Date: 05/17/09 08:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! This is so sexy! And it makes me love Bills dreads (for once XD)
Author's Response: Thank you! I personally always liked them, but yeah, this (the banner) was maybe the first drawing where I saw them with Bill's new style; the few vacation pictures looked yummy too!
Date: 05/16/09 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
awsome
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing :))
Date: 05/16/09 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
*snickers* Love! That's all I have to say.
Author's Response: Aww, I'm happy that you liked it! And a bit proud that you could feel the "love" ;)
Date: 05/16/09 06:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
*grins* I heart this. *reads on*
Author's Response: Lol...thank you! *winks*
Date: 05/16/09 03:25 pm Title: Chapter 3
not coherent yet ;)
Author's Response: *smirks* it will return :P Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 05/16/09 07:40 am Title: Chapter 3
i was so waiting tom to fuck bill but ow, he didn't :<
but VERY good anyways! i totally loved it. b29;
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Yeah, there were some insinuations in chapter 1 that this might happen, but for myself it would have been too fast to go there so quickly. Glad that you liked it! (=
Date: 05/16/09 02:23 am Title: Chapter 3
Andy, you have a way of writing that makes me want to go crawl into a hole and be ashamed of my stories. Everything is so explicitly detailed that it's impossible not to picture what's happening. And I say amen for that. You're truly a phenomenal writer, and I wish I could write as well as you can. One of my favorite stories by far!
Author's Response: Uhh...I don't even know what to say! Thank you, so much. Even if I like this story and put a lot of effort into it, I didn't expect this kind of overwhelming positive feedback! Thanks for the kind words, I appreciate it. And I'm glad that you liked it of course *is still a bit speechless and doesn't really know what to say else* *blushes*
Date: 05/16/09 01:08 am Title: Chapter 1
ROFL!!!! AWESOME!!
Author's Response: Thanks, glad that you liked it! :P
Date: 05/15/09 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm. I liked that. Did they really end up swapping trunks while they were there?
Author's Response: Thanks! Uhh, probably not, but who knows....we have almost no pictures unfortunately, so we need to use our imagination. I remembered the Bravo article about how Tom's swimming trunks from 08/09 look like then ones from Bill 07/08.
Date: 05/15/09 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Daaaaaaamn. You really brought that picture to life. Excellent job!
Author's Response: Thank you! These scenes (Bill pouring the coconut water over himself) were the first ones I pictured when I saw the drawing, and yeah, from there on I wanted to build a whole story around it.
Date: 05/15/09 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love this! I love the way they were finishing each other's sentences. Too cute!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I liked the way how the the picture from the outside (twins building a sand castle) seems rather innocent, but in their thoughts it was already quite dirty, lol. There wasn't much dialogue in the whole story, but at this point (that you mention) I found it important to have some conversation, yes.
Date: 05/15/09 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
Love It.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :) Glad you liked it!
Date: 05/15/09 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
maldives + twins wont have the same meaning to me from now on XDD
oh fuck the 69 was the best EVERR >.
Author's Response: Ah yes, I always suspected some kind of very naughty twin-behavior going on secretly during all their vacation there :P Thank you so much!
Date: 05/15/09 11:45 am Title: Chapter 2
fuckin' tease
im almost droolin' from this chapter
imaginatin' bill with the coconuts and the hole lickin' stuff was soo fuckin' hot >.
Author's Response: Cruel cliff hanger, lol....but you were lucky, the others had to wait 5 days :P And I'm a bit proud to hear that I could describe the hotness in a way that it gets to the reader ;)
Date: 05/15/09 11:14 am Title: Chapter 1
oh gosh the end was hilarious
the twins completing their thoughts xD
Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm really glad that you liked it. Actually I wrote this part of the story very fast, it seemed almost natural, and it was not edited anymore later, like most of the other parts.
