Date: 03/06/08 10:43 am Title: Final Chapter
Do write a sequel!!! CAn't wait!!!
Author's Response: i will write one but in a few weeks :)
Date: 03/06/08 04:58 am Title: Final Chapter
OMFG i can't belive i missed so many chapters and all this greatness! *hugs* thanks for it! i defenatly want more but i am pretty slow on the uptake it seems... how ever keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thanks :)
Date: 03/05/08 11:28 am Title: Chapter 37
Aww, I hoped that Tom would surprise Gustav by changing into a real femme fatale and let Gustav screw his brains out! Personally, I think this was a bit to easy. Sorry, sorry, it's your story, but still...
Anyway, write on!!! It's still great! When are they going to defeat the vampires???
Author's Response: no its ok im trying. yes they are going to defeat them i've been getting sidetracked sorry :)
Date: 03/04/08 09:40 am Title: Chapter 37
LIESE!!! *tackles* about time you updated again!! i was being deprived! *huggles you* me is so happy for a new chappie!!!
There's a deeper low then low? cool...where is it? *looks down* i can't find it *whines* omg tom changed in a girl... first he plays with dolls and now he changes in a girl... he so is in touch with his feminine side *grins*
*tackles bill* gimme the hairpin billa! bitte?! *pleads cutely* i won't do anything naughty..i would just ask it to bring me too norway that's all..bitte?
*scowls at david* partypooper...they were finally getting it on and then he has to interrupt!! how dare he! *hunts him down*
this was love! *smiles* ...but i was really being deprived and for giving me another chappie...you get....
::drowns you in cookies:: ^-^'
Author's Response: im so sorry i deprived you i pormise i wont do it again. i wanted to show that he had a feminine side...hopefully he actually has one :) *swims in cookies*
Date: 02/19/08 01:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, oh, got a GREAT idea:
Tom should change in a girl and surprise Gusti!!!!
I was lying in my bed when this idea popped in my head, so... do you think...
Author's Response: oh my god i love it ill definitley use it :)
Date: 02/17/08 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 36
HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
Aww, Gustiiiii!!!! Tom, you're a meany!!!!!!
Author's Response: yeah he is lol
Date: 02/17/08 11:32 am Title: Chapter 36
*laughs*
gimme those doll's!! i'll be very nice *grins naughty* really nice...
Wsn't Jason the tough one before? how come he had a moodswing? *tilts head* i don't mind really!..it just confuses me...
i knew it! i just knew Tom had a girly/childish side! this proved it cuz he play's with the dolls! *spies on tom playing with the dolls and tapes it* blackmail!! *laughs evilly*
mean georg, david was having fun *grins* and he interrupted...
this chappie was love liese! *reads it again*
cookie?
::gives pretty BIG basket filled with cookies::
Author's Response: he was the tough one but i wanted him to have a softer side <3 lol blackmail thats not nice rn*jumps around* cookies!!!!!!
Date: 02/15/08 03:50 am Title: Da Svidaniya
hihi XP
thnx so much for explaning a bit better about bill's powers! =D
SO cool XP
is simone really an angel?! =0
gd chap and i can't wait for more! =D
Author's Response: you're welcome it took me a while to discribe it and yes Simone was an angel :)
Date: 02/14/08 05:53 am Title: Da Svidaniya
YAY!! the little green smurf like dudes are back!! weee!!! *hops around happy*
Fire Angel hmmm sounds nice and cool...me likes :D Bill's so cool with his wings, i want wings tooooo *whines* gimme me wings liese...
Kick ass mom!! go you!!...but i agree with the twins, couldn't she have done that sooner? like before the whole evilness? *glares at her*
poor Bill couldn't kick the evil dad of doom's ass *hugs him* there there billie you'll get another chance!!
KITTYTOM!!!! *huggles kitty* so cuddly, fluffy...and cute!! *squeals*
::dumps truck full of cookies on you:: ^-^'
Author's Response: everyone who reads this story likes the cat i knew i would get this reaction. if they did i wouldnt have an villian. you cant have wings only Bill can :) yay cookies <3
Date: 02/07/08 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 34
aww =)
Elsa’s third cousin twice removed? =P
geniouse XP
and what about bill's new power? =0 SO cool =0
and he thought he got the lame powers! phuh! he seems to have the most powers and the coolest powers so far!
another gd chap hun! *hugs*
Author's Response: lol im working on discribing bill's new power, thanks
Date: 02/07/08 10:43 am Title: Chapter 34
little green people!! weee!!! *goes to search them* nawww i can't find them *pouts*
the chap was so awesome and the Billscene was just rocking!!
write more Liese i'm begging you!! *begs on knees* pplleeaassee....
