Date: 07/27/09 02:38 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 22: By Your Side
...awwww. :( That's a bad news... at least I wish Tom was able to stay with his other friend a little more... I'm so sorry for him. :( Why doesn't hs mother open her eyes???
Date: 07/27/09 02:25 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 21: Shocking Mother
O_O WHY THE HELL DIDN'T TOM DEFEND BILL?! HE ISN'T VIOLENT FOR FUCK'S SAKE. He should tell her about hs fucking abuse and THEN she'd just be able to talk. I just can't stand her behaviour... she's acting like she isn't even old enough. She should know before she talked... gahhh!! I am proud of Tom. :)
Date: 07/27/09 01:34 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 20: Lying is Never Good
...I can try to see it in the mother's way,but I still have difficulties with it. I just tink she should talk about it with Tom, instead of taking decisions for him - he's old enough, geez. She's being cruel. But they're so cute together. :)
Date: 07/26/09 10:46 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
ahh im angry at you guys!! :( leaving the chapter like that ahhh! lol
Date: 07/25/09 10:12 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
whoa....
Ryan seems to be a little obsessed with Bill... Hmmmmmmmmmm.
Date: 07/24/09 10:39 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
Damn-it...too short. So is Simone gonna get what's coming to her? Seriously? Anyways, great chapter!
Date: 07/24/09 09:01 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
*SLAP@RYAN* >:O!
Date: 07/24/09 08:33 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
*Keens* Bill . . . .
How long will it take for part II to come out?
Date: 07/24/09 06:45 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
AMAZINGGG! UPDATE
Date: 07/24/09 06:08 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
i like..ryan is a big jerk...at least he's being held at the station...
Date: 07/24/09 05:19 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
Oh, no now what will happen.
Date: 07/24/09 04:21 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
oh lord. this ryan kid is pissing me off :/
Date: 07/24/09 03:48 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
oh god! this was so sweet!
Date: 07/24/09 03:38 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
plplzplzpzl update sooon thx soso much=]=]
Date: 07/24/09 03:21 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
I'm glad you liked the surprise, Alice. I had to think long and hard about it.
Would someone please smack the crap outta Ryan? He's vermin. And Tom doesn't need to feel bad. He did the right thing. If e hadn't gone to get help, it could have ended with BOTH Bill and Tom getting hurt.
Date: 07/24/09 03:20 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 23: At the Park
Hahah, I just finished the previous chapters, and now it was updated again! Yaayyy! xD
Bill is such a good boy for standing up for Tomi :)
Now I cant wait for another update ;)
Date: 07/24/09 02:25 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 22: By Your Side
Ouch! I don't wanna know what Ryan will do now! :O
Anyways. uhm... Yeah. I actually just read all the previous chapters. I love this story. And I hope you can update soon :)
Date: 07/23/09 11:14 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 22: By Your Side
hahaha it seems you guys have a thing for people having crazy colored hair XD and i thought kai was a guy! lol
Date: 07/23/09 11:01 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 22: By Your Side
too bad about being home schoold...that sucks...can't wait for more...
Date: 07/23/09 09:35 pm Title: Part I, Chapter 22: By Your Side
I really hate Simone. Can I kill her? No, that'd probably be bad...but I really really don't like her. Great chapter though!
