Date: 06/14/09 01:56 am Title: Uber Ende Dieser Welt
I really like this story so far and can not wait to see where it is going,why is it I am thinking how much more drama it would be if what really happened got out.
Thank you for posting and look forward to more.
Author's Response: Oh, thanks so much for reviewing! You made my WEEK. -grins- And don't worry, there's gonna be plenty of drama. You know cities, always having cameras everywhere... -shifty smirk- And a new chapter should be up before the end of the week, if everything goes according to plan. ~Inari
Date: 06/01/09 02:10 am Title: Uber Ende Dieser Welt
Awww I like how is Bill taking care of Tom, I want to see more of them soon...
I like so much this story try to update soon please! :D
Author's Response: Don't worry, I'll update as soon as I can. ~Inari
Date: 05/16/09 09:52 am Title: On the Edge
Awww this is so cute
Author's Response: Haha, thanks. ~Inari
Date: 05/15/09 09:47 am Title: Spring Nicht
ok awesome. just checking. ;) good story though
Author's Response: Thanks. ~Inari
Date: 05/14/09 02:55 pm Title: On the Edge
tom has dreadlocks bill is the one with the black hair.
Author's Response: Wow, really? You'd think I would know that or something... Considering I'm writing FANfiction about them. That means I'm a FAN. I KNOW Tom was dreadlocks and Bill has black hair. But, as of this moment, in the real world Bill DOES have dreadlocks.
Date: 05/14/09 01:09 am Title: On the Edge
awwww -hugglestomi-
Author's Response: -smiles- Yes, poor Tomi. Give him hugs. He needs hugs. ~Inari
Date: 05/08/09 01:44 am Title: By Your Side
EXPLAIN!!! AHHH! EXPLAIN!!! lol. Sorry. Eager for the explanation as to WHAT THE HELL HE WAS THINKING!!! AHH! lol. I love it.
Author's Response: The thing is... he wasn't really thinking. -smiles-. And Tom will explain his actions all on his own. ~Inari
Date: 05/07/09 02:08 pm Title: By Your Side
This fic needs to be updated. Right now.
Author's Response: It'll be updated next week, I promise. Be patient, please. ~Inari
Date: 05/07/09 01:38 pm Title: Spring Nicht
Oh dear. I can't wait to read the first conversation between Bill and Tom after this.
Author's Response: Ahaha. Thanks. ~Inari
Date: 05/06/09 10:59 am Title: By Your Side
its nice to see tom as the weak one for a change, can't wait to hear the explination
Author's Response: I always like to mix things up. A good way to do that is to throw Tom off a bridge. Ahaha. ~Inari
Date: 05/05/09 11:27 pm Title: By Your Side
I like it!!!.. I really do..
So now Tomi is going to explain everything, yeah I need to know why!, but I think he is not going to tell the whole story uhmm.. we will see..
Try to update soon please!! :D
Author's Response: I'll have a new chapter next week, promise. And Tom'll tell... most of the story. ~Inari
Date: 05/05/09 11:12 pm Title: By Your Side
I like the story, cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks, most people can't wait, ahaha.
Date: 05/05/09 10:02 pm Title: By Your Side
I really like it! I thought that I'd reviewed for chapter one, but I guess I didn't, I'm sorry! So, here we go:
Chapter one!: I LOVE IT! But, it was so sad. But that's why I like it. Normally, when people write tragedies, they write happy ones, as if everything's going to be okay, as if no one actually got hurt, and it makes everything so unrealistic. But yours was absolutely wonderful. Well written. I loved the descriptions. It was real, and that made it great. Poor them! I feel so horrible!
Chapter 2: I really like it! It's so realistic, yet again. I like how you show their emotions not only through descriptions, but in their actions and dialogues as well. Everything's so realistic. Everyone's happy to see Tom awake, but they're a bit quiet, unsure of what to say in the situation. I wonder why Tom's being so clingy all of a sudden, though. And I also wonder what Tom was doing up on that bridge if he wasn't going to kill himself! Was he really wondering about the stars, and accidentally fell? Or does he mean something else by it?
I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep it up, and please update soon! :) I'm tracking this story!
Oh, and Predict a Riot... I love that one too. I'm tracking it too. XD Maybe I should just track YOU, so that I get all of your stories XD
Author's Response: For Ch.1 Comments: I don't like it when it's unrealistic. Bill being yelled at by Tom then finding out he'd leapt off a bridge, was in a hospital, and might not ever wake up is traumatic. It effects everybody and their reactions are extreme sometimes. I try hard to portray that.rnrnCh.2 Comments: Yeah. What do you say to a friend that you think just tried to kill themselves? You can't act like it hasn't happened and now you're trying to wrap your head around the idea that your best friend just might be suicidal. Tom's clingy because he's more than just a little stressed. He's finally starting to realize what he's done. And he means something completely different. But don't worry. You'll find out soon.rnrnI'll probably update about this time next week. And you can do whatever you want, haha.rnrn~Inari
Date: 05/05/09 09:57 pm Title: By Your Side
awwwwwww -huggles you and the story- it's sooooooo pretty and sad. bitter sweet. i love it. please please post more soon
Author's Response: I'll post next week, don't worry. ~Inari
Date: 05/02/09 02:52 am Title: Spring Nicht
So sad.. poor Tomi D:
Girl I like the story! please update as soon as you can, I will be waiting :D
Author's Response: I'm working on the chapter right now, don't you worry. ~Inari
Date: 04/30/09 09:35 am Title: Spring Nicht
T_T zomg, i'm so close to crying right now -hugglesnifflesnotsobs- Poor tomi...are you going to make him better? please? please make him better for his billa. please!?
Author's Response: -hugs- Awwwwww, he might get better. I don't want to give too much away right now. But don't cry. It'll all end up good in the end. Maybe. ~Inari
Date: 04/30/09 06:22 am Title: Spring Nicht
Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii... Update sooon?
Author's Response: Soon as I get around to it, yes. ~Inari