Date: 04/30/23 07:29 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 12/01/11 01:30 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
I think you did AMAZING. This was way more in depth and complex than I expected. You write incredibly well in first person; it was impressive. I loved your Tom character, u made him so real. And so funny. I know there were a few bits where I had to actually stop reading in order to laugh out loud for a minute. lol. The bits where Georg n Andi assumed Tom's plans = sex were PRICELESS.
I just loved everything about this story. It was funny and witty and naughty and angsty and so FUCKING SEXY. You're a great author IMO and I hope you'll keep writing first-time twincest, cuz this is really freaking good. This plot flows really well, everything fits together and the build-up is great, and the emotions and realism is all there. Really great job. ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!! :)
Date: 09/05/11 11:28 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
this was a good story!
Date: 09/01/10 06:24 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
That was absolutely brilliant. It was one of the best debuts I've ever read. Brava. I loved it very much.
Date: 05/03/10 03:10 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
I don't know how to express my adoration of this fic. Tom's mental struggle and the end, it was all fantastic!
Date: 04/12/10 09:04 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
Tom never told Bill he knew he was a stripper.. or Bill never told Tom he was one. D:
Other than that i LOVE IT i was laughing my ass off when Tom couldnt get it up then I imagined it and i couldnt stop laughing for liek, 5 minutes
Date: 10/11/09 04:15 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
lol i found myself laughing and repeating some of this(toms paniced questions) a little 2 loud :D and the end mmmmmmm
Author's Response: LOL Thanks for the review. We all like a little torture. =)
Date: 05/17/09 02:46 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
loved it.. x
Author's Response: Thankies!
Date: 05/13/09 06:31 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
LOVE!!
Author's Response: Thanks!! =D
Date: 05/10/09 05:41 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
Lovely story, I liked the build-up.
Maybe a tip for upcoming stories:
When they're as long as this one, you might want to split it up in chapters. :)
Nice work!
Author's Response:
Yeah, sorry about the length. But during my planning I always pictured it as a oneshot... I guess this is probably the longest oneshot ever... -P
Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/09/09 07:09 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
The humor in this was great! I loved the asides and really just how you wrote Tom's voice. Very well done! The sex was damn good, too. Great job, and I'm glad you're writing here. :)
Author's Response: Thank You! I'm glad to be writing as well, everyone's reviews always make me smile! I really appreciate your opinions on my writing. =)
Date: 05/08/09 10:14 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
So I couldn't sleep last night so I thought to myself 'i'll just read a quick one shot before bed' so I opened this and bamm 20 hours later i've had enough time to finish it but wow was it worth it! it was funny and sad and beautiful and lovely and fluffy all wrapped into one amazing fan fiction burrito! Amazing job! Your baby is beyond perfect, keep up the writing!
Author's Response: I think this was a SUPER burrito! lol I'm glad you enjoyed my (not so mini) emotional roller coaster! Thanks for the review, this one made me laugh :)
Date: 05/08/09 05:43 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
awww that was cute and hilarious all at the same time!!!
well done!
fern xx
Author's Response: Thankies! All these kind words make me want to write so much more! lol
Date: 05/08/09 05:37 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
that wass hottt
Author's Response: Thanks! That was my first time writing full blown smut, so I was self concious. =)
Date: 05/08/09 03:38 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
you killed me..
Author's Response:
lol
Thanks? :3
Date: 05/08/09 01:56 pm Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
Well, your headbanging paid off. :) I know how hard Tom is to write sometimes, so congrats and really good job!
Date: 05/08/09 08:31 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
I love it! Great job. Tom's character is spectacularly accurate. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! But Tom's character was a bitch to write! The whole time I was banging my head against the wall trying to figure out how he'd react in the situations I put him in... I'm just glad someone thinks he's realistic! ^__^'
Date: 05/08/09 08:02 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
amazing. i so loved it. you did a great job. probably some other time i'll re-read this story. it was funny and cute.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I know how it is when you like a story so much you read it over and over. It makes me so happy to think that you liked it enough to reread it! =D
Date: 05/08/09 02:06 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
Oh wow! I loved it!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I appreciate the review! =D
Date: 05/08/09 02:05 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
Haha.
I was pulled in by the title.
Me and my friends have an inside joke about erectile dysfunction and after we started that joke ED seems to be everywhere, just never thought I see that title on THF but it made me laugh when I did. ^_^
I spent like nearly an hour reading this but it was utter cute and smutty ;]
Author's Response:
Actually this was inspired by a dream of mine. Of course my dream made absolutely no sense whatsoever. All I remember was that Tom couldn't handle having no sex and he exploded... quite anti-climatic. Thankfully this was nothing like my dream. =D
I know what you mean though, whenever you make up an inside joke suddenly its everywhere! lol