it was pretty believeable lol

Author's Response: XD I do try

Are you sure you didn't go on a spree? I could have sworn that I caught this story evey time it updates...
Anyway, your reasoning was sound enough, but Jorg must have been one heartless bastard to do something like that, regardless if he loves Tom or not. He still separated them, and he lied, AND PAYED SOMEONE OFF to keep his dirty little secret. What an ass.
The storyu line is good, tho. Thoroughly enjoyable. *wink*

Author's Response: yeah, Jorg is an asshat. That seems to be his best role. Everyone makes me one, but it's just..most fitting for some reason. Sort of in the way that Bushido is always the creepy stalker/rapist. Hm. Anyways! Thanks for reviewing!

Ooo, it was good reasoning :) very happy with it, made sense, but oh I can see why Simone is pissed. I would probably be too, but there might be a meat cleaver in my hand and I would probably be going after him, not yelling into the phone :)

"You dress ghetto?"

lol, I loved it when Bill said that, I'm not sure why, but it was kind of nice that you recognized that Tom was dressing his normal way now :) not in that sexy outfit at the con.

"Bill? Do yo-OH MY GOD!"

Hehehe, that had to be my favorite line, just because I can imagine all these expressions going across Simone's face when she just expects her son to be in his bed, or maybe asleep, not um...getting ready to suck someone off. And someone who looks a lot like her son. Hehehe, poor Simone. The one thing I have to say here, is that I thought maybe the boys would be blushing more when they came down, and more embarrassed, but they weren't. I think it works well with the story that they weren't but I probably would've been a bright red cherry tomato if that happened to me. The beginning was cute though, I have to give you that :) Naked Tomi in bed waking Bill up, very nice :P I really adore how they both said be quiet, but then they both got louder and louder, just found that adorable some how :)

Author's Response: I'm sure Sim would LIKE to go after him with a meat cleaver, but keep in mind: she doesn't know where he lives XD I actually added the ghetto line in while I was posting. What I had written out didn't have that. I giggled that they kept getting louder. And I agree with you, if that happened to me, I'd be bright tomato red too! XD

very original, i really wasn't expecting that!

Author's Response: XD Woo for me being unique. Thanks for reviewing.

That asshole! Tanja seemed so nice, too. Like someone who wouldn't try and steal away a married woman's man. But Bill and Tom prove you can't help who you fall for. Oh shit. At least there is still SOME love left to be shared.

Author's Response: I like Tanja for some reason. Her side of the story may come out yet. And yes, there is always SOME love left to be shared.

I know this review's a bit late, but I completely understood every single Japanese/anime reference in this chapter. I so need a life.

Author's Response: Nein. It's one thing to understand them all....but to WRITE them...thats when you need a life XD

0.0 AWWWW -hugglestomi- poor guy. but at least he has his billa!

I love candy, and just so you know, I'm not really picky about what kind. I'll eat whatever candy you offer.
Wow. What a chapter, huh? Poor Simone, she fainted. I hope it was on carpeting.
Honestly, while I loe this story and all, I think Bill was WAY too calm when he found out there was a twin. There should have been yelling and screaming and crying and all that jazz. It was good, but almost unbelievable. Doesn't he feel weird about fucking his twin brother?
But I really did like that chapter. On to the next one, then, since I missed the updates...

Author's Response: *Giggles* Probably not a good idea to accept whatever candy. I thought it might be a little too calm, but yeah. It's not gonna be a whole lot longer. And I mean, really, look at Tom. Why would Bill freak out over getting to tap THAT ass? *giggles* But yeah, I know what you mean.

I love you and the great stories you write :D I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^

much love to the author if this story!! keep going, please! i just KNOW that their twins. Unless you suddenly decided to twist it. That would be sooo cool if you did! But I like the story anyway so add please.

Author's Response: WOO! I get love! Yeah. . .I know it's kinda obvious, but I probably won't twist it XD thanks for reading and reviewing!