Date: 08/12/09 01:22 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
Aw...and Simone's finally coming around, although she still takes the over-protective mom act a bit too far.
Date: 08/12/09 12:01 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
That was sweet Bill & Tom finally have a thing going on between them I am happy about that... Keep up the good work ladies can't wait for more..
Date: 08/12/09 09:19 am Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
:) (small smile) I like this chapter - Bill is slowly starting to break through and its really noticeable. I am glad Tom is okay - nothing serious. Looking forward to the next chapter :)
Date: 08/12/09 07:35 am Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
Oh thank GOD he's alright and out of the hospital, but so sad that an innocent girl had to die! Gah, stupid shit like that happens sadly every day somewhere and it hurts and makes me paranoid and scared like Simone for my own kids. BUT, lovely chapter and it's so sweet to see how much Tom has changed Bill. <3333
Date: 08/12/09 05:45 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
aww Bill and Tom are so cute
Date: 08/12/09 04:10 am Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
Awww! I love it when Tom and Bill are together... They are so cute together and I love it when they kiss and... God, just so sweeeeet!
Date: 08/12/09 03:39 am Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
I almost slapped you both when Simone said she was thinking about moving....But you fixed it so alles gut.
Bill in Tom's hoodies really is the cutest thing ever.
I love how different Bill is now. He's just. . .grown so much where Tom's concerned *snifflessobs* It's so beautiful XD
Date: 08/11/09 07:03 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
hmmmm. I feel something for Simone but, I don't know what . . .
Date: 08/11/09 06:59 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
I LOVE YOU!
Date: 08/11/09 01:00 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
keep it comin!
Date: 08/11/09 12:37 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
ok all is good your not going to hurt now lol ILD
Date: 08/11/09 11:17 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
you got me... almost crying...
Date: 08/11/09 07:20 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
owwwww sooo cute...and Simone can gooo to Hell!!!!
Date: 08/11/09 06:19 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
Aww :(
That was sooo cute. :)
Date: 08/11/09 06:15 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
Awww yay! He's ok :)
Thanks for updating.
xx
Date: 08/11/09 05:53 am Title: Part II, Chapter 33: In the Dark
YES Y0U GUYS ARE SUPER MEAN. H.0.R.R.i.B.L.E. G0D PLEASE PLEASE LET T0M BE 0K. HE CAN N0T DiE.
Date: 08/11/09 02:13 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
OH god! That was like... The sweetest thing EVA! Oh god!
Date: 08/11/09 12:52 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
THANK YOU SO MUCH for NOT putting Tom in room 483. Thank you thank you thank you for that. :D
Author's Response: LOL, that's so overdone. We've done it a few times, but we didn't want to...it's just way too cliche for the already cliche story. Plus, we don't think we'll ever use it in another story ^^ THNX for the review!!! xxAli n Vi
Date: 08/11/09 12:18 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
OMG Finally... Man you have no idea how relieved I am... like physically relaxed relieved... I'm so glad Tom's okay! Oh I feel bad for Simone but eeh, baby's gotta grow up sometime... Much love for this fic
Date: 08/10/09 11:54 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
T-T it was so nerve racking the last few chapters but LOVED them! The ending was sweet n.n