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Reviewer: Marianna1994 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/10 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 23

ahhh!!! i love IT!!! it's goin on my FAVS!!!!! there should be a sequel!! it's ok if there's not!!! i love it the same!!!!! u r amazin!!!! ur goin on my SICK list!! btw thats a good thing!!!!! hehehe!!!

Author's Response: Yay, sick list! :D Thank you ^^

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/10 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 22

Billboard! I found you! Haha I forgtot know where I have heard that. Lol, awesome.

Author's Response: Hahahahaha :D

Reviewer: Kulta Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/10 08:44 am Title: Chapter 23

LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH!!! -wipes tear of joy from eye-

Author's Response: So glad you did!!! :D

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 23

Awww, how sweet. Yeah I did like it, though some stuffs were kind of unrealistic, lol, but it's a story! and I believe anything can happen!  :D Good job!

Author's Response: "Surrealistic" story, says I, then :P But thank you! :)

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 20

AWWW!! it was So NOT strange it was so cuteeeeee, i can picture them in the same pants and t-shirt aww.

"I have never felt this stupid in my entire life" Tom said and blushed: awwwwww

Oh Lord! Gordon!



Author's Response: Haha ;D Glad you think so, then :P

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 01:47 am Title: Chapter 11

Mmm, confusing but ok.

Author's Response: Written before I understood what structure was.

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 10

Oh my oh my ohhhhhhhh my GOD! MOOOORE -->

Author's Response: Haha! Go on :D

Reviewer: ajavfore Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/10 01:13 am Title: Chapter 8

Ahhh, damn, there was the chance and Tom missed it!

Author's Response: Aye. Missing chances is scary...

Reviewer: Billsexxxual Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/21/10 01:41 am Title: Chapter 8

Bill's such a immature dick..

I'm starting to feel sorry for Tom.

Reviewer: Random324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/20/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 23

aAAWWWWWW
SWEET
CUTE
I wanna hug twinns!!!!! *whines*

Reviewer: X3mo Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/10 03:43 pm Title: Chapter 12

:'( UUUUH I have never cried so much!!!! LOVE!!!

Author's Response: oh, how sweet :D

Reviewer: Ainee Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/28/10 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just started the story, and it sounds really interesting!

Oh, and you seriously nearly killed my flatmate! She make this comment aboute the name of the gangs (how it could be interpreted to how they have sex, you know, with or without condoms), and then when I read the line "Tom baggs and Bill sprays" to her 5 sec later, she almost chocked on laughter! It was awesome! :D

Author's Response: I didn't get it until now! Hahaha, oh that makes me blush a little, actually. Haha! O crap... xD

Reviewer: mischadevi Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/18/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm really liking the story so far.

The scene during math class seriously reminds me of Cartman and Kyle from South Park. Strange but it does.

Author's Response: Haha, I had to think back to understand, but now, I am laughing ;D Thanks.

Reviewer: Trauemer36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/10 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 23

such a great story! the plot is amazing and i love the creativity and uniqueness in each character's role! great work!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, thank you so much :D

Reviewer: Awisawsome Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/18/10 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 23

WOW THIS IS REALLY SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Nice ;D

Reviewer: SoberVictim Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/16/10 12:13 am Title: Chapter 23

So awesome! This story was the highlight of my day :D

Author's Response: Wow. You are much too kind :) Thanks.

Reviewer: Janeyyy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/29/09 09:18 am Title: Chapter 23

Happy ending ^.^

Reviewer: Extacccyyyfreak Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/28/09 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 21

haha to think about it i like the name gordon too xD brill chapter btw

Reviewer: Chi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/09 10:47 am Title: Chapter 23

I loved this!!! It's great :D
xx Chi ^^

Reviewer: Sarajuly382 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/09 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 23

Don't worry, it,s a good ending.

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