Date: 08/10/09 01:32 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
aww im glad there happy=] plz update sooon...ooh sequel? lolz=]
Date: 08/10/09 12:22 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
Not at all, besides, many families manage to work out things and be mature about mistakes made in the past.
Author's Response: *Nods* Especially considering the time frame that's passed. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08/10/09 12:14 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
That's from the song "our house" by the British 80s group called Madness. They're pretty much one hit wonders but the music was cool!
Author's Response: YES! Woo! I didn't figure anyone would actually get it. It's an awesome song.
Date: 08/10/09 10:58 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
haha ok waiting
Date: 08/10/09 05:25 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
I loved it :D Hmmm, last chapter :( That's less... And my god xD Simone's mind xD Looooolz xD I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: XD I giggled while writing Simone's mind. Only her XD
Date: 08/10/09 03:38 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
I liked this chapter. The part with the 'thumping and loud moaning' make me laugh. The new banner is really cool. I like Tom's costume! Update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've had that banner forever, I only just remembered to put it up.
Date: 08/10/09 03:13 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Fourteen: "Father Gets Up Late For Work"
one left -sniffles- tha'ts kinda sad. but i liked this one. i giggled at the "thumping and loud moaning" part ^^
Author's Response: I enjoyed that too
Date: 08/04/09 06:42 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
I can't stop imagining Tom giving the make out fest to Bill in the High school
Author's Response: so I'm not the only one who'd enjoy seeing it?
Date: 08/04/09 03:32 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
xD I loved it!!!! I adore them x3 I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Ps, I LOVE Tom's kinky side...any chance we get to see more of him *shiny eyes*
Author's Response: XD I enjoyed that side of him too
Date: 08/04/09 02:38 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
That was hilarious. I especially loved the ending bit. Oh, I love when Bill gets angry.
Author's Response: XD Who doesn't love an angry Bill?
Date: 08/04/09 07:13 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
That was really sweet of Simone to share all that stuff with them. How nice.
Author's Response: I thought so too XD
Date: 08/03/09 08:59 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
lmfao i love this chappiee
Date: 08/03/09 01:23 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
aww=] update sooon thxx=]=]
Date: 08/03/09 10:57 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
Awww :) I love that chapter, there were so many little cute parts in there :) Like this one.
Finally, after Tom pinned Bill against the lockers for a make-out fest, the girls actually let it sink in that their new crush was taken.
Hahahahaha!! I love that, take that fawning girls :D hehehe, and because only so few people know about them being brothers, I think they'll be able to keep the secret, which is good :)
"HA!" Tom laughed, pointing at his baby brother.
And this is true sibling rivalry. I love how even though they are so cuddly, they have the sibling stuff still, because seriously, brothers and sisters act like this all the time. But then younger ones get the extra attention, ha, big ones just get to be called big. I suppose Tom likes that... bigger is better...
"I really don't want to come home from a long day at work and nearly sit in . . . stuff on the couch."
I have to say I agree with Simone here, a lot. Ground rules are always good. Yeah… The baby box was a cute idea too, idk why, but it was very touching, that Simone had kept everything about Tom that she had. Maybe somewhere deep down, she thought he might come back? :) lol, sorry, that's my um... kind of cheesy thoughts coming through.
Author's Response: I enjoyed that part too XD It serves those girls right for locking their sights on an already taken boy. *Giggles* Sibling rivalry sucks *glares at older sister* But it's true. Us babies get spoiled, which is worth putting up with it. Ground rules ARE always good. I wuoldn't want to sit in anything either. My sister actually has a box like that, which was totes my inspiration for it.
Date: 08/03/09 04:35 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
TOKIE(sp?)
Author's Response: *sings* Toki Wartooth's not a bee XD
Date: 08/03/09 01:12 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
Awwwww...the whole "Tom-box" thing was so sweet and cute.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! My sister actually has a box like that.
Date: 08/03/09 12:59 am Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
Awe. Cute.
Author's Response: Thanks
Date: 08/02/09 11:00 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
Aw, I love the end, although I can't imagine what those poor crushed girls must be feeling! This chapter was great!
Author's Response: *Giggles* I'm sure they'll survive on their drooling from afar XD Thanks so much!
Date: 08/02/09 10:33 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
Yay for Simone being okay with them!
Author's Response: It took her a little while, but yeah. If you can fight them, join them I guess.
Date: 08/02/09 10:22 pm Title: Part Three: Bonding - Chapter Thirteen: "'Our Mom She's So House Proud"
Dethphones? right...*backs away slowly* too much metalocalypse? Cute chapter, kind of not much happening, but meh, not all chapters can end in a cliffie and have you near tears. That would be emotionally draining, and also resembling a bad soap opera.
Author's Response: *laughs* WAAAAY too much metalocalypse. *le sigh* Nathan is my second love. I watched abotu 7 eps the other day XD Well, it's nearing the end, so not a whole lot of life changing events are going to take place, you know?