Date: 07/07/09 09:04 pm Title: As Seen On TV
Sarah is so sweet ♥ And Gordon was awesomesauce, haha =]
That shrink was an asshole, though >_< Bastard...telling Bill he shouldn't be around the kids. *shakes head*
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked them both. And I hate that shrink sooooo much >.< He's a douche. Thank you for your review.
Date: 07/07/09 08:00 pm Title: As Seen On TV
I LUVS the fact you put somebody a girl, a little one, to make Bill at least want to communicate with someone else. And the sarcasm was hilarious.
Author's Response: Everyone seems to love that part, and I love that you love it too ^_____^ Thank you for your review!
Date: 07/07/09 06:24 pm Title: As Seen On TV
pzlpzl update sooon thx soso much=]
Author's Response: Patience, deary, patience. I'll update when I can.
Date: 07/07/09 05:57 pm Title: As Seen On TV
MORE. NOW.
Author's Response: Patience is a virtue, my dear. =]
Date: 07/07/09 02:40 pm Title: As Seen On TV
loved it, and the part where the girl appears i liked it. So... nop it was your computer, in mine your banner is still up! I hope you had become a validated author
*hughs*
Loves
Author's Response: Okay, cool, banner still intact! And I hope I became one too, it would have made me really, really happy =] Thank you for your kind words!
Date: 07/07/09 01:46 pm Title: As Seen On TV
Awww!! that little girl was a nice touch ^^
I liked this chapter. Wasn't bored once =]
Author's Response: Aww, thank you. I'm glad you like it.
Date: 07/07/09 01:41 pm Title: As Seen On TV
Oh wow, seriously a good chapter, can't wait to read whats next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 07/07/09 11:45 am Title: As Seen On TV
Hahaha yay update!
Author's Response: YAY indeed =]
Date: 07/07/09 08:11 am Title: As Seen On TV
you're banner is still there hun, don't you worry about it :)
awww :) this was such a sweet chapter for a number of reasons. a) Tom is getting a Gibson sooner or later!!! yea!!! that was a great part, and I liked how Simone was more or less just ready to give it to him, but Gordon is holding it as a bribe, 2) the part with Sarah, that was so so adorable :) she seems so sweet, and I thought it was amazing how she could break most of Bill's rules, and BIll didn't freak out :) hehehe, the ability of little kids never cease to amaze me :) c) then that last little part with Tom and Bill, and the whole, 'would you like to learn to draw?' omg, priceless :) hopefully it will be an amazing session thingy, if we get to read about it :) hehehe, the shrink is kind of funny in his own way :D great chapter hun :)
Author's Response: Okay good :B I'm glad you liked all those parts, Sarah is like... amazing ^_____^ Thank you so much for your kind words xoxo
Date: 07/07/09 04:58 am Title: As Seen On TV
wow i can honestly say that i adore this story its just a perfect blend of humor seriousness and down right depressing stuff . I LOVE IT. And i cant wait untill you update again . you slightly defy the norm by changing the traditional bill and tom story into something almost magical :) thanks for the good read:)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so, so much! I'm so glad that you like it
Date: 07/07/09 03:38 am Title: As Seen On TV
I apologize if this posts twice, my comp had a spaz moment. But anyway, I really liked this chapter! :3 There wasn't a lot of Bill/Tom, but I liked the bit with Sarah. Will she be appearing more later?
And I totally lol-ed at Tom's heartattack and "Hi, we bought you some shit." XD I love how he is with his parents.
Author's Response: It only posted once, and I sometimes have the same problem. Is okay =] I haven't decided if I'm going to have more of Sarah, so I can't say for sure. Oh god, that's like my favorite bit XD I love Gordon in this story, I just do. Thank you for your wonderful comment!
Date: 07/07/09 02:44 am Title: As Seen On TV
I freaking LOVE Gordon in this. Everything he did I absolutely loved.
Sarah is such a sweetheart.
I wanted to bash the shrink in the head. What a douche, saying all that to Bill!
Author's Response: I love Gordon in this chapter too. He's like... amazing XDD Sarah is like my new fandom. And the shrink is a douche. It's why I haven't bothered to name him anything besides 'the shrink' XDDD Thank you for the review!
Date: 06/18/09 01:42 pm Title: Unintentional
This was great, You've really kept me interested through out this whole story, which is a feat within itself. I've tried to read stories while they're still being written, but I get so uninterested, and lose faith; so I read them when they're done. You darling, have got me going on this story, and every time you write a new chapter I read the whole thing over again.:). Just in case I missed any details because I read so fast I tend to skip things, you make me want to miss nothing. I honestly think this story deserves to be featured.
