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Reviewer: redflowergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1

liked it ^__^

Author's Response: Thanks ;D

Reviewer: dkdemon Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1

jay! another great chapter.... I neeeeeed more:0)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 09:20 am Title: Chapter 5

ohhh jealous billy
nice chappie

Reviewer: DieLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 09:11 am Title: Chapter 5

I like it. A LOT! :D

Reviewer: th4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 08:33 am Title: Chapter 5

oh...when your hand gets better...i would want more..really i am getting hooked to this story...;p

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 08:23 am Title: Chapter 5

oh my... so is it all over girls????? or does... like... bill reveal his feelings and tom pushes him away calling him an effing perv???????? =] this story makes me happy.

Reviewer: staa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 08:21 am Title: Chapter 5

I just can say this: "I WANT MORE!".
God, I NEED more! xD

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 07:59 am Title: Chapter 5

amazing!!! and ooohh! jealous bill! I wonder why! lol
cant wait to see another one done!
this is so one of my favorites!
goddamn well written! =) GOOD JOB!!!! xD

Reviewer: nekoneko Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 07:53 am Title: Chapter 5

ok... it's getting better and better. hope your wrist gets better soon, cause I want to read more. But have fun till the end of the year anyhow :D

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 07:45 am Title: Chapter 5

aww Bill keep at it. i love how they are back together but i wish we knew how they became friends again. any ways great chapter thanks for updateing, what happened to ur wrist??

Author's Response: It was just overworked, I guess... Thanks for reading :D

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 07:39 am Title: Chapter 5

oh, it was so short =[ , i'm waiting more, couldn't get anything out of it yet :D

Reviewer: Mein_9_leben Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 07:18 am Title: Chapter 4

NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY WERE JUST BECOMING FRIENDS!!!!!!!! YOU NEED SOME MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS- I CAN BARLEY HOLD IN MY EXITMENT!!

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 05:07 am Title: Chapter 4

no....i want them to be violent
to make wild sex
not to be nice with each other
ii really want a scene...and maybe after to be sweeet

this is great hun ,please continue

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 01:34 am Title: Chapter 4

homggggghhhh!fuck thats so good that i cant fucking commmeenntt!
O_O
I WANT MOOOORE !

Reviewer: lovehatehero Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/07 12:47 am Title: Chapter 4

AHH!! i loved it.

like crazy bad.

I enjoy the idea of Bill being the leader of a gang.. And fighting. its rather adorable. :D

More?
Please?

Reviewer: billliebttom Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/07 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ah, no! Don't end it there! D:
I want more, this story is great!

Reviewer: UV_R Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/07 11:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

noooo i want them to talk!!!
Bill, don't be an idiot! the hate will turn to love! (okay I'll shut up now) great chapter!

Reviewer: KatieKaulitz Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/07 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 4

Um.
Wow this is a good story.
Is weird in a good way, y'know?
Please post more
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Reviewer: Frozen Reapper Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/27/07 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 4

You better come back as soon as you can xD FAST!!!

Reviewer: el_gardner Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/07 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 4

God, these boys have issues! This chapter was cute, it showed that they can work together when they don't think about it. They're very frustrating! Love this story, its very original, can't wait for more!

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