Date: 12/21/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
...There's gonna be more, right? I'm kinda addicted to this now. David's not dead, is he? D:
Date: 12/21/09 10:06 pm Title: Two
Hmmmmm This is interesting so far...I can't wait to see where it goes!
Date: 06/03/09 11:55 pm Title: One
Gavi asked me to pass this on ;D
Gavrine- I just read four and five together, and I must say they've gotten exciting. I believe I'm correct when I say I see nuances and hidden things that need watching. The development of Lilith in five was great- I love how you've portayed her. I see a downfall coming. XD Awesome job.
BTW- Have you ever read DIOM or OOF? The way you have Lilith in here reminds me of them...
Author's Response: D; Gavrine was my best reviewer- where'd she go? rnrnWell, Gavrine; I'm glad you though it was exciting. I think it'd cool you picked up the ~nuances! Lilith is so my favorite character. Downfall, you predict? Well. Just for that...rnrnXD And what're DIOM and OOF? Series? Sadly I've never heard of them. Thanks so much for still reading even though...I gues you don't have an account anymore? D;
Date: 06/02/09 11:33 pm Title: Five
OMG! She wants to use Bill, why is he "the one"? What makes him "the one"??? Tell me I wanna know =)
Author's Response: XDDrnBill's the most powerful musician in the world, of course. So his powerful plus her powerful equals....rnrn~_^
Date: 05/23/09 11:47 am Title: Four
thanks for all the comments on my story.
you're is quite good too. :)
please update soon.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks to you, too!
Date: 05/22/09 11:44 pm Title: Four
OMG! What happened to Lily?
Author's Response: *evilish grin* You shall seee...
Date: 05/20/09 09:45 am Title: Three
Aw shucks... I'm glad I encouraged you ^_^
I think the site has been pretty slow with reviews recently... I know i've not been getting many =/... but keep going this is good :D
Author's Response: D; Sorry for that! I think it's cos school's nearly out so everyone's going mental with exams and things. Dunno. But thank you again!^^
Date: 05/19/09 11:40 pm Title: Three
Oh so David does have a soft side too, how cute =p. And I think you're predicition of who will marry first is not far off I can definitley see Gustav being the firt to get married. Anyways can't wait for the next chapter =)
Author's Response: :DD Great minds think alike, yes?^^ Thanks much!
Date: 05/19/09 10:43 pm Title: Three
That was good! I love Gustav and the water balloons, very ingenious. And, I like how real Lily and Dave seem. They're not all, Mary-Sue and her bflike. You're good!
Author's Response: Thanks much! I think as in all authors on this site, I hate MS. She's so bluh!
Date: 05/18/09 04:51 pm Title: Two
Eh, don't beg. It's a good fic, so far. I want to see how this turns into Jost/Bill. Keep going!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 05/17/09 05:54 pm Title: Two
This story, m'dear is far better than the 3 reviews you've gotten so far. It's well written, funny and interesting. It's certainly grabbed my attention! Keep going now, don't leave me waiting ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for saying that! I really appreciate that encouragement! I'll update as much as possible, I promise.^^ Thanks so, so much!
Date: 05/17/09 11:38 am Title: One
Ooo..I really like this so far. So the main pairing is going to be Bill/Jost, right? Interesting. I can't wait to see how this plays out. Update soon. :)
Author's Response: Indeed it will be; just probably not in the way you'd expect. ~_^
Date: 05/17/09 12:52 am Title: Two
Me liked, but I'm a bit confused, did she have a lover or was she just day dreaming?
Author's Response: It's a long-standing joke between her and David. King Arthur is her hero, so she jokes about having a love-affair with him while David's away with the band.^^
Date: 05/11/09 05:26 pm Title: One
Interesting stuff, the summary sounds promising and so does the first chapter. Hope you update soon so I can see how the story develops =)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I was afraid no one was going to take to it. I appreciate you!