Date: 08/04/11 01:03 am Title: Chapter 1
The last line is amazing. I am so happy there was a second one, it was perfect (though I wouldn't be mad if it was a trilogy ;p) I loved it. I love the twins together and I'm happy Bill teased Tom to within an inch of his breaking point so they can be together.
Author's Response: Wonderful! I'm really glad you like it. Thank you, lovely. <3
Date: 03/02/11 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1
-head explodes- ohhhh meow...
Author's Response: *grins* Glad you liked it! :)
Date: 01/05/11 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I loved this!
Author's Response: Awesome, thank you! :D
Date: 12/17/09 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
the roommate of Bill’s power trip was Bill’s guilt trip - awesome parrell
Awe it's so sweet! Bill ran because he realized what he was doing and then why. And Tom came after him. I like that. It's a nice twist of the regular cookie cutter story idea. Lovely!
Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad you found it, and even more glad you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 10/23/09 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well I think its great! Good for Bill the itch is finally gone... for a while ^^.
Author's Response: He's always got his brother to scratch it for him when it comes back. xD I'm glad you liked it. Thank you!
Date: 10/15/09 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very good! Your writingstyle is amazing. You describe every little detail so well. Great and sexy fic!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I'm glad you liked it :D
Date: 10/02/09 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dammn that was HAWWWWT!!
Author's Response: *grins* Thank you! :D
Date: 06/05/09 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This fic was incredibly hot for a masturbation fic, and I didn't expect it to be quite as hot as this. You are surely talented!! I also have to say that I loved the the last line about the itch. It was perfect.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I appreciate the kind words. :D
Date: 05/29/09 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
oof, me loves it(:
-Emmii
xxxxx
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear it, thank you! :D
Date: 05/07/09 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooooooh daaaayyummm!!! That was-- excuse me, I must retire to the washroom for an hour or so. If I'm not out in 16 minutes, send the twins. :P
Author's Response: Haha! You got it. Thanks! :D
Date: 05/06/09 11:40 am Title: Chapter 1
That's hot.
Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Date: 05/05/09 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Did I miss the sports car in the other fic? I just automatically presumed he was in the escalade. So let me get this straight…Tom Kaulitz jacking off in a low-slung sports-car…with his brother outside watching…you trying to kill me?
Ooh, like how the knock on the window happened without Bill really thinking it through!
And the urgency…the way you make the reader really feel how Bill is rushing to get home, get his clothes off before finally getting down to business…wow
For some reason, the detail about Tom’s fingers being warm really did it for me…so hot
Awww, and Tom being ticklish and snorting…adorable ^^ you really know how to twine different things together, this was smoking hot and extremely adorable
Love you
Author's Response: Haha yeah. Tom jerked off in his Audi; the Escalade was a Cadillac. And yeah, I'm trying to kill you, pretty much. :D
I'm glad you enjoyed this, love, and I'm even more happy that you actually got five minutes away from your homework to read a little! I think that counts as breathing, too. Thanks again, honey. Love you so. <3
Date: 05/05/09 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, that was so sweet. A perfect little sequel :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/05/09 05:41 am Title: Chapter 1
You would, would you? ;) Well, it's extremely hot, of course, because everything you write is and the twins masturbating is one of the hottest things on earth (um... in fanfiction, anyway ^_^). I love how you describe that Bill doesn't plan what he does, and how he comes to the realization that it might be hurting Tom, so he should stop. Fortunately, Tom seems to have other ideas. ;) So, all in all, great job, as always!! (:
Author's Response: I'm not sure Bill would have been able to stop; I think it would have been very much a matter of angst if he does, angst if he doesn't, you know? Luckily for him, he didn't have to worry about it!
Thank you for reading, and thank you so much for the kind words. I appreciate it! <3
Date: 05/05/09 05:01 am Title: Chapter 1
In desperation was beautiful, but this second part is pefect.
It wasn’t fair for Bill to tease him, to play with his emotions and for all Bill knew, this need he had, this fucking desire he had to make his brother need him and want him as much as Bill could finally admit to himself that he wanted Tom, could be hurting Tom.
Bill is well-carachterized. He watches Tom, but in a second time he's scared from his feelings.
To me, the most beautiful part is the end: he realized that for the first time since he could remember, the itch was gone.
Simply perfect.
Author's Response: *blushes* Wow, thank you so much for such lovely words. I wanted to give the impression that Bill is just this teasing minx, as we see in a lot of stories, but then give a little more insight into his emotions. I wanted to give him a few layers, and I'm glad it seems to have worked. I'm very happy you enjoyed it! Thank you. :D
Date: 05/04/09 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! Sequel's = love :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 05/04/09 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I....
LOVED IT.
*_*
Author's Response: Thank you! <333
Date: 05/04/09 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Thanks for the sequel! I loved the first, and I love the second. Fantastic job! I hope to read more from you soon!
Author's Response: You're very welcome, and I'm so glad you liked them both so much. Thank you for the kind words! :D
Date: 05/04/09 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I'm so glad you did a sequel :D
This was sooo geil! Loved it ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 05/04/09 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I loved this so much!!! I'm so glad you followed up In Desperation, this time from Bill's perspective. Perfect and amazing.
Author's Response: I'm really glad I did it, too. It kinda begged to be written. I'm happy that you liked it so much! That means tons to me. Thank you! <3