::gives you lots and lots of cookies::
Author's Response: the little green people will be back. i'll write more soon i promise *eats cookies* thank you
Date: 02/05/08 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 33
wow...
mermaid tom
mermaid bill
shark
mermaid georg
bom
nice simone
poor david
and kittytom
all in one chappie...go Liese!!
it was so cool it kinda reminded me of "the little mermaid" hehe ^^ but that's cuz i'm in a Disneymood XD
update soon liese please? *pouts cutely*
or no...cookies!! but for the chap you can have some XD
::gives cookies::
Author's Response: lol thanks i watched the little mermaid before writing it so i guess that helped. i'll update soon i promise.cookies <3
Date: 02/05/08 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 33
aww =)
but OMG =0
bill's evil side could take over? =0 =0
another gd chap hun ;P *hugs*
Author's Response: thank you i try
Date: 02/03/08 05:26 am Title: Chapter 32
O.O
Kickass!!! *laughs* this was one awesome chap Liese...just awesome, and then Bill turning evil was so unexpected...for a second i thought Bill hadn't made it from falling of the ledge but then i thought you wouldn't be that mean to kill him...:D
i'm gonna read it again..bye!!*waves and runs of to read again*
oh wait i forgot something *runs back and gives you cookies:: can't leave you without them can i?
Author's Response: thank you. i thought that would throw people off ;) i would never make Bill die im not that mean. cookies yay no you cant leave me without them :)
Date: 02/03/08 02:37 am Title: Chapter 32
omg =0
please tell me what's going on with bill =(
great chapter and i loved the merman part =P
i've always been a sucker for mythelogical creachers XP
hope the next chapter will come soon (A)
Author's Response: i'll explain what happened with him in the next chapter. the day before i wrote this i read a book about mermaids and that inspired me to write that.
Date: 01/31/08 03:26 am Title: Chapter 31
weeeeeeee!!!!!!
*jumps up and down happy* such a happy chappy ^^
first the mountainscene...which was awesome!! *giggles*
and then kittytom in hula outfit *laughs* nawww that's so cute ^.^
wauw...jason and travis can pop out of water..cool..*looks in awe* but where did david and gunner come from? the ocean? the sky? the ground?... a plane?
*giggles*
poor gusti..he tries so hard, and poor diva!bill for not being able having a power to do his nails and shopping nawwwww *cooes*
And now.....COOKIES!!!!
::gives you lots of cookies::
Author's Response: lol when i was writing the part where Bill put him in the outfit i couldnt stop laughing. well my guess is that the came from the hotel :) *jumps up and down* yay cookies
Date: 01/31/08 01:55 am Title: Chapter 27
yey XD
u wrote the foursome =D
i'm not doen reading yet, but i just had to comment htis part =)
thnx hun *hugs*
Author's Response: your welcome :)
Date: 01/29/08 05:58 am Title: Chapter 30
my god...liese i'm so sorry...i didn't see that you update *snifs* i'm horrible *wails* please forgive me...please...*snifs cutely* i'm ashamed of myself....and since i didn't review chap 29 i'm gonna try to make this one big ass review!!!
Georg...you idiot...*laughs* "when does our plane leave" mwahahaha...and then with Bill and his redresssing...rofl.. *wipes tear away*
*looks at Bill with wet hair and drools* wet Bill.....
*snaps out of wet!Bill induced dream* hehe ^^ sorry about that....
nawwwww kittytom overload *huggles tom* and David got laid !! *smiles*...why did Bill scream? *blinks* or is that a stupid question? Tom...i keep repeating myself...SUBTILITY!!! *swaps his head*..although Gustav punishment is rather good..i would make Gusti say this --> "you're not getting any...for a week"..think Tom would survive?
::buries you under cookies:: ^^
Author's Response: roflmao its ok if you didnt i dont mind....ok maybe a little bit :) i wanted to give bill a power that he would use the most and that popped into my head. why do you think bill screamed? yay cookies :)
Date: 01/27/08 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 29
it may be short, but it's good.
I fucking love all you're chappies.
Love the whole fucking STORY!
want a cookie?
I'm so proud of Billa and his new power.
Just hoping he won't collapse anymore.
*gives you cookie*
really can't wait until you post the next chapter.
Author's Response: thank you, hmmm cookie :)
Date: 01/26/08 01:26 am Title: Chapter 28
O_o!!!! Tell your brother that I said that he shouldn't hog the compu and leave us with this cliffhanger!!!!!!
Go ON!!!!
Author's Response: if i tell him that he'll do it more but i will anyway, sorry for the cliffhanger