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Reviewer: pieismyluv121995 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

woohooo!!! yea!!!too much candy!!!go georg and his sexy ass or self!!!still luvin it!!!

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks ^^

Reviewer: onemorefanfortheroad Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 9

ahh the flashbacks make me want to cry but the fact it's kind of half getting resolved in the present is a nice way to cut through the bitteness
very clever!
just don't do yourself an injury.

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 02:06 pm Title: Chapter 9

omg no way u can't stop here
i need more...i want the next chapter now....
tom's hugging bill...O.o
i hope it'll be more than that
wild sex baby

Reviewer: DieLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 9

I actually love this story so much. It should definately be next featured (H) it is really original and just generally brilliant. More soon yeah?

Author's Response: Wow! You think? Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 9

Wait WHAT !? OMG o.O This is just great, it's really sad, I wish the two of them could work this shit out, you write very good ! I love this story, kinda different from other stories (In a GOOD way) and it really makes me addicted XD I read this before and then I forgot to review, I'm just 17 and signs of oldness is already starting to show LOL, ehm sorry for the wierd review XD But I love this story great work :D

Author's Response: Nah, don't be! I love weird and different reviews :P Thanks! :D

Reviewer: staa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 01:26 pm Title: Chapter 8

Well, at least you addmited that you're evil! Poor Tomi! I laugh when he said "It's too late to apologize.", I hope I wasn't the only one who started singing "Apologize" - Timbaland.
Great chapter

Author's Response: I was actually listening to that song when I wrote it (a)rnThanks :D

Reviewer: MagicalGirl379 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 9

New chapter??? It's great!!!

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 9

aw damn it!!! you always have to leave it in a cliffhanger!!! arghhhh
update soon!!!!!!

Reviewer: TomKaulitzFaanForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

^^ Tom is cute when he is serious!
Update:D

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 11:59 am Title: Chapter 9

FUCKIN AWESOME!!!!! please more!!! this is a clear 10!! but if it was higher than 10 u would get it.. fuckin brilliant!!!please more

Reviewer: KeepTheFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 11:46 am Title: Chapter 9

LOVE this story... It just keeps gettin' better and better...

Reviewer: EmmaKafrum Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 11:46 am Title: Chapter 9

OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!!! YOU DID IT!!! I COULDNT BELIEVE MY EYES!!! LOOL
I thought you were kidding when you said to me to stay quiet! lol
I never thought you could really put them on a locked room! xD
great! nice nice nice. lol
good job by the way! REALLY good job! x)

Author's Response: Haha! I was actually just considering it, then I read your review and I just had to do it :PrnrnTell me if it was too lame, though :P

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 11:41 am Title: Chapter 9

holy crap, im dead. this is so good. i need more.

Reviewer: UV_R Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 11:41 am Title: Chapter 9

oh! finally! lets see some lovin'!!
(lol its great!)

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 11:14 am Title: Chapter 8

oh why do you have to make them so short???????
please update soon!

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 10:28 am Title: Chapter 8

asdfsafsagasf nooooo you left it there!! how could you do that to me?! haha. sheesh.. bill was an ass.

=] great job again, i love it.

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 09:48 am Title: Chapter 8

oooooo!!
eep! i dont know waht to say!!!
UPDATE!!!!
xoxoxox

Reviewer: CrashintoYou Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 09:40 am Title: Chapter 1

woah! love it!
you're such a good writer :D

Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 09:23 am Title: Chapter 8

mwih! This is just so good! But it always ends too soon XD And I just sit around here waiting for more, haha, I love it :D

Reviewer: el_gardner Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/30/07 08:58 am Title: Chapter 8

Oh poor Tom! I love how you peel back the layers with each chapter and you get a little more insight into the actions of the characters as the story progresses! Love it, more soon ;D

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