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Reviewer: Rockrchickk65 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/09 07:51 pm Title: Beautifully Broken

It’s like where I first met Bill ...

Don't you mean Tom?

Once he is out I climb off him, pulling his tight leather pants off as I move.

Why is Tom wearing tight leather pants? lol

Author's Response: Well, why can't Tom wear leather pants? I know he doesn't have cornrows in this fic but he could look quite hot in tight leather with his hair... but yeah... why stick to thier 'Tokio Hotel' outfits when there's tons more out there? =DrnrnAnd yeah, you're right, it should be Tom XDrnThanks for reading, thoughrnrnHoshi xXx

Reviewer: foxypunx Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 09:11 pm Title: Beautifully Broken

Wow... That was very vivid and scary. But in a good way. I give you props for that one. But... wow...

Reviewer: SarahCupcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 07:33 am Title: Beautifully Broken

Wow...those thoughts are something aren't they? lolz
I really liked this, and you say you got it from a fic? Where can I find that at? lolz

You might want to consider writing your own vamp fic, I bet you'd be good. :)
Really well done.

Author's Response: Eeep, sorry for the confussion~~ This was my own fic, I just re-wrote it again lolrnrnBuuuut if you really wanna read the original (which is not different from this except the characters are Sho and Kei) then the linkage is...rnrnhttp://www.fanfiction.net/s/4405232/1/Deceptive_Looks_To_KillrnrnBut I'm glad you enjoyed it =DrnrnHoshi xXx

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