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Reviewer: Princess2000204 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/09 01:51 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Four: A Night Out Of Characters

Pretty good editing, Bill would certainly be sexy!



Author's Response: Thanks alot! I have to agree. Thinking about it makes me want to pounce on him....

Reviewer: GiraffeJumper2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/22/09 10:46 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter One: Getting There

This is really interesting...so they were seperated at a young age right? Please update soon?

Author's Response: Their story will come out soon enough. Thanks so much for reviewing

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/09 03:14 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

Wow lol

Author's Response: a good wow, ja?

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/09 11:31 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

Hmmm....something tells me that the two boys are about to find out they were seperated at birth *Dramatic music*

Author's Response: Something tells me you need to stop being a creepy creeper and lurking outside my window *pulls down blinds* XD just kidding. Good guess. I guess you'll just have to wait and see, eh?

Reviewer: Grimada Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/19/09 12:58 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

xD
well cabbie i lyked it! D:

tomi got his big brother attitude without noticing! YAY!

Author's Response: He did, didn't he? And poor Bill is all "what the hell just happened?" Glad you liked it, hun

Reviewer: Tears_of_trees Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 11:41 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

Lol, shaking your fist at your computer... hehehehehehe!!! (blame it on the late hour) oh, this was an interesting chapter, I mean, oMG!!! I think they're brothers here!! Am I right? I mean, same last name, they recognize each other, somewhat, same eyes, nose, mouth, looks, LAST NAME (Kaulitz is not that common of a name! though I bet it is getting more popular nowadays...)

He wanted another chance to wiggle all over Tom and then leave!

Cracking up laughing, and woke my dog up from her bedy bye time, she looked at me weird, and I read it aloud to her :) She fell asleep, oh well :) hehehe!!! Ooo, and this part....

ill grabbed Tom's arm while laughing manically.

Manically!!! LOVE that word :) made my whole day that someone used it :) Yet, this made me melt, well not this sentence, this made me crack up, again...

And not smell in a bad way, like Georg after a Mexican dinner.

But the paragraph made me melt a little, because yeah... :) Only thing I think that I saw was tv should be TV, or maybe not, idk....

and he was damn scared of it.

Tomi is scared... :( YOU must do something about it :) right? *squeal*

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I wasn't that thrilled with it. *whispers* they are brothers, they just don't know it yet. And no, Kaulitz is not that common, they just wish it was XD Aw hehe. What kind of dog? Tomi'll get along just fine, don't worry XD

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 02:34 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

Common name huh. :P heehee this is gunna b good.

Author's Response: XD Sure? Common name sounded good at the time. Thanks so much for following my work, hun. I really appreciate it

Reviewer: 2Kewl4U Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 10:26 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

It wasn't terrible at all...and I probably want Tom to beat Bill...but I like it!

Author's Response: I think Tom's stronger than Bill, so I wanted to flip things up a bit. . . .then Tom ruined it on me.

Reviewer: SarahCupcake Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 04:25 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

hehehe...i actually thought it wasnt too bad. wished it was longer, but thats just cause i want to read more. so ya better update!! XD
Heyy by the way...you got anymore jube jubes? *big smile and puppy dog eyes*

Author's Response: Aw thank you SO much! And I have tons of jube jubes left *showers you in them*

Reviewer: highperson2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 01:38 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

aww.... Tom wants to make sure that Bill undergarments aren't exposed to the world of the anime convention! :D Good Job! :DD

Author's Response: Thanks! Tom doesn't care if Bill's undergarments are exposed. . . .to Tom himself XD Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: faerylxjae89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 12:58 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

-giggles- you should have made them wrestle still evn if tom didnt want to he jsut cjhickem (typos yesssssssss)

I didnt think it was tarrible more like WHAT THA HELLOVER! i dont get it... kinda yeah.. 

(more typos wooooooooooooooo!)



Author's Response: Typos are sexy ;)

Reviewer: Anony Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 12:39 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

That wasn't terrible! -snugglehugs- i really liked it

Author's Response: Thank you wifey. But dont you have to say that? Kinda like if I ask you if my pants make my bum look big? XD

Reviewer: yorutya Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/18/09 12:25 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Three: Morning Studies

update soon plz thx=]

Reviewer: donpixe Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/16/09 07:17 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

Going a bit too fast for my liking but still, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Really? What would you've liked to see different?

Reviewer: uandme Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/09 12:51 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

haha I really love this so far!
more soon?

Author's Response: Yay, thanks so much

Reviewer: dantereznor Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/09 04:34 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

O_O *tracks story*

Author's Response: Yay! I love being tracked. Thank you!

Reviewer: Tamara Kaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/09 02:23 am Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

Haha. First off, Bill's enough to turn any straight man gay as it is now. What makes you think you've a chance of resisting him, Tomi. NEIN!! Impossible!!

Second, that blackest white boy comment cracked me up. It reminded me of a parody TH vid I watched on YouTube. :3

Author's Response: I've never seen the parody thing, actually. I got that line from my sister's bf, who thinks he is just that XD Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: tokio_hotel_luver Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/11/09 02:55 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

hahaha Billa so mean lol

Author's Response: I know eh! I'm almost afraid to know what Tom does in return...

Reviewer: Dark Writer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 11:26 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

Oooh Tom and Bill are gonna get "friendly" XD

Author's Response: ehehe. bow chica wow wow. *cough* sorry

Reviewer: Tears_of_trees Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/09 11:11 pm Title: Part One: Meeting - Chapter Two: Meeting Up

lol, I loved it, is it bad that I laughed through a good part of it? Lol, Bill is such a tease, and good old Georg, making sure Bill doesn't cause trouble. But it isn't like Bill doesn't anyway right?

From: Georg

Message: Would you believe he's actually a virgin?

Gustav's eyes nearly bugged out of his head. "Are you serious?!"

lol, that made me crack up, especially since the boys are oblivious to the G's lol :) and I was just talking about this with my friend

That and I'm bi, so I can get double the numbers

hehehe :) so true Tomi :) And OMG! what does this mean?

Georg was the only one who noticed that Tom looked just like Bill. He knew Bill was an only child, but when Tom looks like just like him, and they have the same last name. . . The theories that were flashing through Georg's mind were going a billion miles an hour.

Hmmm....must think on that, and be distracted my chuckling at this..

Slut being, of course, an affectionate name.

:) I loved it :) hehehe, I was looking at the recent stories, and saw two of the ones I was tracking, "omg perfect timing!" I was thinking, then of course I slapped myself. Duh, same amazing author :) keep it up :)

Author's Response: *laughs* Of course it was ok you were laughing. I was giggling while writing it. I like that the G's are more like parents then friends half the time. Though it seems different from real life how? *grins* And no, I won't tell you what I mean by that, but I'd love to hear your theories XD And thanks for tracking. Yay!

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