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Reviewer: TH4everbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 06:48 am Title: Chapter 19

ohhhh, casual slip ups. but i have a question. when the twins came back in the last chapter didn't Bill kiss Andreas in fron on Tom??

Great i loved it update really really really soon

Author's Response: When? He saw them kiss when Andreas was leaving in the previous chapter, but they didn't know.

Reviewer: stinesb93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 06:21 am Title: Chapter 19

Aw ! You have no idea how much i I loved this chapter! I love you for writing it too :-D

Author's Response: Aw! Thank you so much ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^ ^^

Reviewer: Blue Penguin Dude Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 06:14 am Title: Chapter 18

aww poor tom.

Author's Response: Indeed...

Reviewer: Sif25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 05:53 am Title: Chapter 19

another great chapter! I love the way you changed the story, so that they no longer was running away - great job :) I can't wait for you to update...

Author's Response: Thanks! I was crashing the story to a dead end with the whole running away thingy... But still, it was one of the ways to change the situation at school :)

Reviewer: Sonnenschein Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 05:34 am Title: Chapter 19

ohh! I liked the end! I think Billa should be with Tomi! Poor Tomi. He's been put to the side by Bill!

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: nnnadia Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 05:28 am Title: Chapter 19

YOU SUCK ON THAT ANDREAS! HA! HA! HAHAHA! *ahem* Yaaay Bill and Tom up in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g! : DD please Neptunsie, moreeeee sooon : D

Author's Response: Haha! Your reviews always make me laugh xD I'll do my best on updating ^^

Reviewer: Emmla Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 05:05 am Title: Chapter 19

am I a horrible person if I am lughing right now ? xD
it was just so funny when he said Toms name...I know I am crazy LOL
anyways, its good that he finally realises that he still loves his brother :D

Author's Response: *winks* You're not a horrible person. Trust me. I laughed when I came up with the idea as well :P :P

Reviewer: lovekaulitztwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 04:52 am Title: Chapter 19

*sniffles* ohhh lordy, things are so messed up. i love thiis (: xoxo

Author's Response: Ay... Thanks :)

Reviewer: lovekaulitztwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/13/08 03:54 am Title: Chapter 18

*gasps* ooooh tom is maaaaaad
i sense drama (: awesome chap!
xoxo

Author's Response: *snaps* Drama in da house! :P Thanks ^^

Reviewer: Mein_9_leben Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 18

BILL!!!! u horny toad!!!!!!
Go an snog TOM!!!!!

Author's Response: Hahaha xD

Reviewer: TokioParade Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 11:47 am Title: Chapter 18

O_O!! NOOO BILL AND TOM ARE TOGETHER!!!! *hides and cries in corner*
please update soon!!
xoxoxox

Author's Response: *hands kleenex* I'll do my best, hun :)

Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 09:01 am Title: Chapter 18

dammit i keep missing your updates on this! lol grrrrrrrreat job. i love it. =) well, first off, i'm glad they're okay and back home and all that jazz. =D haha... bill/andreas pairing always makes me smile... but then of course we get to deal with jealous tom. ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thabank you :)

Reviewer: Gisele Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 06:02 am Title: Chapter 18

wow! Great! Omg! I can't wait to see what'll happen!! I love it !

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: lixi05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 05:03 am Title: Chapter 18

ooh!!! never expected that to happen!!! lool
more soon please!!

Author's Response: Hihih. Goodies! Thank you :)

Reviewer: stinesb93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 02:36 am Title: Chapter 18

oh , how could you to that to Tom ? Poor Tom , he had been through so much and now he saw Bill and Andreas. I think it should be Bill and Tom ! They are just perfect for each other. But .. that's just my opinion. I will let you know , I love you'r story anyway : )

Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry :P But it was either that or the end ;P But thank you :)

Reviewer: poison_girl616 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/12/08 12:23 am Title: Chapter 18

Poor Tom!! Being raped and now betrayed!! update soon!!

Author's Response: Aye! I'm being too mean, aren't I :/

Reviewer: firelucy Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/08 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 18

WTF...and here I was being so happy that things were finally working out for the twins and that they were getting their life back on traks and then this...It was amazing though !!!

I have to say that the moment betwen Andreas and Bill was sooooo cute (but I do wish it was Tom instead of Andreas)

You write so well and its a pleasure reading this, I get butterflies in my stomach :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :D <3

Reviewer: blackwingedgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/08 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 18

oh nose!
Bad Bill! bad!

Author's Response: Haha! Badindeedio

Reviewer: THTrishandV Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/08 07:37 pm Title: Chapter 18

please continue

Author's Response: I will ^^

Reviewer: anja0xd Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/08 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 18

woa, great twist to the story, hooking up Andreas and Bill I mean ;D
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Really great work! :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D

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