Date: 05/11/09 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, man! As if I didn't see this last Thursday. I checked, hoping for it and never saw it. I must be blind. Thursday was not a good day, and I could really have used this (German oral exam, I was like jelly all day -.-) But I found it now, so not all is lost ^_^
I'm sad to see the end! Seriously, really, really, sad. Please will you write more of your Maldieve Twins? I love them. You make them seem so curious, yet still full of complete love for each other, and (I know, I've said this before but...) you write them so flawlessly, and so perfectly that I could sit and read them all day without getting bored.
*adds you to favourite authors*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much, and sorry for my late response! Ahh shoooot...dunno what happen on that Thursday, it was validated around 5 pm EST. You're British if I'm not mistaken, so it should have been there at around 10 pm of your local time ._. Yeah well, you finally found it ;) And I think you were even featuring my fic, thank you so much for that! I'm sorry that the exam was not so good! I'd love to write more frequently, my last final math exams are in 10 weeks, it's my graduation from uni, it will be very intense...but...I'm not going away and want to write more, maybe even about the Maldives ;) *chuckles* Awww but but....favorite author? *blushes*
Date: 05/09/09 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh Jesus.
Author's Response: Huhh...I guess you liked it then? :P
Date: 05/09/09 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gods, Andy... If you knew how many times I read this chapter now, you'd think I was losing it :x
Thank you, thank you, thank you
Author's Response: Hey Mio, you are very welcome, it's my pleasure! And no, I wouldn't think that you're losing it, lol! It's flattering to know that you read it more than once :P Moreover knowing that you are rather interested in Georg, it's nice to see that you are still so interested about the Bill/Tom pairings. Thank you for reading! (=
Date: 05/08/09 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
*iz not coherent anymore*
on nom nom
Author's Response: Thank you! XD That was my secret plan all along :P Uh yeah, glad that you liked it and found it yummy!
Date: 05/08/09 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 3
From time to time, when they watched a porn movie together, Tom had tried to find out what particular actions would be good ones, intending to put his knowledge to good use one day on his twin. – so cute.
Tom still blushed a bit at the thought of actually being in the girl's role for now. – Blowjobs are not just the girls role!
He shifted Bill's cock a bit sideways to cover it with small kisses starting at its base. By the time Tom reached the more reddened skin and finally the bluish glans he was already so eager at Bill's open, audible display of pleasure that he continued to brush his lips over it without further thinking. – yea!!!!
Tom sucked the tip of Bill's dick in and tried to create a tight and warm tunnel around it, remembering their naughty finger games and dirty talk at the sand castle. – wow you can think that in depth even with all your lust? Impressive!
He looked up briefly, self-satisfied with the way Bill had his head thrown back and was giving in to him. – ah! Sweet surrender!
Once Tom realized that he could use his hand to adjust the angle and create additional stimuli by jerking off the base and fondling Bill's balls, things suddenly seemed a lot easier. Soon Tom became bolder and pressed his lips tightly around Bill's length while taking it in deeper. Tom moved faster and pressed his tongue firmly against the underside, exploring Bill's contours there. - *flutter claps for Tom*
Bill could feel the stimulation from Tom's horseshoe-shaped circular barbell quite distinctly, and the grazing of the metal became occasionally softer or more intense.
Oh fuck, his lip ring. I'll never be able to look at him when he bites on it and smirks at me without thinking of this. - *grins*
To see and hear how much his brother was enjoying it got him off as well, and Tom couldn't suppress his own low moans. The more he drove Bill over the edge, the more he found himself becoming aroused – *grins*
Tom was certain that if he jerked himself off now, he'd be finished after a few strokes. - *giggles*
Tom growled when Bill bit his lips, demanding and with passion, and it proved difficult for Tom to speak.
