Date: 07/02/09 12:12 am Title: Part I, Chapter 15: Through the Phone
Aww I liked the little phone thing. It was cute
Date: 07/01/09 11:59 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 15: Through the Phone
W0W. i REALLY H0PE T0M W0RKS THiNGS 0UT WiTH HiS M0M AND SHE'LL ALL0W HiM T0 SEE BiLL
Date: 07/01/09 06:46 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Seriously, what is Simone's major malfuntion!? Whatever her issues are, she really needs to get over them before she ruins her son's life. Maybe she needs Prozac or Ritalin. Then she would emulate a zombie and leave Tom the hell alone! Grr...
OK, so, please tell me that Bill and Tom are going to stay friends even though Simone is a phsyco-hose-beast. Besides, rules were made to be broken, even the ones parents put over their children.
Date: 06/30/09 09:31 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
oh god. . .
Date: 06/30/09 08:31 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
What a place to leave off. I'm a little nervous about what she's gonna say though . . .
Date: 06/30/09 07:00 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
What is Simone's problem? I just want to scream at her...Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!
Date: 06/30/09 05:13 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Dun-dun-DUNNN. Simone's lost her marbles. Someone find them for her. Amazing chapter, it just ruled. Yay!
Date: 06/30/09 03:52 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Oh man is Simone going to bitch Tom out?
Date: 06/30/09 02:35 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
plzpzlplzplzz update soooon ...i freaking luvz u 2=]=]=]=]]=]=] thx soso much
Date: 06/30/09 12:47 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
YAY GO TOM!
Date: 06/30/09 10:28 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Oh geez, Simone really needs to get a grip and let Bill back into Tom's life.
Date: 06/30/09 08:15 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Well, I don't really care what his mother is thinking or whatever, she's being unfair and unreasonable. :/ She'd better chage her mind for the better or I'll enter the story and give her a good lecture. u_u GAH! I so don't like her character. She's so not helping, it's such a fragile situation! And btw yes, this chapter DID leave me confused. XD
Date: 06/30/09 07:18 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
O.O you don't seem tire by the way, i liked the chap XD
Date: 06/30/09 04:56 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
I feel sorry for Tom... Simone, you evil woman!
Date: 06/30/09 04:32 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Yay!!! This chapter made me happy. I'm glad they are talking and that they are pretty much together.
Simone really needs to let go, why doesn't she want them together? Bill is not forcing Tom to remember things.
Can't wait for the next update, I'm so happy with the fast updates we've been getting.
Date: 06/30/09 03:58 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Hmm I am really enjoying this story so far. The plot idea was brilliant, for sure! I don't really like red-head Bill, but that can be overlooked. They jumped into things pretty quickly, i hope you will give them time to REALLY get to know each other better. This is really great so far! :]
Date: 06/30/09 03:22 am Title: Part I, Chapter 14: Be With You
Fuck off, Simone.
>:O
Date: 06/30/09 02:22 am Title: Prologue: Back to the Beginning
Just rereading the story, figured I'd look at the picture of Bill again, and I started laughing when I did. I've been playing with the same 'dress Bill Up' game, and was about to show you my version of Bill from the story using it, when I realized that he was only like two details different from your Bill XD I've also pretty much made him look depressingly emo but it's so worth it. So, yeah. Just thought to tell you for no reason XD You may continue with your lives
Author's Response: LOL! Well thanks for sharing! n it's fun to mess with. it's actually what inspired this story really. we were messing with it n fell in love with the red. so we were like STORY TIME BETCHES! lol, n that's really cool taht urs was close to ours -goes back to work on next chapter- xx, Ali and Vi
Date: 06/30/09 01:05 am Title: Part I, Chapter 13: Was this Over before it Ever Began?
ahhhhh! :D
Date: 06/30/09 01:01 am Title: Part I, Chapter 12: Overnight Change
eh ._. but andreas is pissing me off :P