Date: 05/03/09 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
*sobs* WOW....ah...did I mention WOW :D
Wow this is awesome, I so so so so so soooooo HAPPY that you made the ending better, so that thing were going to get better!!! I remember reading tokio_hotel_luver's fic and just crying my eyes out because it was soo sad!!! I just wanted Tom to stop been a dick and take responsibility and you that happen in this fic!!! I love it!!! Maybe you could write a sequel of Tomi and Bill happy and in love with their little baby??? That would be AWESOME!!! Wonderful writing, hopefully this won't be the end :D
Author's Response: *Give a couple of tissues* No hey its okay!!rnrnTomi isn't being a dick anymore and Billa gave him a second chance, so yes its a good ending!!
Date: 05/03/09 07:49 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh god! That was just so amazingly sweet!
Author's Response: Thak you!! <3 I was aiming for happy ending not my usual oh that was wrong and sad ending!!
Date: 05/02/09 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
You know what i think im going to start on the sequel for right now
Author's Response: Yay woot! I can't wait to read it love!! *wiggles and waits*
Date: 05/02/09 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
nah i changed my mind i like it more then my version
Author's Response: But I like your version more than I do mine. Your's get a sequel, where I wrote mine to come to an end.
Date: 05/02/09 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha spelling check doesn't recognies escalade as a world.
I'm glad you posted it.
i sorta like it more then my version
Author's Response: I'm chuffed now, really. I saw both comments and I was all like wow, *beams* I do like your story though, and I'm still waiting on that sequel.
Date: 05/02/09 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I think I know what you were writing a follow up to and I like your ending better. Plus you set up a great background story. However you switichd from third to first person at the end which caught me off guard. Just to let you know.
Author's Response: Oh god, I have that bad habit still!!rn*blushes brightly and gives a laugh* Erm yea, I blame my switch from third to first on 11 years of roleplaying. I don't actually mean to do that switching thing.. it just happens *blushes again*rnrnBut thanks for reviewing, I was extreamly hesitant about submitting the fic in the first place. I wanted it to have a good ending, but not be fluffy bunnies and kittens with hearts and flowers. I wanted it to show that yea they will have problems, Tom put Bill through hell for two months but they can maybe make it work.rn((And to proove how big of a blonde I am.. I responded in a review rather than to you!! *goes to hide now*))
Date: 05/02/09 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
you should totally write a sequel of this of this one. to where they are living together and the baby is already old. and how tom changed...great job!
Author's Response: xD Thanks for the ideas, but I'm not sure if there will be another piece or not. The story was born after reading tokio_hotel_luver's fic 'Even though daddy's not here'.. :D