Date: 07/09/15 08:52 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
This is ridiculously gorgeous and heartbreaking! Your writing is just stunning.
Date: 05/22/14 11:23 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Bill is unintentionally cruel to To here. Poor Tom. I feel less sympathy for Bill.
Date: 12/05/10 11:24 am Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
OMG That was terribly sad but really good. I felt so sorry for Tom. Danke.
Author's Response: danke gleichfalls :)
Date: 11/12/09 02:34 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Oh my, it is something special. I don’t have many words to say about how loved it is, but thank you for sharing your art.
~riven
Author's Response: you're welcome, as always. :)
Date: 10/15/09 06:46 am Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
woah that was intense
and heartbreaking
and horrible
and...so good
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 08/21/09 02:10 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
wow, that was intense, just what I needed. But wow, just wow, it was just so amazing n_n
I don’t think we belong there, he says, and Bill feels comforted. Not yet.
that line just really go me. Actually, the last three lines are so powerful :D and the first line. I love your opening sentence :)
Author's Response: thank you so much! :)
Date: 07/13/09 08:22 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Oh why, why you make me cry again? Like I said last time that I'm going to read the rest of your fics, I started that prosess now and after this one it is so obvious that you are going to be my first ever favorite author. My little gesture of honoring you and your writing. God, how do you do that?
I desided that I read your stories as a bedtime stories when being alone, only one awake in the house, dark and quiet and nothing disturbing me. Feels like I'm seeing a dream already. Your style is so amazing, it really is. So much pain and beauty that it makes my heart ache.
By the way, that fifteen-twentyone - wordplay was very effective. At least it made me to realise the long way between them and kind of lost of something beautiful. The idea of using images of them being fifteen gave a good reflection where to compare the present situation. It reminded of innocence and simplicity of life and it was devastating to feel the contrast to twentyone.
It was not about letting go of a relationship between Bill and Tom. It was about letting go of all those things we assosiate to the childhood: purity, innosense, lightness of life. This is how I felt it.
Author's Response: Oh, you're too good to me! And I really like your interpretion of the whole thing... Your reviews always make me smile, so thanks. :)
Date: 05/19/09 01:46 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
I already told you what I thought about it, but I guess I can say it again... I love the way you wrote this. I'm really, really envious of your writing, you know? It's like you're getting better at it every time I read something new from you!
It was hot, and heartbreaking, and just... perfect. Thanks for sharing. =)
Author's Response: i know you have, and i appreciate that you take the time to tell me again :) thanks for reading!
Date: 05/16/09 11:52 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
whoa....that was...um...hmm...simply amazing. You say you don't even know? haha I don't know either! That was utterly stunning!!!
Author's Response: Thank you!! ^_^
Date: 05/16/09 09:38 am Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
OMG I just saw how long my review came out. Sorry!
Author's Response: lol, don't sweat it, I love long reviews, especially yours. ;)
Date: 05/16/09 09:37 am Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Every time you publish something new I have to make sure I have plenty of time in front of me before I actually sit down to read it. I'm just so worried that I'll have to stop midway. Really, every single one of your stories - from the first line to the last - puts me under a spell, sort of. It's like a trance when I'm reading and if I have to stop suddenly, it's gonna haunt me until I finish it. So here I am, back leaving you creepy reviews and making a complete idiot of myself. (: But I want to thank you, as strange as it sounds, because your writing shakes me so bad, but when I reach the last word I am at peace. I think I've mentioned it before, in one of my other whiny reviews; The way you take feelings and sentiments we all know well and put them into words, and you do it so perfectly, the descriptions are making my heart ache because they're so familiar. You cause the readers to feel like they're the ones inside the story, feeling and reacting and being so very human.
The ending sums it up flawlessly. Especially with that phrase from the beginning of the story in mind: "The bathroom door doesn’t shut right, it’s a little crooked and stays open unless you’re real careful with the lock, unless you’ve got something you really want to shut out." Bill is so cruel in here but his pain seeps through the words and makes it impossible to hate him, to not understand him, put yourself in his place and wonder if you wouldn't have acted the same. I have much more to say but I'm gonna press submit now before I'll end up with a story of my own here in the review box. So yea, I loved the story, if you couldn't tell. lol
Author's Response: Your reviews always make me so... giddy, I suppose, and most of the time I truly have nothing to say but a huge thank you, you stun me so. The way you react, it's the way I feel and react to my favorite writer(s), and I'm so honored I make you feel this way. Also, the way you interpret what I write, the way you just seem to understand what I myself feel like I failed to convey always puts a stupid grin on my face, this review being a great example of that. So, basically, thank you so very much (and the next time, I sure wouldn't mind your own story in a review ;)). :) :) :)
Date: 05/16/09 06:40 am Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
This is amazing. Will there be more? You write wonderfully.
Author's Response: Sadly, no. It's a oneshot. Thanks for the review, though! :)
Date: 05/16/09 12:15 am Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
You write things that are published, right? Because this is WAY TOO GOOD for just fan-fiction. I love your style, it's so poetic and real. :) Even though those are kind of contradictory.
Author's Response: lol, no I don't, but thanks anyway. ;)
Date: 05/15/09 11:47 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA HUBBA!!!!!!!! even more delicious'er than chocolate cake on my birthday (which isn't for another 1 & 1/2 months). Yummm!!
Author's Response: haha, thanks you! =)
Date: 05/15/09 11:39 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Is it okay if I just say the word WOW? Cause like...wow.Thats sad,but is it weird to think of it as romantic?
Some of the words....speak romantic in a sense.Guess it depends how you look at it. :)
Author's Response: that's perfectly alright, yes. :) and yeah, I guess it depends on how you look at it. thanks for the review!
Date: 05/15/09 11:18 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
That read like poetry. Really great.
Author's Response: Thank you! (:
Date: 05/15/09 09:56 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
I can't think of what to say because this is a whole new kind of hurt.
It's not bad, btw, total opposite, I just don't know what to say. Ouch. :(
Author's Response: lol, I know what you mean, I intended for you to feel that way. What can I say, I'm a sadist. ;) Thanks for the review!! :)
Date: 05/15/09 05:38 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Wow.
I love this, because it's not Tom who's running or has someone else. It's flipped this time :D
That doesn't change the fact that it was slightly heartbreaking. Bill left Tom hanging there, didn't he? *tsk* Poor things.
Loved it. So realistic and emotional ;)
Author's Response: lol, yeah, I like to switch things up a little XD And he did leave Tom hanging, the heartless boy. ^_^ Thanks for the review!!
Date: 05/15/09 03:16 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
Wow, I always need a few minutes to get back to reality after reading your stories, and this was no exception. I adore your writing, and you are by far one of my favorite writers ever.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you!! <3
Date: 05/15/09 02:10 pm Title: "God." It sounds like dying.
WOWIE! This was great, so well written. Good job (:
Author's Response: Thank you!! (: