Date: 05/12/09 12:03 am Title: It's A Twin Thing
This was cute
Author's Response: thanks
Date: 05/11/09 11:35 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
What a really creative way to write a story: pure dialog. You made it work, and the story was both sweet and sexy. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing it.
Date: 05/11/09 11:10 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
awww... soo cute~~ so much love. with just dialogue... i love it!!
Author's Response: muchas gracias!
Date: 05/11/09 07:18 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
This is one of the best one-shots I've read yet. Without all the unnecessary words, it's just perfect! The dialogue is genius, and it gets across what the characters are feeling and thinking, and I love that. Good job!
Author's Response: Genius! Oh, my. lol Thank you so much for the comment.
Date: 05/11/09 07:03 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
Awww! That was funny, sweet, adorable, and sooo hot ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. =)
Date: 05/11/09 06:59 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
aww that is really cute and mildly hot
Author's Response: =) Thanks!
Date: 05/11/09 06:36 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
I love your all dialogue stories! They're so unique and ironically help me to form better images about what is going on. Probably because I have such free reign when it comes to setting and other such things. And reading a steamy scene in only dialogue was just soooo hot and different! Loved this!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! And I'm glad you were able to form the images. Thank you so much for reading and responding.
Date: 05/11/09 06:23 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
I really liked that this was all dialogue.
Left the actions to the imagination
I could picture it clearly, though.
Author's Response: I pulled it off, then! Thanks so much.
Date: 05/11/09 04:36 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
awwwwww! *huggles* that was adorably beautifully cute and all that good stuff and i loved it
Author's Response: *huggle* YOU are beautifully cute and all that good stuff. Thank you!
Date: 05/11/09 04:34 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
awwww. that was very very very cute ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you very, very, very, very much. =)
Date: 05/11/09 04:15 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
OH! What a wonderful jewel of a fic. Faving, right now. <333
Author's Response: Danke!
Date: 05/11/09 04:12 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
Awww, so cute :) And that was a really original way of writing; I've not read anything like that before :)
Author's Response: I had to read a story with all dialogue in high school, and the style has kind of stuck with me ever since. Thank you so much for reading.
Author's Response: I had to read a story with all dialogue in high school, and the style has kind of stuck with me ever since. Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 05/11/09 04:09 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
That was cute, confusing, but all together, it made me smile.
Author's Response: Making you smile makes me smile. =D
Date: 05/11/09 03:41 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
Wow, this was such a breeze of fresh air! First, it was so cute and sexy, and jsut through dialogue, you managed to give a clear picture of what was happening. It does take a lot of skill to make a dialogue-only fic work, and you did.
And I loved everything either of them said.
Author's Response: Cute and sexy was the goal! I thought their conversation was kind of cute, myself. Thanks!
Date: 05/11/09 03:12 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
I can honestly say that I don't think I've read a story like this before. You did it very well, and the whole thing was completely adorable.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. =)
Date: 05/11/09 03:11 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
Oh my God. Totally loved this. Wow, you should write so much more in his style. You are soooo goooood!
Author's Response: Awww, I'm blushing. I like this style, but I'm afraid there are only so many ways you can go with it. Thank you, though!
Date: 05/11/09 02:58 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
hehe! that was funny :)
and sooo incredibly cute...in a weird way lol
loved it
fern xx
Author's Response: Weird? Weird is good. lol Thanks
Date: 05/11/09 02:55 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
This was so good! I really loved Tom in this. The way he kept telling Bill he loved him and the way Bill reacted to it was just so adorably hot. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I love me an adorable Tom.
Date: 05/11/09 02:54 pm Title: It's A Twin Thing
Even though it's all talk, it's very cute. I liked it;D
Author's Response: Thank you!