Date: 05/16/09 12:17 pm Title: Meeting
Hey yeah, I never noticed the little worm/frog thing. Huh. And I never knew that if you stopped talking you maybe couldn't start again even if you wanted to. Weird.
Author's Response: I've been seeing it for a while and just now decided to comment on it. I just want to know what the thing is for!! And yeah, it can happen. I researched =] Sometimes it can come back, but not in like full sentences, just little word spurts. But not all the time ^___^
Date: 05/16/09 10:51 am Title: Meeting
*Dances* ahem..
I liked this chapter, a lot =].
So I hope you update soon. I'm very anxious to see where this is going xD
Author's Response: I didn't mean my readers dance, I meant my characters XD I'm glad you liked it. I'll try to update as soon as I can.
Date: 05/16/09 09:09 am Title: Meeting
We finally know what's wrong :D
Oh, poor muffin didn't mean to upset Tom :(
Author's Response: I know right =B Poor muffin didn't mean to indeed. But trust me, it gets better ^___^
Date: 05/16/09 02:09 am Title: Meeting
*Dances* Heyyy I'm not a puppet! Anyway, getting good, at least we know who the culprit is making messes, can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: I didn't mean you guys as puppets, I meant my characters XD I'm glad you're e'cited for the next chapter =]
Date: 05/15/09 10:25 am Title: Fifth Floor
SEEEXXYYY PSYCHO BILL!!!!
mORE pEESE!! ^^
Author's Response: You seem to be having problems with your cap locks XD More is coming I promise
Date: 05/12/09 01:05 pm Title: Fifth Floor
i like it so far =]
i'd love to see more ^_^
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you do ^___^
Date: 05/10/09 08:31 pm Title: Fifth Floor
lol I love Bill :) I have a soft spot for physco Bills :) I love them :P the chapter was shortish, but I love it :) I like how you have BIll drawing, and yeah :) is Bill going to like spill something for Tom to come and clean up? lol, would seem like something Bill would do :) love to see where this heads :)
Author's Response: You're incredibly perceptive, I hope you know this =P
Date: 05/09/09 11:22 pm Title: Fifth Floor
this sounds like a interesting story
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so =]
Date: 05/09/09 10:11 pm Title: Fifth Floor
ooooohhhhh..plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplz update soooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn thx=]
Author's Response: I love your enthusiasm =]rnMore is coming soon, I promise! I don't want to rush this =]
Date: 05/09/09 09:55 am Title: Fifth Floor
I like it. At first I thought the crazy man that Tom caught was Bill, whom I'm assuming is anorexic?
Author's Response: Everyone thought that, it seems. And don't assume, it makes an ass out of u and me =P You'll soon see
Date: 05/09/09 09:22 am Title: Fifth Floor
That was amazing. Tom did something good for a change. I'm so proud of him! At first I thought Bill was the crazy one but when you described the watcher at the end of the hall, my eyes got so wide, I thought they were going to pop out of my head and float away.
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill wasn't the screamer. You'll see why soon. In fact, I don't think the screaming guy plays another part in the story XD
Date: 05/09/09 06:04 am Title: Fifth Floor
My first thought was "Yay mental Bill!"
but more resonably I think this is going to be pretty amazing and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Yay mental Bill indeed!
Author's Response: Yay mental Bill indeed!
Date: 05/09/09 04:07 am Title: Fifth Floor
I'm loving the story. You write really well and the creepy feeling you give to bill is well done. I can't wait to read more about his fixation with tom. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much. Writing Bill as a creepy person was so fun =] More is coming soon!
Date: 05/09/09 12:59 am Title: Fifth Floor
Ooh, nice :D
Author's Response: Vhy zank you, m'dear =]
Date: 05/09/09 12:45 am Title: Fifth Floor
I actually REALLY love this! More?
Author's Response: -blushes- Aww, thank you! More is on the way, I promise. AND the chapters get longer =]
Date: 05/09/09 12:21 am Title: Fifth Floor
Oooh seriously getting interesting, can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Next chapter is pretty cool, I promise ;]
Date: 05/04/09 03:19 pm Title: Crime and Punishment
i cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: It's all written, just editing and changing a few things. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 05/04/09 10:06 am Title: Crime and Punishment
In my mind, when they met, I started thinking about Monk when he went to the psych ward and met the "other detective" who was just another crazy person. I was wondering if Dmetri was like that. It would make this already interesting story even more interesting.
Author's Response: I've never watched Monk, but I can guarantee Dmetri's not a crazy. And I'm glad you find it interesting, it makes me happy =]
Date: 05/04/09 09:51 am Title: Crime and Punishment
It might be short, but it's got me hooked already, can't wait to see chapter 2.
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you. It's coming soon, I promise!
Date: 05/04/09 09:38 am Title: Crime and Punishment
I did Holes for English last year at school and I actually rolled off my bed when it got to the 'Camp Green Lake or Jail' part.
Author's Response: I love Holes, I have since like third grade. I'm glad I made you laugh =]