Date: 09/08/09 11:00 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 55: Getting Better
=] plz update soon. k thnx...
LOL, just kidding! I heart this story... so I must ask, will there be a continuation? I mean, y'all have ALOT on your plates, and all...but still.
I'm just sayin, I'm still reeling from the other day, when Tom got all kinds of mess'd up...
I was in TSOAS (Tragic State of Affairs Shock...)
Date: 09/08/09 10:55 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 55: Getting Better
Love this chapter I hope everything works out for Tomi & Billa no more bad thing okay or I will kill you both while your sleeping..lol
Date: 09/08/09 10:31 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 55: Getting Better
plz update sooon thx=]=]
Date: 09/08/09 10:22 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 55: Getting Better
More sooon PLEASE
Date: 09/08/09 05:31 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
i really loved the chapter, i love suspense
Date: 09/08/09 03:41 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
yayyyyyyyyyyyy~~~~~~~~~~ ok this feels really weird.....what kinda review hw IS this? huh? ok well whatever, MORE MORE MORE!
Date: 09/08/09 11:57 am Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
BASTARD!!!!!!!!
*grins* I love this story! poor billa and all hes been through thank god for tomi though. i dont know what bill would have done with out him.
O.o wait tomi may not have survived without billa so they are even...
question!: can i kill ryan? pretty please?
Date: 09/08/09 11:48 am Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
That's totes not fun homework. You have no idea how long that took me XD
Date: 09/08/09 12:31 am Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
*starts patting head*
O.o wow that was shocking !
that was difficult!
Date: 09/07/09 07:08 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
No review, just an errant thought; I wonder if theres gonna be a trial for Ryan... or if you guys'll be evil and let him go scot-free.
Also, is Tom a Hemophiliac?
Just, ya know, wonderin', cause that would probably be a great reason for Tom's mother to be all 'OMGNOGOINGNEARANYTHINGSHARPERTHANAPITOFMARSHMALLOWS!!@!!1@#@$!'
and I think once you mentioned him bruising as easily as a month-old pear.
o_O
By the way.., I stopped patting my head after the first sentence xD
Author's Response: LOL. Yes, he is a hemophiliac. lol. n that's y simone is all 'OMGNOGOINGNEARANYTHINGSHARPERTHANAPITOFMARSHMALLOWS!!@!!1@#@$!' as you put it! ^^
Date: 09/07/09 05:09 am Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
he's alive he is aliive!!! *makes happy face*you guys rock! keep up the great work!!
Date: 09/07/09 01:37 am Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
Great chapter :D
Date: 09/07/09 01:35 am Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
thanks!!! it was amazing!!!! XD thanks!!!! continue!!!
Date: 09/06/09 11:33 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
asdfghjkl. this is harder tan i thougt.
Date: 09/06/09 10:09 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
aww poor tomi and poor billa.
Date: 09/06/09 10:08 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
That was interesting I hope everything works out for them for the better no more Tom in hospital you hear...lol
Date: 09/06/09 10:05 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
Slight Mistake: Light from the streetlights flashed across the teen’s face as they small family made : they - the. :)
Homework: Hell half the time I'm cradling a toddler while typing one handed XD.
Review: Loved it!! So happy to see that Tom is alright:) And poor Bill, that boy needs a vacation from life.
Date: 09/06/09 10:05 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
plz update soon lolz i feel stupid pttin my hea lolz=]
Date: 09/06/09 09:59 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
*wipes forehead.*
Whew!
Date: 09/06/09 09:48 pm Title: Part III, Chapter 54: Donation
alright here geos nothing. dude, i have music playing, and my hands are moving in time to the beat.
i can't use the shift key for some reason... prolly cuz i can't stretch my fingers that far, lol
why is ryan fine? why couldn't he be in the hospital too, bleeding out, laying in a pool of blood, while everyone runs around with no idea what to do for him? in fact, i think he should be there, being cared for by an inexperienced doctor and nurse, and they accidentally give him something that he's allergic too. it would only be fitting, really.
my head hurts, lol, from hitting myself.