“I wasn't finished yet.” - *grins and giggles*
Bill pressed his cock impatiently into Tom's thigh and rubbed it up and down. “But what if I want to do that too?” – *snickers*
“Copycat!” – oh so you don’t want a blow job. *nods* lol
He took Tom's warm pulsating cock into his fist to bring it toward him and licked in one go from the base to the tip, smirking about Tom's hoarse whimpers. - mmmhhhh
It didn't take Bill long to get the hang of it, and he particularly enjoyed teasing his brother by swirling around Tom's glans with his tongue stud, causing Tom to gasp and swear, as it proved simply too difficult for the older twin to fight the urge for release much longer. - *Grins and giggles smugly*
Then Bill leaned down and immediately sucked Tom's cock in as much as he could, enclosing it firmly with his lips. This was too much for the older twin, and as Tom involuntarily jerked his hips upwards to slide deeper into the delicious tight wet hotness, Bill nearly choked and recoiled, frowning at Tom. – *giggles* happens *giggles*
“Shit,” Tom mumbled, a sudden idea crossing his mind. “Turn around.”
Bill narrowed his eyes and his jaw dropped a little in surprise as he read Tom's mind. “What? You want us to....really?”
Tom nodded eagerly. - *grins*
He wanted Bill to continue so bad, but if he were to come now he'd probably pass out blissfully, or at the very least feel compelled to return the favor as soon as possible, and thus not be able to fully enjoy it. The thought of leaving his twin brother unsatisfied made Tom feel uneasy. Obviously they both wanted to please the other, and there had to be a way to do that simultaneously, like when they masturbated each other.
Bill felt awkward, knowing that Tom would see more or less everything in this position – It is a bit awkward and uncomfortable.
Bill's semi-erect cock was hovering very closely over his mouth, and Tom was so intoxicated that didn't know where to suck or lick or what to kiss first. - *giggles* overwhelmed?
Without further thought Tom shifted and turned his head, bending Bill's hardness down to take it between his lips, at first very gently, as if he was licking on an icy pole. A loud longing moan from his twin was the answer, and Bill's reaction was to suck Tom in even deeper. *gasp, moan, groan* OMG!
Tom's senses were solely focused on his twin, and he felt a triumphant jolt of pride as his chin touched Bill's belly, having managed to take him in completely. – nice!
When Bill took him in completely the first time, there was a brief moment when Tom panicked because he thought that he would come right away. - *giggles*
Bill pulled Tom's foreskin back as much as he could and sucked tightly around Tom's glans, stimulating the slit with his tongue stud, and when Tom howled and thrust his hips frantically into his face, Bill knew that this would be it. - *shudders*
The way Tom swore and moaned around his cock as Bill swallowed the warm fluid triggered the younger twin's own orgasm. – nice!
Finally they rolled onto their backs, bathed in sweat and completely wasted. Bill felt the urge to be face to face with Tom, but to his great surprise his brother beat him to it. - *sweet smile* awh!
Of course. Tom snorted and rolled his eyes. Another coconut. – lol they and I will never be able to look at a coconut the same again.
Bill snickered. “Sure, and I never mind you wearing my stuff. Our fans notice every little detail, though.” The younger twin held the blue-white shorts still in his hands, turning and shifting them, absorbed in thought. “Tomi, aren't these the ones I wore last year?”
Tom blushed, avoiding Bill's gaze. “No. I don't know. Uh, maybe.” - *snickers*
Tom was bursting with curiosity. “So, tell me, how did you get them open?” – lol glad we finally got the answer even if it isn’t as sexy as the mystery.
Tom's eyes widened and he shook his head. “You could have lost a finger, or your whole hand!” – OMG mom!
“Uhh...tonight...we could do it again?”
“What?”
“You know what. That.” – lol that????? *snorts*
“Oh, I see. Somebody's eager.” – ha ha!!! Tom!
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback and for commenting on a few selected parts of chapter 3! Of course the BJ's are not only for girls to do, but I consider Bill and Tom to be straight and thus having these kind of associations. And yeah, there are always some kind of thoughts involved IMO and I'm interested in depicting the mental components of the sex. I'm sure Bill will soon not feel awkward anymore about it :x Uh, Tom was more than overwhelmed, I'd say his senses were simply completely overloaded. I'm taking the full responsibility of how you'll look at a coconut in the future of course! XD