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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/24 10:41 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Thank you for your story. d23;b1;p2;p3;p3;p3;p3;p9;p9;p9;p9;·v5;h4;·ོɁp1;p3;p3;p3;p3;p9;p9;p9;p9;d23;

Reviewer: Hobby101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/12 09:35 am Title: Strawberry Silver

Sequal! :-P

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/11 12:39 am Title: Strawberry Silver

Omg this is fucking awesome! I love it xDD

Reviewer: rosietoes Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/11 06:00 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

Please please PLEASE continue writing this story! This is amazing!!!

Reviewer: Aquarose Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/23/11 01:11 am Title: Strawberry Silver

that was funny...i enjoyed...strangling a corpse...insulting bill...and the conversation between him and the wife was hilarious...i think there should be a sequel if there isn't already...

Reviewer: LuneBleue Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/10 08:50 am Title: Strawberry Silver

Incredible. I have no words. It's amazingly well written. I love it.

Author's Response: thank you, darling :)

Reviewer: AndBillWasLikeWhoaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/10 02:56 am Title: Strawberry Silver

Aww , this was amazingly written.
Yes , make a sequel!

Author's Response: aw, thanks! I'm doing a series on the 7 Deadly Sins, actually, and this is one of them. So it's 'sort of' ...sequel-ing? o.o

Reviewer: Trauemer36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/10 02:43 am Title: Strawberry Silver

Lol. You're my hero on this site. I love your writing style. Your dark humor. Mainly everythingyou write. Gah i look up to your writing because it's so descriptive and real and your plots are amazingly unique. You're my hero, i tell you. I love this.
--jilly

Author's Response: Woahh, that's so cool. It made me feel all warm on the inside knowing that someone really cares about my writing :D Thank you so much, darling.

Reviewer: Atlantis Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 01:50 am Title: Strawberry Silver

I really enjoyed this! So dark and funny! Loved all the characters and their conversations.

Really great story! :D

Author's Response: Thank you darling :D

Reviewer: Blackout Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 01:16 am Title: Strawberry Silver

haha this made me laugh. Greed, what a horrible thing. now i shall read the next part!!

Author's Response: Oh yay :3

Reviewer: wintryair Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/20/10 09:04 am Title: Strawberry Silver

Wow. What a breath of fresh air. I know, odd thing to say, given the subject material. But it's sleazy, funny, and sharp--with just a hint of sweetness--and I haven't seen anything like it in a while. I've never had good luck ordering cocktails, dahling, but I'll be coming back to your bar if your other drinks are mixed as well as this one.

Author's Response: You are so sweet xD I'm really glad you enjoyed it

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/10 02:45 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

I loved this! It's funny.. Wow, I sound a bit morbid when saying that. But then again, I guess I am :p Loved the story, and the series you're doing, with the 7 sins, is just genious!

Author's Response: Thankyouuuu~ I just love reading different-ish stories. They're fun xD

Reviewer: sodapop90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/04/10 08:34 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

this is definitively one of my favs
loved the papers that u gave to each and everyone of the characters
how u described 'em an all

Author's Response: Thankyouthankyouthankyou!

Reviewer: jamikaulitz483 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/09 09:47 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

XDDDDDDDD

I had a feeling the dead guy would donate his money.
Lmfao, I imagined everybodys reaction in my head, and it was absolute BRILLIANCE.

Goooood job!

Author's Response: xD Good hunch, dear!

Reviewer: xXx7xXx Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/09 04:15 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

this totally reminds me of The Tokio Hotel, you know that game that's out now? haha totally made me crack up though. sequel fersure! :)

Author's Response: Ohh, I refuse to play that game xD I get stuck on stupid parts too easily, haha.

Reviewer: thekiaa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/09 04:31 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

i think there should be a sequel quite frankly.

Author's Response: A sequel? o.o Hmm...I've been thinking about that, actually. Maybe :)

Reviewer: XRealityUnknownX Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/09 06:32 am Title: Strawberry Silver

I know i say this on pretty much everything of yours i read but WOAH! you never fail to give me chills. All in all a fucking good oneshot. i shall now bow down to your epic one shot writy-ness. *bows down* i am not worthy! i am not worthy! i am not worthy!
okay, ya, so, love Bill...
you know what the weirdest part is? I can imagine all this happening, it's just so awesome and visual gratifying... special bill/tom scene *g* yay..

Author's Response: yay! Slutty Bill is SO much fun to write, you have no fucking idea :D He's gorgeous and he's amazing, and he has a nice ass x) what more can a person ask for? WOO! I'm glad you enjoy my stories! :)

Reviewer: TimeReaper Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/09 06:59 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

I must be frank and honest here... I spent the entire chapter laughing my ass off! I have an extremely dark sense of humor and this was fucking perfect!!! You have a talent, I'll say that much!!!!

To be even more honest, I almost wasn't going to read this story because I didn't find the banner too interesting...

But I'm SOOOOOOO glad I did!!!

In the terms of a sequel, I think that it's perfect as is. To me, the story is told. but you're the writer, if you find a sequel, write it! I'll definitely read it. ;)

Take care!

Author's Response: Yeah, I have a habit of picking stories to read because of the banner xD That's why I try to make the banners a little prettier-- but I really didn't have time for this one ._. I'm so glad you like this! There's not much dark humor on this site [Kay, Twilight type Vampires ARE NOT DARK. Grr] and I wanted to add more :)

Reviewer: NTHFneko Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/09 10:16 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

That was just so funny. I just loved Bill's lines in this!

Author's Response: Haha, I just love BILL! xD Thanks so much!~

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 06:22 pm Title: Strawberry Silver

I just try and blaock things out or jsut my natural instinct HIDE! I wish he was... He totally changed his look once i put that dresson him >.> the girls still like him its fab but iwant a guy too >..> Its my =fave name.

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