Date: 08/23/09 01:54 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 42: For Me
That.. Slightly surprised me, haha.
Keep writing, though, please. It was a good kind of surprise, :]
Date: 08/23/09 12:02 pm Title: Part II, Chapter 35: Returning Home
Awww. :) I'mglad finally things seem to be turning out for the best... I just wish Bill could really open up to Tom and at least talk a bit more with the others, it'd help him feel wanted... I think he will, though. :)
Date: 08/23/09 11:51 am Title: Part III, Chapter 42: For Me
Awww..so sad... I wonder what he is doing there?
Date: 08/23/09 11:51 am Title: Part II, Chapter 34: Waiting...
:o it must be bad for a mother, who's so attached to her only son, to face the fact that she eventually has to let him go... but I mean, the parents aren't going to live with their children forever, so sooner or later that had to happen... Ugh. I sighed for three minutswhen I read he was okay! YOu held me up...
Date: 08/23/09 11:30 am Title: Part II, Chapter 32: Bang, Bang
O_O WHAT THE FUCK WHY DO YOU HAVE TO MAE ME SO JUMPYYYY if anything happened to Tom he0d just die in less than a few minutes.... shit.....
Date: 08/23/09 11:20 am Title: Part II, Chapter 31: With a Bang
O_O WHAT THE FUCK?! I hope he's going to shoot Andreas or something and not anyone like Bill or Tom, fuck. People are crazy these days....... (btw I like Eric :)
Date: 08/23/09 11:09 am Title: Part II, Chapter 30: Winter Break
Aww it's bad that they're going to be separated for so long, I was actually hoping Bill would confess it all... I don't think he would if he wasn't with Tom... and Ialso hope they won't get like, distant if not constantly together. o_o goshhh
Date: 08/23/09 10:56 am Title: Part II, Chapter 29: Belonging
AWWWWWWWWWWW OMG OMG OMG I'm like cheering over here and fangirlinggg. *_* I'm SO happy they finally kind of got clearer with each other about that. :) I dont' know what will happen when Bill pours the shitload of stuff that had happened to him, though... just hell will happen. Shit...
Date: 08/23/09 10:46 am Title: Part II, Chapter 28: Scared to Love You
D: omggg I can't believe what the poor soul had gone through! I can totally understand him now... I so feel for him. D: But I'm sure Tom won't do anything to make it bad, RIGHT???
Date: 08/23/09 10:36 am Title: Part II, Chapter 27: What Do You See?
O_O was Bill pushing him awayyyyyyyyyy? *schreeches* WHAAAT! It's been all candy clouds and sugar and then-..omg...
Date: 08/23/09 10:25 am Title: Part II, Chapter 26: Back with a Change
Ahah, I loved the fact that people cheered when they kissed! :) I'm glad Tom's mom finally understood how much they mean to each other and let Tom go to Bill... still I don't think everything's bright already... let's see where this goes! I've been neglecting the updates for a while, so now I'm back reading it in a rush! :)
Date: 08/23/09 07:47 am Title: Part III, Chapter 42: For Me
heyyyy that's surprising!!!!
Date: 08/23/09 04:36 am Title: Part III, Chapter 42: For Me
O_O....EH?!?
Date: 08/23/09 02:39 am Title: Part III, Chapter 42: For Me
"The teen broke off with a sigh and closed his eyes, tipping his down a little." you guys missed a word here.
“Wait, let me go with you,” replied Tom with a frown as he instinctively grabbed a hold of Tom’s wrist. do you mean he grabbed Bill's wrist?
These are only 2 of the things I found. You guys might want to go back through it when your eyes are all the way OPEN and read through it again, fix a few things.
Other than that, it was great. WHy did he go to Tom's grandparents?
Date: 08/23/09 12:31 am Title: Part III, Chapter 41: Fucking with His Head
Can I punch Andreas? Just once? Please?
Anyways, pretty good chapter.
Date: 08/22/09 10:24 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 41: Fucking with His Head
Andreas is a jackass -.-' update soon =)
Date: 08/22/09 07:11 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 41: Fucking with His Head
plz update soon thx=]
Date: 08/22/09 06:29 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 41: Fucking with His Head
The banner is hot, girlies. Love the streaks, and it's like Tom's leaning against him, or like looking over his shoulder. Totes spiff.
Andreas needs to have his neck stepped on. I hate him.
Date: 08/22/09 06:23 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 41: Fucking with His Head
That boy is EVVVVILLLL I tell ya !!! (I love to say that) Nice come back.. LOve the banner :)
Date: 08/22/09 05:49 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 41: Fucking with His Head
I'm so waiting for Andreas to take a short walk, long pier. That should solve that problem.
Love the banner!!!!