Date: 05/03/09 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Holy Scheisse... my brain exploded from the Hotness...
so erotic and sensual!
love it
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! Uh yeah, that can happen sometimes with the brain. I can't really promise to spare you that...*chuckles*...aww and....I like it when people say that it's sensual how I write! ^___^
Date: 05/03/09 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
The "grammar freak" totally approves. A lot. And demands more smut as well =D
Author's Response: XD....I'm glad then! :P Thanks a lot! And yeah, yeah....*rolls eyes*...there's more to come. I just hope you don't think of it as pure "smut" ;)
Date: 05/03/09 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Im torn between wanting to kill you and wanting to hug you, WHY WHY WHY?????
THis sucks man it was just getting HOT I cnt wait for the end please thursday come soon XOXO
Author's Response: Yup, it was evil....but....some suspense and teasing can also be nice. I need the days in between the updates to make some final corrections. Thanks for reading :)
Date: 05/03/09 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awesome!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad that you liked it! (=
Date: 05/03/09 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
wheew *takes minute to regain breath" that was really intense and oh so hot! Absolutely exquisite! The detail you put into your writing is incredible and it's really great that you don't feel the need to rush this...of course that cliffhanger was a little evil but that's what makes waiting for may 7th so much more interesting!!
This seriously brought sunshine to my life as it's been raining way too much where I live! Thank you!
Favorite line: "Tom gasped involuntarily, and his mouth fell open as he saw the coconut water running down Bill's abdomen, disappearing into his swimming trunks and soaking them, his wet skin sparkling and glinting in the sunlight." I could totally picture it in my mind XD
Author's Response: Merci pour ta critique constructive et tes mots gentils, Charlotte! Ahhh okay I appreciate that you don't mind my teasing, but still, you are right, it was a little evil :P But yeah, that's the way I like to write, establishing the scene, building things up gradually, insinuations and tension, and the best always for the last! XD Awww and...you are welcome, I'm glad that it cheered you up a little even if it was raining so much. The part you mentioned or, moreover, the whole scene of Bill letting the coconut water running all over him, was one of the first pictures I had in my mind when starting to write that back in February. And – very mild spoiler for you – the way it's gonna continue was different until very recently, when I had a change of mind and modified what they will....do next :x
Date: 05/03/09 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
You already know that I love this story, but I just wanted to add that you have such a way with description that makes the whole setting come to life. Very nice. :D
Author's Response: Thank you, Jen! And I like the story even more with your final corrections; it's simply amazing when the sentences flow so smoothly – thank you so much for taking care on this one, it's very precious to me! I owe you!!
Date: 05/03/09 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
love it! update!
Author's Response: Thanks...xD! I'm on it! Just needs the finishing touches...
Date: 05/03/09 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Perfect. Absolutely perfect.
*purrs happily*
I'll write more review when I've recovered sufficiently to type a sentence. xoxoxo
Author's Response: Lolol...yeah, better cool down first, indeed! Thanks a lot though! I'm always a bit anxious how stories that start good turn out in the further process, and I'm seriously pondering heavily whether the continuation is gonna be well received....>_<
Date: 05/03/09 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, my. As much as I love the plot of this, the whole sweetness as well as the hidden sexy, I adore your style of writing. It's so detailed and to the point, very unique in comparison to most other stories I read. I really, really like it. I can't wait until Thursday. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, I'm truly flattered! Uhh, and now I know nothing clever to say! <_< Yeah, just...thanks for reading :) I'm actually glad that you mention a “plot”; sometimes when writing a one shot I'm a little afraid of drifting too much into Lemon/PWP (even if there's nothing wrong with that from time to time IMO), but this time the background plot came almost naturally. And yeah, I like to describe stuff and add details, until I can picture and smell and hear it ^_^
Date: 05/03/09 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
i never knew an author who can amazingly detail a sexual scene like you can. i can truly say that you make simple kissing seem more erotic than regular smut fics.
Author's Response: Whoa thank you so much! It was important for me to build up their first kiss (the one in which Bill fed Tom the coconut water, the one that gave the story its name) gradually, I'm glad that you noticed that. I'm not always doing this, but somehow I wanted this kiss to be lasting and meaningful, like a very special moment they'll still remember for a long time.
Date: 05/03/09 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
ONLY THREE CHAPTERS?!
you must be trying to kill me D:
i need more than three chapters.
seriously.
i have to have more.
i have to have to have to!
ugg. now i'm sad. roflmao.
well, this was an amazing chapter and i can't wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: Lol! Uh, yeah, just a one shot, sorry....unless you bribe me into writing more :P Thanks a lot – I like it that my writing makes you addicted :P This end-of-uni graduation-time with all its exams is just so intense; trust me, I'd like to write more often ._.
Date: 05/03/09 01:49 pm Title: Chapter 2
Shoot! This is way hot...and did I already mention how much I love your banner? Well, I love your banner.
Author's Response: Vielen Dank! ^__^ Indeed, I also found it.....*coughs*....pretty inspiring, to say the least.
Date: 05/03/09 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 2
*_* That was hot =]
Bill...covered in coconut water/milk...
Ohmygawsh.
Author's Response: Thank you! Uh, yeah, I kinda liked....the visual of it :)
Date: 05/03/09 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
How could you end there?!
*waits impatiently for next chapter*
Author's Response: Hehe, behave, Chels :P But thanks a lot – uh, I just come from adding quite a few parts to the third chapter, and trust me when I say, it's worth to wait :P
Date: 05/01/09 04:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! Their conversation is wonderful. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Aw thanks, really, that means a lot to me! I'm always working hard on the twin dialogues!
Date: 05/01/09 01:53 am Title: Chapter 1
awww cute n sexxy!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that I could cover both, the cute and the sexy part, lol! Maybe with the continuation we can even make it hot (?)
Date: 04/30/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, nais :D
Author's Response: Vielen Dank - I'm glad that you liked it! ^_^
Date: 04/30/09 06:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, nais :D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 04/30/09 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh yeah! "...and sticky!"
"No! Not yet!" LOL
Author's Response: Hi, and thanks for reviewing ^__^ Uh yeah, they're really brats sometimes, even though being already nineteen, so I try to build in some little funny (naughty?) parts like that into their dialogues :P
Date: 04/30/09 03:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi Andi,
How are you? Nice to get a new fic from you.
I like it! It's very cute. I like especially the end :)
I wanna play in the sand with Bill too! ;)
Kat xx
Author's Response: Hey Kat, nice to hear from you as well. And thank you so much for your kind words! It's not the end though – just a small break before we continue ;) Ahh I'm good, thanks for asking, and relieved that after so much studying and having passed the first exams I can finally write again! I'm pretty sure that a lot of girls dream of building a sand castle with Bill, lol!