Date: 05/08/09 01:10 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
The amount of effort you put into this story really shows, especially for your first one! It was a mix of everything a story of this length should have, humour, seduction, angst, fluff and everything inbetween I really enjoyed Tom's narration, there were a couple of rough parts but I really enjoyed this story. I honestly have a soft spot for first time stories between the twins. Them finding each other is always the sweetest part. Great job! :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review! I am most certain that said rough parts were due to caffeine deprevation... I can function without coffee! lol
Date: 05/08/09 12:55 am Title: Erectile Dysfunction -- A Tom Kaulitz Story
it's very long)) but it's very good)) keep up the good and we want a sequel=))
Author's Response:
Thank You! I was actually contemplating a follow up in Bill's POV but it not my first priority at this point. If I do post the sequal it will probably be in a few lengthy months. =)