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Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 09:31 am Title: Chapter 14

awh, this is impossibly good!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 09:22 am Title: Chapter 14

Just great ! Love it! :D

Reviewer: deepshadows87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 09:22 am Title: Chapter 14

I love this :D

Reviewer: DieLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 09:21 am Title: Chapter 14

=O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O =O :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D i think just about sums this chapter up (H)

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 04:40 am Title: Chapter 13

awww!!!
oooo!!! damn what do i say?
updae as soon as you can!!
xoxox

Reviewer: billsgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 04:33 am Title: Chapter 13

ahhhhhh! I can't wait to read more! This story is awesome!!!

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 03:58 am Title: Chapter 13

T_T
This is so good! You write so well !!!

Reviewer: annie Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 02:16 am Title: Chapter 13

oh god.

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/03/08 01:21 am Title: Chapter 13

yay tom will get out of the prison
yayyyy

Reviewer: sandyclaws Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 2

oooooh... the tension *growl*
this is seriously the hottest thing I've read in a while

Author's Response: Reley? Thank you :D

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 13

more plz!!!
akk how will they get tom out?!

Reviewer: BlackShadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 13

IIIH!!!! MORE!! u gotta hurry please!! im too in to this story now!!

Author's Response: Working on it RIGHT now :P

Reviewer: TH4everbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

aww man i hope Dereck is actually doing it for Bill, too much pain for those twins. And how could simone do that. Noting my kids (if i have any) did would ever make me disown them, or shun. especially after one nearly died. I would be grateful he's alive and healthy, she needs to be straightened out. i frikkin love this story, and i love yor chapters, please please please update soon. ^_^

Author's Response: Thanks :D Simone was like really fed up with that constant fighting and she had distanced herself from them, until this made her crack. She wasn't strong enough to see them ruin each other :/

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 13

god this is suspenseful... happy bill's got a plan with the dereck guy... =] i want them all to be happy again! good job.

Reviewer: DieLetzteHoffnung Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 13

=O are then goin to bust toms rather nice arse outa jail? Urgh, simones a bitch. Im gonna go shoot her at it'l be fine... Right! ILOVETHISFIC.

Author's Response: Hihi. You'll see. Thanks :P

Reviewer: gangurothumper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

NO THEY ARE NOT MOVING WITHOUT TOM!!!!!! YOU ARE NOT DOING IT!!!! NOT WITHOUT TOM!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T DO THIS TO OUR READERS!!!!!!!!!!BE NICE TO US AND GET THEM BAKC TOGETHER!!!!!!!!!!! NO!!!!!!!!! PLEASE IM ACTUALLY CRYING NOW (hehe not really but im emotional over this part tohugh) PLEASE!!!!

Author's Response: *g* Can't wait posting the new chapter reading this :P

Reviewer: gangurothumper Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 12

aw!!!! please make tom come out soon and safely!!!! and i want the brothers to get back together again!!!!! pl;ease!!!!!

Author's Response: Haha! I hope it lived up to your hopes :P

Reviewer: CrashintoYou Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1

Bill should make a petiton or something like that to free Tom ^_^
.. just an idea (a) :)

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Sara Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 12

love it
i hope they won't fight anymore
make love not war

Author's Response: I hear that! Peace and looove :D

Reviewer: Mein_9_leben Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/08 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 12

AAAAAWWWW!!!! something must be done to free tom!!!!

Author's Response: But what?!? :P

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