Author's Response: Ha, I do that too, especially with a book I'm excited about. And then I go back and I'm like 'WHOA I DON'T REMEMBER THAT!!!' I'm glad I've been able to keep your interest, I feel so accomplished ^____^ And featured? *blushes* wow, that's really nice to say. Srsly, even you suggesting that makes me feel happy. Thank you for the kind words, I'm really glad you like this story, and I'll have more as soon as I can! xoxo
Date: 06/17/09 10:13 pm Title: Unintentional
I found myself reading again another fic placed on institution. I have to admit finally, that I have this thing with them and mentally unstable Bill and/or Tom. So hey, it's great I found yours too :).
I red the whole fic now and I have to say, that first I had some difficulties to get rid of a fic Committed from my mind. There were some similarities, but I think it's inevitable when you read enough fics around same idea. But I have to say also, that I soon forgot it too. So don't worry, this is very nice fic to read.
Especially I love the way you showed us Bill's character here. He's very adorable. At the same time fragile and yet sarcastic, intelligent and somehow strong. I feél like there is a great courage hidden under his fragile cover. I loved the idea about dysphasia! It certainly broght interesting part to the character. I also loved the way you made him beeing a littlebit lost most of the time... not sure what to do, how to behave etc. When you (or anyone else) are making Bill's character this adorable and complex, fragile, it always makes me wonder, how much he is like we define him IN REAL LIFE. It's so easy to make him be so.. I don't know... Vivid, bursting and yet vulnerable?
Tom's character was ok too. Maybe if I were writing this story, I would have added a little bit more complexity to his character? Some times I found that he managed a little too easily on every situation. But in general, good job with him too.
Parts like "You and me" were so sweet and I'm looking forward to see serious fluff at some point. Tell me, that there is coming some? :). It balances story well. And drawing as a way Bill handles things is very fascinating and sweet. I just can imagine it so well in my head.
So nice job here :)
Author's Response: Wow, this was quite the critique. I appreciate everything you've told me, it's both praise and stuff I can use to improve. I thank you for this. And yeah, I started writing this fic, then like two days later I came across Committed, and I was like, aw, no, people will think I copied. But I tried to make it as different as possible. Dysphasia was one of my spelling words one week in English, and I liked it so much that I had to use it. I'm really glad you like this, and I give you a whole basket of thanks for giving me such a wonderful critique. And yes, don't worry. There is more fluff ^________^
Date: 06/17/09 01:28 pm Title: Unintentional
Oh no! and tom had a heart attack!
Author's Response: Like in real life or in my story? XDD I'm sorry, I'm kind of oblivious at the moment. Thanks for the comment
Date: 06/16/09 11:37 am Title: Unintentional
It's getting better and better, so I don't understand why you don't like it, cause I really do!
You're an amazing writer, I totally love this story. (:
Author's Response: I have my reasons =P Thank you for the polite words, they make me smile
Date: 06/16/09 11:32 am Title: Unintentional
My hamsters are completely healthy and well, thank you.
lmaf!! That had to be my favorite line in the whole story, idk why, but just because you can't get emotions out of the speaky thingy, and probably Bill's expresion :) hehehe!!! *squeezes* Tom has sort of come to the conclusion that he likes BILL!!! Or well, he knows that he got off thinking of Bill, so that's sort of the same idea :)
lol, I love the way Leila is sort of there for Bill and just making sure he realizes his emotions, or better does. I am just a little concerned with maybe pulling her too much into the story, and being able to solve everything. But awww, it is a cute picture, at least in my mind, I see her as sort of a mother figure, and her wiping Bill's eyes was just so awww. Hehehe, she seems fun, but I want to see more what happens when her other side takes over, she can't be the sweet Leila all the time :)
Gosh, the picuture was just so adorable and yeah, the nails and everything :) awww :) lol, I think there was much more to Tom switching shifts than he thinks there is, or at least lets on :) I'm so happy for Seth though, spending more time with his family, even though I don't really know him :) he seems like a good honest guy who should be able to be with his family :)
Author's Response: Haaa, I loved writing that line. It just seemed so perfect. And I can see Bill's face, kind of superior looking, but then shot down when Tom is like 'that made no sense.' And Tom may or may not like Bill, he just doesn't like the idea that he thought about him that way. And Leila is so my favorite female character I've ever written. I've been trying to keep her out as much as possible, but Bill also is starting to cling to her a bit, because she has no bias and won't go telling anyone about his feelings, so he opens up. I love the picture I chose, too, you'll love it. I may write another one of her personalities later. And the hands pic is SO wonderful =] Yeah, Tom's a good samaritan now ^________^ Thank you soooo much for your wonderful comment, you praised and critiqued.
Date: 06/16/09 09:19 am Title: Unintentional
i really really reallly really liked the chappie!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you
Date: 06/16/09 05:34 am Title: Unintentional
awwww that picture is lovely
Author's Response: Haaa thank you. I just recently found out my computer had a program that would let me do all this stuff to pictures so I've been playing with it =P
Date: 06/16/09 02:35 am Title: Unintentional
update soon plz i luvz thiz=]
Author's Response: I'll try. I'm glad you love it