Date: 01/02/08 12:10 am Title: Chapter 11
*walks to officer and kicks him. Grabs Toms wrist and pulls him back to Bills room. Grabs Simones wrist and pulls her out of the room*
Let them have a moment alone, okay?
Kiss, kiss!!!
*chant* ^^
Go on, can't wait!!!
Date: 01/01/08 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 11
please continue...it's getting so good... just continue...
Date: 01/01/08 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 11
WTF MAN????!!!!! THAT IS SO SUDDEN BUT SO GOOD!!!!!YOU HAVE TO UPDATE BUT THIS ENDING FOR THE CHAPTER MAKES IT SEEM AS IF ITS GONNA BE HARD FOR YOU TO CONTINUE IT.BTW DOES SOMEONE REALLY GO TO JAIL FOR THAT AS IN WHAT HAPPENED TO TOM WHERE YOU KILL SOMEONE THAT LATERS COME TO LIFE?????????SRRY 4 MY SIMPLENESS BUT I JUST WONDER THESE THINGS.........BUT BESIDES THAT POST UP ANOTHER CHAPPIE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I read somewhere that murder is murder as long as the victim has been dead for 10 minutes or longer :PrnYes, it is very hard to continue on this one. I got complete writer's block. But I am working on another fic to get it away :)
Date: 01/01/08 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 11
nooo tom cant go to jail!
Date: 01/01/08 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
AAH WTF!!! noo!! dont let them take tom away! i'm crying here! please!! i beg you.. dont take him away!!! good chapter!
Date: 01/01/08 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 11
ah im crying so much! is tomi really going to jail?! nooooooooo!!! he cant...he just cant... T.T
update soon? i wanna know if tom and bill ever get together!!
[Sagey]
Date: 01/01/08 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 11
Neptunsie... that was not a crappy chappy! i liked it.. besides that i want them to be happy again. ...*sniffle* tomi.... oh, and good use of the title in the last line. =]
Date: 01/01/08 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
OMG!!!! you did great!!! but wait a minute... tom was the one slashing him with a knife??? omg...! o.O
well, I must say, you did GREAT, I coulnt do it any better myself!!! xD
and tom getting arrested.. god! i didnt expected it at ALL!
well, my heart broke. ARE YOU HAPPY NOW???!!! lol poor tom...
he's guilty...but FUCK..that was...wow...
well, a few days in prison cant kill. lol (trying to be cruel)
I CANT!!! x'D poor tomi! poor billy! (cries)
poor me! finding out this update..tom being arrested..bill's death..or almost death..!!! (love that part)
I hate(love) you!
xD
Date: 01/01/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
please update! Tom can't go to jail! Bill has to find a way to get him out and then go back to the way they were before the baggs and the sprays!
Date: 01/01/08 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
too good!!! this story is SO good!!! *cries*
Date: 01/01/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 11
=O toms a minor so he cant go to jail & its manslaughter. Or attempted murder. But regardless, it was a Fucking great chapter. Tom actually cant go to prison. Fact. He and bill are getting together. -_- FIX IT. And update soon, you know i bum this story
Author's Response: Juvenile Jail. And I'm using other rules than the ones in the UK. I think :P
Date: 01/01/08 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 11
awwww god!!!
UPDATE!!!!
xoxox
Date: 01/01/08 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh my god.. I can't say anything..
Date: 01/01/08 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 11
allright,only one thing to say...you have to write more soooooooonXD
Date: 01/01/08 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 11
Poor Bill, poor Tomi! *hugs*
This was so sad and heart-breaking. And it WASN'T a crappy chappy!!! I really liked it. ^__^
Author's Response: Really? Urgh, I felt so bad writing it, so thanks... :)
Date: 01/01/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 11
they cant just take him away..can they??? :( i guess they can...update soon i want to know how it continues...dnt end it here
Date: 01/01/08 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 11
wow this is sooooooo good!!! im totally hooked!!! please update soon!!!!!
Date: 01/01/08 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 11
*BAWLS*
T-tom tom MURDERED HIM !? WTF !!!
They crossed the fine line too late, omg that last line was so
Date: 01/01/08 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
:O OMG! I think I'm addicted to this story... LOL