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Reviewer: Yuri Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/08 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG i loved it...it was really good, please do continue it

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: xxSam Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/10/08 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

645 reviews enough for you to continue?
sure hope so

xx

Author's Response: NEIN! I want a million! :P Nah, just kidding. Will start this one as soon as I can :) (That means; finish the other ones and start fresh)

Reviewer: tammerztehpwnz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/08 03:37 am Title: Chapter 20

So I'm reviewing here...and I was wondering...are you trying to kill me from shock! I mean, not that it's like weirding me out or anything. I mean that I have gasped and aww'ed and shreiked so many times that it's a surprise that I haven't hyperventilated or passed out from lack of oxygen.

It's all good though. I'm enjoying this extremely angsty ride. :]

Author's Response: When I wrote this, I loved scandals :P Thanks!

Reviewer: maddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 22

lolz, so cute name-calling....billboard chart? too cute!

Reviewer: maddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 21

LMFAO, that was unexpected, but ALRIGHT 'CUZ IT'S ALRIGHT. good story btw

Author's Response: Thanks! xD

Reviewer: maddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 20

oh my oh my!!! not too strange, but then again im not a father who has just witnessed his sons goin' off on each other...lolz

Reviewer: maddi Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/08 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 18

can i say what the fuck? o.O lolz

Author's Response: xD

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/08 10:14 am Title: Chapter 12

They kissed in front of the guards? Oh my ... I blushed from my seat xD

Author's Response: Hahah, aye :P

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/08 10:13 am Title: Chapter 11

NO WAY! Did Tom got arrested? Of course we don't hate you xD Things are getting exciting ..

Author's Response: Haha xD Good to know Iĉm not hated, aye :P

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/08 10:11 am Title: Chapter 11

The part that Bill threw a vase was so funny xD i like it x)

Author's Response: Kiitos.

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/08 10:09 am Title: Chapter 10

Aw .. I kind of started to feel sorry about Bill .. but whatever, he deserved it xP Again, an awsome chapter.

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 8

wow .. i wouldnt expect that from bill .. It was very good, i like your ideas x)

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 3

''Tom happened'' xD

Again, the cahpter was awsome. I like it.

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 2

You'r writing the argues really good xD And I liked the last part .. -sorry about my english-

Author's Response: Thanks! :) And your English is quite OK :)

Reviewer: selin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 11:08 am Title: Chapter 1

It's soo funny, I really liked it xDxD

Author's Response: Thanks :)

Reviewer: Hikki_Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7

Um... I love the story and everything, but before posting, try running it through a spell checker or something. Because a couple spelling errors here and there are fine, but too many can get really distracting from the story.

Author's Response: This was a long time ago and as I warned you before, only the first chapter is rechecked.

Reviewer: Hikki_Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2

Aw! I wonder what happened to make them act like this to each other! Make them like each other, I command it!

Author's Response: Yellseese

Reviewer: Hikki_Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/08 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

HEHEE! So cute! I can't wait to read more! Lol, you'll probably get a review from me on every chapter... I just roll like that.

Author's Response: Haha! Oh, keep in mind that the first chapter is the only one that is re-betad, though...

Reviewer: monika Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/12/08 07:41 am Title: Chapter 15

Dear Alvasonda you are so good at writing...definetively....I love this fic!!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you :)

Reviewer: German_love17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/08 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 20

omg
the best fucking chapter EVER
YOUR AMAZING lmfao

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! :D

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