Date: 08/30/09 01:37 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 49: Not Feeling
I hate Ryan. Right now, I hate Bill, too. No one can make you feel anything without your consent. And obviously, Ryan didn't exactly force himself on Bill. Bill left with him, more or less willingly. I think I just lost alot of respect for him.
I can totally identify with Tom in these last few chapters.
Would it be cheating if I used the same thing I said for last chapter's homework? lol. Well, I can't remember the exact line, but I know it was said when Tom was arguing or something with Simoe, and he said something like, I'm an adult now, you can't tell me what to do. Sorry, that's the best I could come up with...
Date: 08/30/09 01:27 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
I never thought I'd say it, but Bill is a dumb shit. Why would he do that? I can understand what it's like to be scared and all that, but seriously, it just boggles my mind to think that Bill returned the kiss. Dipshit.
Um, i don't know if I can say I have a favorite chapter. They were all amazing, and thi story is woven together so wonderfully that to pick just one would be practically sinful. How's that?
Date: 08/30/09 01:25 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 49: Not Feeling
please we don't want to see them separate!!! please do something!!! O_____O XD
continue!!
Date: 08/30/09 01:23 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 49: Not Feeling
please we don't want to!!!!!!
Date: 08/30/09 01:15 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 49: Not Feeling
Ehh... Ryan had made him forget the night before.
OH! And bending in Ryan's every will!
Ugh. It's just soooooo sad that Tom wouldn't talk to Bill. It'd work out soon, right? RIGHT? T_T
Date: 08/30/09 01:01 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 49: Not Feeling
“Thank you,” “If you hadn’t done what you did, if I hadn’t been so terrified and done what you wanted me to…I may have not been where I am now. Through everything…even if I’m still fucked up, torn inside, I’m still the better person. And I’m stronger than you’ll ever know. I just can’t believe it took me coming here and facing you to realize…you’re nothing.”
- That line right there, I really can't pin point EXACTLY why, but it just sticks out to me. [Along with the 'How can I .. line] I think it has alot to do with the strength it took for Bill to confront them, but also thank them for making him who he is today.
Review: Amazing chapter as usual!! I could just FEEL the emptiness Bill is feeling....
Date: 08/30/09 12:54 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 49: Not Feeling
haaaaaa...but why????...he doesn`t like him but kisses him???....well luv your story anyway....update soon.
Date: 08/30/09 11:15 am Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
I haven't done my homework. because I came in late. and a late response doesn't make since. SOOOO. I liked....the ones where Bill stood up to people. That's true power. to be able to stand up to someone and not punch them, and simply talk to them calmly, to not respond to their bribes, their jesting and teasing, self control and confidence. I liked the ones where Bill and Tom got somethen goen on....when they made steps forward. it showed you that Bill wasn't always going to be stuck in his cold hard shell....
this last one was horrid however. the writing and everything was great, you said everything perfectly...but it made me mad, that does mean you did a good job though so.... but I hated that you had to do that. Tom needs to calm down and realize "hey....why would he do that, he was upset, there's a restraining order, it was probably a reaction....shit I'm stupid" and what's gonna happen to bill and tom if bill goes to Florida?
Date: 08/30/09 04:43 am Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
all the chapters ;) great story! poor tom. :(
Date: 08/30/09 03:37 am Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
my favorite chapter is 28, scared to love you, because it is a real breakthrough for bill. What is your favorite chapter and why? really good job on this chapter... i don't hate you! I hope Tom and bill work it out soon
Date: 08/30/09 02:04 am Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
I'd have to say my favorite chapter is probably "I Will Remember You" cuz that's really the first time Tom stands up to Simone...hmm or maybe "Getting Through" cuz Gordon kinda lets Simone have it.
This chapter was good btw
Date: 08/29/09 11:59 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
I cant do the homework D= My dog ate it.
Date: 08/29/09 11:43 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
well, mmmmmmm well when bill say everything to ryan and andreas and the bullies!!!!! but please donīt make the life of bill more difficult!!!!!!!!!!!1 XD
please let bill be happy with tom!!! XD
continue continue!!! XD
Date: 08/29/09 11:20 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
I loved the chapter when Bill goes to his old high school!
Date: 08/29/09 11:13 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
1st: THANK YOU for the dedication!! :hugggles:
2nd: Homework time - Personally I have quit a few .. but I am only allowed to pick one .. so I am going to go with Ch. 44 - Let Go. Only b/c that is the chapter Bill knew he was going to be okay. He knew he could move on, open up to Tom, and be happy. He didn't need all those who hurt him in his past, and that he would be okay. He knew he had Tom, regardless of EVERYTHING, he had Tom. And that alone, well, was all he REALLY needed. So, there. You have my favorite chapter (so far). [..but I am sure that will change with the upcoming chapters.]
3rd: Review - I LOVE IT!! I love how it turned out. Even tho - yeah the ending was sad, but I have confidence that something will be worked out. It'll take time. And lots of it. But it'll eventually come out alright.
Date: 08/29/09 11:01 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
My fav chapter would be the one where Tom got shot because I love that Tom gets hurt..for some weird reason :/
Date: 08/29/09 10:59 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
OMG, is all I can say..Why did Bill have to hurt tom like that... This chapter is my favorite because this is when Tom sees something he never should have...I wonder what will happen when they have that get together...POOR TOM!
Date: 08/29/09 10:36 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 48: Fucking Up
i rly like bill..but also tom..lolz obviously those 2...there so adorable..plz fix thiz...make tomi and billa better thx sosos much=]
Date: 08/29/09 08:06 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 47: Kerrigan
Ummm... mine is... Liam!!!! Just kidding... mine's Tom.... und Gustav!!!!
Date: 08/29/09 05:29 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 47: Kerrigan
plzplzplzlz update soon thx=]