Date: 06/05/09 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 6
:0 Bill fall in love of Tom??? omggggggggggg *.*!
Date: 06/05/09 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
I loved this! I felt for Bill but loved it none the least. I hope Tom will love Bill back. Are you going to skip some years for Bill to be older? Anyways update soon!
Date: 06/05/09 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 6
a little fast moving, but I like the whole 'Tom-is-a-child-molestor' thing))
Date: 06/05/09 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow.. lol
The ending was weird, it seemed rushed, but idk.
I still loved it though. Can't wait to see more
Date: 06/05/09 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 6
plzplz update soon thx=]
Date: 06/03/09 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh my god, poor bill. he is only 8!!! You better have a very happy ending planned for him at some point to make up for all of this now. i still love the story, i am just scared and sad for little bill. update again soon please! :)
Date: 06/02/09 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
Woah! So excatly how old is tomi? Anyways I van wait for an update!
Date: 06/02/09 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, poor Bill. He thaught he would get a chocolate cake x'D
But omg, I didn't realize the fact that Bill is still a kid xP
I need more, please :]
Date: 06/01/09 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
I loved this! Tom and Bushido's bet was entertaining! I also love how Bill really wanted chocolate cake and the last line killed me. Very funny.
So Bill is what 13 years old and is about to have sex? Anyways I really enjoyed this and hope you update soon! I love seeing when this stories is updated!
:)
Author's Response: Aw naw Bill is 8 years old but the other (nicer) people in the geisha house think that Bill should wait until he's thirteen.
Date: 06/01/09 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 5
UHGG CLIFFHANGER!
i love this story!
more please!
:D
Date: 06/01/09 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 5
You wrote the tension very well. I was afraid Bill would mess up the whole time.
I just now realized that Bill is still a little kid. Before I thought time had passed and he was a teenager.
Date: 06/01/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wwoooooowwww
I just stumbled across this story today and I haven't seen anything like it XD
I love it. Other than that, I'm speechless, really =]
Date: 06/01/09 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
plzplz update sooon thx=]=]
Date: 06/01/09 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh wao.. O.O I seroiusy... wow... I really hope tom's not a jackass... Just... *Speechless* that is a lot of very sick men all in one place lemme tell ya... love this though, you've got me super duper curious!
Author's Response: Oh you'll never know! Tom in my story is a rather fickly character that is always going to surprise you remember everything is not what it always seems to be! ;)
Date: 05/31/09 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 4
plz update sooon thx=]
Date: 05/31/09 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love it!! Please please update soon! I love this!
Date: 05/31/09 02:47 am Title: Chapter 4
I. Need. Moore. :D
Date: 05/30/09 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
o.O I like this, it's quite interesting... but the whole man sleeping with an eight year old i'm going to have to get used to *meaning that i totally love it enough to keep reading it* keep up the great work.
Date: 05/30/09 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I've seen this on Buzznet, but I always miss the updates so I'm glad you're on this site!!
Date: 05/23/09 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
oh ya you posted a new chap love the story lol keep em coming