole plot of the story. I truly loved it!
Keep writing, please!
Author's Response: :) Fading is a good word, I thought. Thanks for reviewing, dear. It's highly appreciated!
Date: 09/17/09 02:06 pm Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
i'm glad that bill's feeling better...and to give tomi that...that's a big step...
Author's Response: Mhm. That's why I didn't have him do it. I think it would have been too much too soon. Thanks for reviewing, it's greatly appreciated!
Date: 09/17/09 12:01 am Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
I want the next chapter right now.....*shakes fist* post it!
Author's Response: xD I did. :D
Date: 09/15/09 12:08 am Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
oh mein gosh!!!! this is so cute! update more soon please!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/14/09 09:12 pm Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
Aw, silly Bill is all nervous. x] It's understandable, and adorable. And the little ending part was sweet to.
I can't wait to read more. :D
Author's Response: I love the Bill I've created in this story. Lol.
Date: 09/14/09 03:09 pm Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
Aww, that last bit is so cute :3
I love how Bill didn't go out of character in this chapter when thinking about giving his big V to Tom after only two weeks. Made it seem more realistic, (or as realisting as FF can get...:p) Lovely chapter, sweetie :)
Author's Response: ;D I love reading your reviews. They always make me smile!
Date: 09/14/09 03:02 pm Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
happy birthday to Tom in this chapter :)
ahh isnt it lovely to have no school on your birthday...yeah, i wouldnt know.
poor Bill...so confused. i think he should just go for it. he is doing well, and i think Tom would just want him to be happy. Bill should never think that he isnt enough for Tom's happiness. no no no.
haha i have a feeling Simone is going to walk in on them...that should be funny as hell.
EEEKKKK please write soon!!
Author's Response: Hahaha. Mhm. I have school on my birthday :P xD
Date: 09/14/09 03:30 am Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
awww, I love this chapter sweetie. How you get Bill's feelings into words like that and of course, when I saw;
“I was going to get you a waffle maker, as a joke but that’s just dumb,”
I think I choked on air from laughter, I really didn't expect that one.
I can't believe it's only 12 chapters left DD: I'm so going to read all of this at least twice when it's all done :))
Author's Response: I think this story is going by too fast. :(
Date: 09/14/09 12:52 am Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
Eeek!!! Bill is so cute when he thinks too much about stuff. I do the same thing though. It was so sweet when Tom woke up and Bill wasn't there, he was all worried about Bill and I thought it was really cute. Great job I could totally put myself in Bill's train of thought too. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: 09/13/09 11:06 pm Title: When Tom Turns Eighteen
I'm always checking for updates. This is a touching story....love Toms compassion.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. :)