Date: 04/06/08 07:45 pm Title: Chapter 23
absolutely WONDERFUL!!!! its sad u ended it! u hav to do a sequel!!!! i give u a 100000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000 rating
Author's Response: Good thing I kinda started one, then ;) Thank you.
Date: 03/27/08 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 23
^^ cute
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 03/27/08 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 21
XD gordon xD
You're so hilarious ...
Author's Response: Haha! Thank you!
Date: 03/27/08 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 18
xD Omg, first Bill's making out with tom, and now with andreas .. 2 boys, you're not telling me he isn't gay in this stoty xD xD
Author's Response: Haha, I ain't :P
Date: 03/27/08 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 17
ö are they dead?
Author's Response: Nuh! :O
Date: 03/27/08 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 16
ö tom raped and beaten up?
Gosh, I hope you understand me,
I'm from belgium y'know ;)
Author's Response: I do ;P
Date: 03/27/08 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Ö BILLYY
TOM ISN'T GOING TO HURT HIM, RIGHT ??
Date: 03/27/08 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 8
^^
when do they tell eachother their feelings?
Date: 03/27/08 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ö
Notting agaist Emo's huh!!!
Btw, great chapter ^^
Date: 03/24/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Donr17;t you think there are too many r0;adventuresr1; for your heroes?
I like first 10 chapters of the fic. They are nice. And I wish you limited your muse in this spot.
Brothers had enough problems to solve: rivalry, forbidden relationships, mental turmoil about incestr30; There wasnr17;t need for all this r0;jail and so onr1; part. Because there story loosed all connections with reality. Sentence "I don't believe!"© Stanislavsky didnr17;t leave my mind during remaining chapters. This is why I think, that yours turns of the plot good enough for serial with 500 episodes and 100 characters, but overladen for 14 chapters of story about two brothers.
P.s. sorry for language. English not my mother tongue.
Author's Response: I'm going to have to agree with you. I too felt that I actually sold out a little on the last chapters, but then again, I fell in love with Bill and Tom like this and this story was very special to me. What I want with this sequel is to kind of... I dunno... go back to my original idea, just in a different package, you know? But as I say, if you wouldn't like a sequel, then don't read it. Pretend the story ended around chapter 10 :)
Date: 03/18/08 11:52 am Title: Chapter 4
i can't believe bill ruinned this chance! :/
Author's Response: Huh? OH! Yeah! I was so lost, I thought you were finished xD
Date: 03/11/08 02:27 pm Title: Chapter 23
Damn, you and your damn good story taken all my time! Now I donr17;t have time to prepare for my math test for tomorrow -.-
Really good story btw ;)
Author's Response: Oh my! I am so sorry! Thanks, though! And good luck! :P
Date: 02/23/08 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
oooooooohhh scandalous!! in the good way! =D
Author's Response: hehe, thanks ;)
Date: 02/22/08 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 23
That was FANTASTIC!!!!You did a great job,you should really write more stories!Loved it!
Author's Response: I got 12 other stories if you want :P Thank you :D
Date: 02/18/08 08:11 am Title: Chapter 23
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!
and indeed, the end was just perfect!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D