Date: 07/02/09 09:28 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Alright, so Andreas really needs a swift kick to the ass. And that Ryan guy should be castrated. They're both jerks. Hey! They should date! They're a match made in Hell!
How can Simone be so blind to her son? She doesn't take anything he says into account, and seems to ignore him! How is that right? Exactly, it's not. Grr, she makes me mad!
Date: 07/02/09 09:22 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 15: Through the Phone
Wow. Maybe, even though Bill said that talking to some guy he didn't know wouldn't help, talking to his family would. I don't care what anyone says, talking really does help. Sometimes, in the verbalizing of what's in your head, you find certain unalienable truths, and are able to root out the lies. Just a thought here, girlies.
I'm so glad that we know a bit more about what's going on with Bill. It helps to see him as a more believable character. Nicely done.
Simone still needs to get over herself.
Date: 07/02/09 09:21 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Yay! I really hope Tom stays with Bill instead of going to Andi's. Cos Andi is a douche.
Date: 07/02/09 08:47 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
keep it comin!
Date: 07/02/09 06:59 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Cuter than puppies. :'D
Date: 07/02/09 06:20 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Still think Tom's mom needs to lighten up and let him hang out with Bill...and yay for Bill letting Tom join the band ^_^
Date: 07/02/09 06:09 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Are you gonna tell what Simone's deal is? Cuz I wanna slap her, hard across the face and leave a handprint...okay, sorry, but great chapters!
Date: 07/02/09 06:09 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Awwww :) that was sweet :) I liked the last line the best, or well the last two :) Cute :) hehehe, and go Tom for fighting with Andi, guy deserved it :) Oh poor Gusti's brother, lol, he got insulted :) Tomi in the band *dances* yea!!
He’d head Andreas say that Tom was supposed to stay at the bleached blond’s that weekend
head to heard? lol, not sure... but hrumph...I don't get why Simone hates Bill so much, he seems so sweet. Except sometimes when he's bitchy but still... :) Tom is sneaking out! :)
Author's Response: Thanks for that! Ja, it was supposed to be "heard". I've fixed it now. :D
Date: 07/02/09 04:48 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
write more please
Date: 07/02/09 04:00 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
Best ever, i love it. Need more soon :*
Date: 07/02/09 03:47 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
000HHH!!! BiLL'S BLUSHiNG
S0UNDS LiKE HE HAS A LiTTLE CRUSH
Date: 07/02/09 03:39 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
aweee.
Date: 07/02/09 03:36 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 16: One Morning, Two Fights, Four Boys
plzpzl update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Date: 07/02/09 03:17 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 4: Hate (I Don't)
poor bill...he has to be going through so much right now and tom has no clue...
Date: 07/02/09 03:04 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 3: We All have a Best Friend
so it begins...
Date: 07/02/09 02:36 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 1:1000 Oceans Wide
interesting...i can't wait until his bought of amnesia breaks...
Date: 07/02/09 02:19 pm Title: Prologue: Back to the Beginning
awesome pic...poor tomi...and bill
Date: 07/02/09 10:48 am Title: Part I, Chapter 15: Through the Phone
I'm with Bill on that whole Hate-the-therapist thing.
Date: 07/02/09 04:43 am Title: Part I, Chapter 15: Through the Phone
Good Bill, just tell him! Lol, i want to be a therapist, and no one can tell me that i don't understand, cuz i've wanted to commit suicide more times than three, but i don't really want that anymore... Well, i just want to help people like me with a rough childhood... lol. This was great! Thank you!
Date: 07/02/09 02:07 am Title: Part I, Chapter 15: Through the Phone
plzplz update sooon thx=]