Date: 04/30/23 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
I've mentioned this on other reviews: I came into the TH / THF fandom in Jan’22. The vast majority of fics I've read are quite old and I'm sure the authors have moved on (and probably wont even see new reviews), BUT I figure why not leave one anyway… I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Date: 04/16/15 02:34 am Title: Chapter 3
I think I fell into a coma of lust or something.... the visuals on this fic are insane. I'm pretty sure I've read this before, a million years ago, but here I am again. This was freakishly sexy. Jeez. I love how they get closer in such small steps. Small steps are the best. Really well done. :)
Date: 07/07/14 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ugh! I. Fucking. Need. Coconut. NOW!!!!! I can't tell you how much I loved that story. Everything about it! So well written and the banner was so - so - oh fuck, soooo sexy.
Date: 01/12/14 08:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Loved the ending ��
Date: 11/22/12 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
It's weird to read the twins getting down and dirty in my own country lmao xD
Anyways, the story was an awesome read.
Date: 04/16/12 12:31 am Title: Chapter 3
That was very well done ^-^ I like the end with the creepy old guy who sold Bill a machete XD That's priceless XD Awesome job on this, and I can't wait to read the rest of your stuff ^-^
Date: 07/01/11 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
It was simply gorgeous! I liked it so much! I love the way you write and describe... Your vocabulary was so developed and the story had so much details. Besides,I love the taste of coconuts :) and the description made me feel amazing! It was like I really was there and watch the twins... And I loved the sunset! Truly,it was just wonderful! Congratulations! ;) And I'm waiting for more stories!
Date: 05/22/11 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Coherent? What the hell is that? This was an amazingly sweet story sweetie. I enjoyed every word of it and it was hawt, hawt, hawt. :)
Date: 03/29/11 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
X___________X omg's...it's beyond the definition of Hot sexy and Beautiful
Date: 03/24/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter 3
LoL love the whole thing! And the last part made me laugh xD Over protective Big brother Tom!
Date: 03/24/11 01:10 am Title: Chapter 3
LoL the whole thing! And the last part made me laugh xD Over protective Big brother Tom!
Date: 03/22/11 03:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Haha, this reminded me of that one scene in 'Australia', you know, with Hugh Jackman and the water all over his torso.... Though Bill would fit onto Hugh, like, 4 times? :)
Great story!
Date: 11/09/10 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! (=
Date: 11/08/10 05:36 am Title: Chapter 3
OMG! That was so incredible! Have you written any others like this? I need MORE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Well, I have a few other stories here, but each one is quite different :)
Date: 11/07/10 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like the Maldives were HOT!
Author's Response: Yes, I'd like to think so. XD In fact, that all their vacation together end up in naughty situations like that. :P
Date: 10/13/10 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so I found this "summer story" first now, at the darker times of cold autumn season but it was such a treat nevertheless.
I found your story quite amazing because you picked a simple, short-span-of-time plot but you totally worked the nuances and details. It all became so rich, vibrant with colors, infused with scents and loaded with emotions and feelings. Quite impressive.
Needless to say, the sand castle building/imaginative sex orchestrating scene was the crown of this story (at least to me). I have never read anything of this kind before and was blown away by it. It was so original and so SEXY. Oh my, sometimes well written sexual innuendos can be so much more satisfying than graphic sex scene themselves. You were truly creative there.
Terrific work.
Author's Response: Once again I'm really late with responding, due to my current "time-out" from fan fiction. Nevertheless, I hope this still reaches you. I'd like to thank you for all your kind words, and for your extensive review. You don't get that very often :) I pictured a lot of this, actually, while writing - I find it helps tremendously, and the details were added with the time. I went through this story a few times in total. Aww, and you flatter me too much >< It probably turned out so well because I was writing it for a special person, and in such a situation the motivation isn't an issue. What else can I say? Probably that your comment is a high motivation for me to get back to writing as soon as possible. Dankeschön!
Date: 08/30/10 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
"and if you are still coherent enough"
Well, that might be a problem to be honest.
Can't I just type: skfmjsdkjf
and then you'll know I liked this story a lot?
I really liked your characterizations of the twins. Their playfulness and eagerness, their interaction in general, Tom being worried when he can't immediately locate Bill and his relief afterwards when Bill is right behind him.
The build-up of the story is amazing, slowly but in a way that it never gets boring working up to the main event.
I can't find a thing about the story I didn't like.
And of course; Damn, that was HOT !!
Great work!
PS: You also wrote a lovely bio :)
Author's Response: Thank you! (= These are the kind of reviews I really like, because you don't just tell me that it's great and that you liked it, you give me something to work with :)) But yeah, first things first - you can just write something that's just utter nonsense and gibberish, and then I know you've enjoyed it ;P I think that I was really motivated to make this story good and to smoothen the things that don't fit. For example, the whole dialogue scene after they *cough* put their shorts on again is a very late addition. This is why I'm glad that you don't mind the slow build-up. And the first time things are just the ones I really enjoy writing the most. Ehhh...you've said so many nice things and left me sort of speechless, so I'll just end this by thanking you again - Vielen Dank :)
Date: 07/22/10 07:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
Kinky ;P
DUDE!! You write better than I do, AND ENGLISH ISN'T EVEN YOUR FIRST LANGUAGE!
I LOVE this story!! It's getting too late for me to finish it tonight :( bu I shall read the last installation tomorrow :D
It's DEFINATELY one of my favourites :) It's been so long since I have read any fanfiction, I'm glad this was one of the ones I read to quench my thirst for Twincest!!
Danke!
xx
Author's Response: Wow - you flatter me! Thanks A LOT! I've spent a lot of time and energy to make this story really good, and knowing that people appreciate it so much is just great! Obviously now I'm eagerly waiting for your third review ;P Enjoy the rest of the story, and your stay in London! xoxoxo
Date: 07/22/10 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1
HAHAH!! Andy! I love it already!!
My mum has to steal my laptop, SO I cannot continue this fic now, BUT I WANNA!!
I REALLY love it already. Tom's freak out was cute :P
<3 5 STARS!! xx
Author's Response: I'm glad you found my stories and started with this one. Thank you so much! And like the way I did with the Live-DVD, you split it into three parts. Thanks again for reading!
Date: 06/11/10 01:22 pm Title: Chapter 3
wow that was just wow!!!!! and i love nightingales work she is an amazing artists! and you are such a great writer!!!! i love how you made it last thru three chapters that was amazing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Your feedback actually made me go back to writing (as you can see I haven't submitted anything for quite a while now), so thanks a lot for that!