Date: 02/15/08 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 23
this is an amazing story. :) there were a few small mistakes here and there throughout the entire thing, but they can be overlooked. i like the main you idea you based your story on, it's not some cliche you stumble across everyday. go you! :D
all in all, i love your story. the ending was so sweet, i'm so glad the twins can finally live in peace. :)
Author's Response: Thank you and thank you for overlooking my mistakes. I'm going to get it beta'd and repost, but I just need to find someone who wants to go through like 100 pages :P
Date: 02/08/08 10:11 am Title: Chapter 23
that was just beautiful. sctratch that, that was BEYOND BEAUTIFUL. this was juat AMAZING!! thank you, thank you, thank you.
Author's Response: Loba for you! And thank you BACK! ;D
Date: 02/08/08 10:07 am Title: Chapter 22
awww...=]so its all gonna be happy=]
Author's Response: ya! I need happiness for them ;D
Date: 02/08/08 10:02 am Title: Chapter 21
i like the name "gordon" too! and omg georg! ahh!!
Author's Response: Loba for him ;)
Date: 02/08/08 09:57 am Title: Chapter 20
that was SOOO funny!!haha omg...but the end...omg not AGAIN.just when i thought it would all be allright!
Author's Response: I'm a plot-twister... :/ Sorry. But thank you!
Date: 02/08/08 09:49 am Title: Chapter 19
YAYYY!! you were scaring me there, i thought the twins were gonna become enemies again!WHY would bill do that with andreas??and after all that happened??? ahh its so confusing.
Author's Response: Haha, thanks for your review. People do weird things when in love..
Date: 02/07/08 05:15 am Title: Chapter 11
omgomgomg....
you are an AMAZING writer. This is amazing. its making me cry.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Looooba, I'm blushing!
Date: 02/07/08 05:10 am Title: Chapter 10
OOMMGGG!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha! Omglordyeahsaviour ;P
Date: 02/07/08 04:53 am Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!!
Author's Response: Loba ;P
Date: 02/07/08 04:46 am Title: Chapter 4
aww...
Author's Response: Loba :P
Date: 02/03/08 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 23
i really loved this story.
very well written and an absolutely interesting trama, extremelly cool altern universe, i give ye thumbs up for this story. i adored it, thank ye so much for sharing it, seriously..
great going, now for the next one..! “.”
Author's Response: Thank you! Very much! :D
Date: 02/03/08 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 23
i don't know if i reviewed this chapter and i don't rly feel like checking, but i love this frikkin story, and i am sad to see that it is over. but i'm glad the boys are happy, but i still wonder what Simone would have done if she found out, oh well.
I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!! HeHe, well cya
Author's Response: Haha, so do I :P Maybe she will one day :O Thanks! :D
Date: 02/01/08 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am a grammar freak so it was hard for me to read this. X]. But I did love it, read the whole thing. Youd think, when they saw Dereck they would notice even the slightest bit of resemblence between him and their father. D: Sorry, I notice dumb things but, It really was a good story. Encore!
Author's Response: They weren't identical. I'd never guess two of my friends were twins, but they are. As for grammar; I am learning 5 languages, so it's not always easy to keep it straight. I actually make mistakes in Norwegian as well now :O And I used to get sixes! But thank you! I'm so glad I didn't shit all over it for once. Although maybe a little on the edges ;)
Date: 02/01/08 04:41 am Title: Chapter 23
This story really, really needs a good beta. There's a lot of spelling and grammatical mistakes that make it hard to enjoy the story.
Author's Response: Yaya. But the story is over now, and I got this spelling-thing for the new ones ;)
Date: 02/01/08 04:03 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, I'm involved in this story... How nice XD Funny you chose the name Layla...
Author's Response: Is it yours? :P Had the song "hey, layla" stuck in my head :P
Date: 01/31/08 04:45 am Title: Chapter 23
I love this story^^
Good job :D
whohoo
Author's Response: Thank you so much! *gives cupcake*
Date: 01/31/08 02:49 am Title: Chapter 23
ohhh a good ending thank god!
OH those backstabbers:(
thanks for sharing this wonderfull story^^
Author's Response: *blows kisses* Thank you, and thanks for your reviews :)
Date: 01/31/08 02:40 am Title: Chapter 21
hehe, how cool that he's the lost twin bro of Dereck
Author's Response: Hehe ;P
Date: 01/31/08 02:35 am Title: Chapter 20
oh ScheiBe!
Author's Response: Swearing at me now, eh? Just kidding. Thanks.
Date: 01/31/08 02:29 am Title: Chapter 19
drama!!!!
ohh this stors is al most ending:(
Author's Response: Drama all zhe time :P