Date: 05/14/09 12:41 am Title: Fake it til you make it!
LOL
Author's Response: ilu
Date: 05/14/09 12:27 am Title: Fake it til you make it!
HAHAHAHA LMAO!!!! XDDD
i cant even breath from my laugh >.<
loved it, how tom was a bit ashamed at the begginin' but totally turned into a sex god at the end
goosh, bill is such a ho XDDDD
poor gustaav, so geeeeil =P
Date: 05/13/09 11:20 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
*howls* I love that old lady.
The sex was good too.
Wait. . . .That sounded REALLY bad. . . o.O
Date: 05/13/09 11:07 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
Ahahahahaha! That was the best ending I have ever read. Wow.
Date: 05/13/09 10:47 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
*___* Cracktastic! So hot and funny at the same.
Caught some minor typos though:
- Bill, had he not been so caught up in his list [maybe "lust"?], would have thunked Tom over the head for the cocky remark.
- Bill’s world wasn’t just rocked, it was flipped upside down and he tried to catch him [his] breath in between moans and desperate pants.
- He could go back to fucking hoards [I think you mean "hordes"] of girls with the confidence that he was the best they’d ever have.
Author's Response: Thank you for the corrections! :D
Date: 05/13/09 10:42 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
“No, I let Kay-1 fuck me in Bushido’s recording studio,” Bill clarified. “I let Bushido fuck me on the hood of his car.”
That. Was pretty much awesome. xD
Poor Gustav! Dentures in his food, and he didn’t even get any of that twincest in his bunk! I loved the old lady, the way you included her reactions to Tom’s words. =) This whole fic was awesome. Funny and hot in the right places.
Tom deciding to stick with Bill was so sweet! ♥
Date: 05/13/09 09:32 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
I loved it!!
Date: 05/13/09 08:51 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
Fuck.
And I'd just gotten over my crack addiction, too.
Date: 05/13/09 08:45 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
Omg! this was just too good. I almost cried because I was laughing so hard:) This is some of the best dialogue written between the two I've ever read. This story had everything in it, I love love LOVED it!
Date: 05/13/09 08:33 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
Awesome ! so happy to read new stuff from u ! and yeah, the last line was just hilarious !!
Date: 05/13/09 08:26 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
Haha! Omg you so rock. :DDD
Date: 05/13/09 08:16 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
damn... poor gusti.. I forgot what the story about imagining Gustav's reaction..
Date: 05/13/09 08:13 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
ahahah, what a finishing line... Lol!!!
I loved this one shot;it was awsome
:D
Date: 05/13/09 08:06 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
XD YESSSS. Eipc win, my love. So hot and totes yummy. But I thought I should point out: All eyes turned to the large buffet near the door where an old lady was hacking into some scrambled eyes. ...I would hope that wasn't deliberate XD Great smutty one-shot, babe! ♥
Date: 05/13/09 07:38 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
That was just excellent and I loved it so much! Great story and it had me laughing so hard!
Date: 05/13/09 07:18 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
I have no idea how you managed to make this sizzling hot and laugh-out-loud hilarious at the same time, but you totally did. Oh my god, I'm still laughing at the last line.
Date: 05/13/09 07:10 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
ROFLMAO!!!
That was so much win! :D
Date: 05/13/09 06:53 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
lololol that was mctastic *___________*
Date: 05/13/09 06:51 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
lol ew ew ew why'd you do that.
there is some great stuff in there, man.
This was the body’s way of fighting incest, by making two sibling’s sweat smell atrocious to the other
oh dear loard i laughed so hard.
Date: 05/13/09 06:47 pm Title: Fake it til you make it!
*standing ovation*
This was hot, hilarious, and...umm...
did I mention HOT? *___*
And poor Gusti xD