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Date: 09/11/09 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 22

Awww...They are so cute!!! Their sweet nicknames are so cute and so cheesy. Billboard Chart...lol

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Date: 09/11/09 11:12 pm Title: Chapter 21

That's surprising!!! Gordon is never mean anyway. He's always the good guys and Jorg the bad one.

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Date: 09/11/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 20

LMAO!!!That's what I called to get in some pants!! Bill take it pretty litteraly!!! But Gordon had seen all of that and it's not good.

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Date: 09/11/09 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 19

Poor Andi!!! It's not your fault, you just don't have a chance against Tom.

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Date: 09/11/09 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 18

O_o.....

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Date: 09/11/09 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 17

What's the matter with those two. They are real rollercoasters. Now, they just killed themselves in a stupid car accident. Nice job boys, nice job!!!

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Date: 09/11/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 16

Hope that will be enough to survive, Tom.

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Date: 09/11/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 15

Wow, what a change!! They hated each other for 3 years, Tom used to call Bill a fag, then beat him to death. Now, he almost had jumped on the clerk for insulting Bill. Who's giving the blowjob now, Tom.

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Date: 09/11/09 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 13

What the hell with Simone. i understand she's fed up but it's not Bill's fault. Actually, yes, but he nearly died.

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Date: 09/11/09 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 12

OMG!!!They're kissing like that!!All publicly!!!

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Date: 09/11/09 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 11

Tom knocked Bill out to death!!! And don't hate him with all his soul!!! I can either, so. Get Tom out of jail please. He's an idiot, a whatever you like but I understand now. They love each others.

Author's Response: Indeed they do :P Thank you for your review!! :D

Reviewer: Sarajuly382 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/09 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 8

I'm a psychic!!! Tom loves Bill!!! So, what are you doing Tom??? Bill came by to apologize and you fuck this up again.

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Date: 09/11/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 7

You made a step in the right direction Bill, it's great. But Tom still thinking there's nothing to do. No, you're totally wrong. Hum, night sneaking and a spraybox. not good.

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Date: 09/11/09 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 6

Yes, I was right!!!

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Date: 09/11/09 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 5

I get it, Bill and Tom don't talk to each other know because they have (at least Bill) feelings for each other.

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Date: 09/11/09 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 4

There's some hope in there. Tom miss the old time too. What happened 2 years ago??

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Date: 09/10/09 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 2

Poor Georg!! Always caught between those 2.

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Date: 09/10/09 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

They love each other very much as I see.

Author's Response: They do indeed :)

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Date: 08/31/09 04:29 am Title: Chapter 11

I am about to give you the hugest compliment I could ever give someone. This chapter made me cry. Not just tear up, but full out cry. I never cry from reading books or stories, so this is like the rarest thing on the planet. This one particular line started it all: " You died, but came back. The doctors said there was no way of you coming back, but Tom screamed at them until they tried once more, even though it was a lost case." Just thought I'd let you know. :)

Author's Response: Wow, that means a lot to hear. Thank you so much!! :D

Reviewer: neelam Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/09 02:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whoa, this was reeeeally good! I laughed so much that I think my abs have grown a lot... :D But yeah, I love this. This is the first fic ever that has made me laugh this much. :D

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