Date: 06/23/09 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 23
hmm, i really liked the story, but i found the ending a bit disappointing... sorry hun :)
Author's Response: It's OK :) Glad you liked what was before :p
Date: 06/21/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 23
omg i was reading this and i guess i didnt realize how fast i was and i thought there was somehing wrong with my computer when i didnt see the "next" button!
Author's Response: Haha ;D How funny :)
Date: 06/17/09 08:05 am Title: Chapter 1
wow, ive never read anything like this!! xD so unique!!
Date: 05/30/09 07:27 am Title: Chapter 23
Ohmygad, Bill died O_O I can't get over it.. And.. TOM was the one killing him! O: but yeah, the doctors saved him, so it's okay xD
Gad, very much drama in this fic.. O.o I feel bad for both twins.. x_X AND.. Dereck was Gordon's twin! wow, I'd never seen that coming.. xD
buuut, the end was so sweet! And it must have been great to start over again, leaving all the shit behind.. They totally deserved it, and I'm so happy you decided to write this ending.. ^^
Date: 05/17/09 09:12 pm Title: Chapter 23
Stupid Georg. Backstabbing ass-hat!!
Date: 05/17/09 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is really good. You might wanna get a beta reader, though. But it's still really good!
Author's Response: It's so old, I didn't even know what a beta reader was back then ;p But thanks!
Date: 04/14/09 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
PFFFF! Lap pinky!AHAHAHAHAHA XD
Author's Response: :D
Date: 04/09/09 03:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Daaamn, I wonder why they became enemies
all of the sudden.
Date: 04/09/09 03:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Daaaamn... This story is wow.
Date: 03/14/09 12:21 am Title: Chapter 23
WAH!
am still not over it, ALVASONDA!
why won't you published a book??
you're such A ONE-OF-A-KIND authur
in twisting stories and all!
i'll for sure BE ONE OF YOUR NO.1 FAN BUYER.WAHH!
AFTER WRITTING THIS COMMENT,
am planning to read the WHOLE damn FIC OF YOURS!
wah!
iiiiiii ssssssooooooooooooo LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE ITTTTTTTTTT!
MORE FICS OF YOURS please;):):):):)
Author's Response: Okei, so I'm blown away xD I don't know what to say, really. My dream IS to publish a book, so I love the encouragement xD Thank you so much! :D
Date: 03/14/09 12:14 am Title: Chapter 23
alvasonda!
THIS...IS...SUCH...A FUCKING ORIGINAL ONE-OF-A-KIND FICT!
THAT IS SOOOO WORTHY---AS IN SOOO WORTHY TO BE FEAUTURED!
FANTASTIC!
THE DRAMA, the whole jail2 thing, the violence stuff and all, the LOVE AFFAIR BETWEEN BILL AND ANDREAS---AND MOST OF ALL TOM AND BILL!
Bravo!
bravo!
bravO!
YOUR IMAGINATION is way UNCOMPARRABLE, dud!
i SALUTE YOU!
*freak out*
WAH!
more ficz:):):)
please include andreas and bill pairing ,please, on your other fics---and make TOM so DEADLY FUCKING JEALOUS!---we just LOVE IT!
anyhow,
anycow,
1 word,..
magnificent;)
Date: 02/21/09 08:28 am Title: Chapter 23
Amazing story. I can't believe their so called friends turned on them. I'm glad that they wont have to deal with any of that drama again and that they have someone like Gordon that gets them. I felt so bad for Tom for most of the story because to me it seemed like he was the one that people blamed for everything. Anyways I loved it.
Date: 02/21/09 08:11 am Title: Chapter 21
I could breathe again lol I was so nervous when Gordon saw them.
Date: 02/21/09 08:04 am Title: Chapter 20
Oh noooooooo Gordon saw.
Date: 02/21/09 07:55 am Title: Chapter 19
When Bill said Tom's name my jaw just dropped... that was so good.
Date: 02/21/09 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG I love it already. I read and I could picture them perfectly.
Date: 01/18/09 09:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
fysicaly-physically; thoug-though
Author's Response: Written without spellcheck and before I knew what a beta-reader was :p
Date: 01/05/09 10:20 am Title: Chapter 23
Alvie? I had the urge to read this for the 5th time and you know what? I'll never get tired of it. This is such an amazing story and I'm very proud of you!
Date: 12/24/08 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Tomi had hurtful words in the past! Very hurtful! I'm glad to see they're starting to work it out now.
Date: 12/24/08 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 8
the truth was that.... Tom still loved Bill. More than a brother. - duh-duh-dunnnnn