Date: 06/08/10 11:31 am Title: Chapter 3
:D !
Author's Response: It seems you liked it a bit, so thanks ;)
Date: 11/14/09 12:50 am Title: Chapter 3
Hottest thing I ever read in my entire life.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you, that means a lot to me :)
Date: 11/11/09 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hehe that was sexy ^^ I liked that, nice and pervy. I especially liked the parts where Bill turned Tom on and the explicit descriptions of what they did ; )
Author's Response: Thank you :) Oh yeah, I wanted to have the seductive part of Bill just dead on :P
Date: 10/10/09 06:32 am Title: Chapter 3
HOT DAMN!!! well i think i like coconuts alot better now mmmmmmmmm
Author's Response: Thank you :)) They don't taste too sweet, but I think that the twins do :x
Date: 09/05/09 02:47 pm Title: Chapter 3
sexy, sexy! *O*
I love the position they got... 69 xD
No really I didn't think about it...
Really wonderful!
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! :P Well, it wasn't even planned that way, it somehow just happened. And since it's not written nearly enough times in other stories, it had to be done. XD
Date: 08/08/09 01:14 am Title: Chapter 3
freakin' sweet 5 stars
Author's Response: Yayyy! Thank you! ^__^
Date: 07/21/09 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
well i'm sure you'd like to know what i think whether or not i'm coherent.
and i'm not, at all...but i'll try.
this was amazing. i've never read one like it. you really know how to describe it in a way that is both accurate and very sensual. and your dialogue is very real-sounding. also, the sandcastle bit was great.
uh, just wow. :D
Author's Response: Thank you very much – you said so many flattering things! I'm really glad that you liked it :) Telling me that you found their dialogue so real is like the best thing you could say to me, and really important for me :D Ah yes, the not-so-innocent sandcastle scene, lol! I'm actually surprised how many people mentioned this one, and looking back I'm glad that I included it ^__^
Date: 07/08/09 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 3
omg that was amazing i loved it! great job
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it (=
Date: 07/04/09 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
Mostly incoherent, but gleeful about it. This was very sweet, and loving, and oh so hot! Very well-paced and sexy.
Author's Response: Yayy...it was so many things at once? Thank you so much! I've been both astonished and amazed about the amount of positive feedback :)
Date: 06/12/09 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
your response to my last review got my hopes up; will i be seeing another maldives/twc from you? i'd really like that because you know, you're amazing at writing. ^_^
Author's Response: Gah, sorry for my super late response! .__. First of all, my last exam is going to be on August 17, and I'm just looking forward to get my exams over with and leave uni for good. Whatever I write will come after that date unfortunately. And I have lots of good thoughts about stories, which is why it feels even worse not have the proper time to write some more :( So, here's the plan, exclusively for you: I'd like to turn the Maldives-twins into a series and add at least one more one-shot this year. Oh, and thank you for your interest! :)
Date: 05/22/09 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dear Andy,
I have read your story ‘Coconut Kiss’ and it is great! The way the twins interact, the sweet kissing and oh just everything. It is a pleasure to read.
I thought, maybe I can translate it. After translating it, I will post it on the Dutch Tokio Hotel Forum (http://www.schrei.nl/forum/index.php) Not only will I translate your story, but also the reviews.
However, I will only translate your story if you allow me to.
I am looking forward to your answer.
Dian
missde@live.nl
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I think you could translate it. I'm looking forward to see the story in Dutch ^__^
Date: 05/20/09 10:46 am Title: Chapter 1
Oooh O__o
This is without doubt one of my favorite stories! I really like your way of writing and explaining the twins' feelings and thoughts!
Loove it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Also that you pointed out what you liked; I always prefer that over a general opinion :-) I requires more effort to write first-time, but IMO you can build up more tension, and things are not so predictable. Also, not everything goes smoothly :P
Date: 05/19/09 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 3
I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you liked it! ^_^
Date: 05/19/09 01:22 am Title: Chapter 3
Okay, so this is the third review--I've reviewed every chapter. I don't usually do that but it was that good and I figure something like this deserves three extra reviews. *grin*
Excellent, beyond words. Super win. The characters were believable and didn't come across as too...messed with. (Does that make sense?) Either way, an original line of thought and some very cute brotherly love coupled with hot lemony goodness.
You, good author, win an internet.
Author's Response: *bows to his loyal reader* Thank you for writing a more detailed feedback – I really appreciate it. That makes perfect sense what you say, it's among the hardest things to write in character. Especially when it comes to the...errr...hotter scenes; we might believe in twincest, but need our imagination to decide how they act in such situations nevertheless. As a male author my opinions and views probably differ a bit there in some aspects. I'm glad that you saw beyond the smut/lemon character, even if it dominates slightly in the last chapter.
Date: 05/19/09 01:20 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, hell... Bill-the-Coconut-Seducer. *drools*...That scene was so... well put together. I squealed, honestly. High-fives for you!
Author's Response: Yayy, thanks! I'm so glad I could put this in words without making it too mushy or cliché. Ooo and so true, Bill is the born seducer, he can do such things.... :P
Date: 05/19/09 01:19 am Title: Chapter 1
The image of Tom and Bill playing with a sandcastle makes me smile, ridiculously. I loved the little scene with their hands and the moat; I haven't seen that or anything like it, ever. Well done, and super cute!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's funny that so many people like the idea of them building a sandcastle together – it originated from a conversation, and at first I was afraid that it would turn out too childish. And I wanted to have more dirty talk, but now I'm glad that I didn't. It feels right to have some conversation there at the end of the first chapter though. I guess it's challenging to come up with new things, considering the 6100+ TH-stories here, and I don't know how many in German or at many other places. If it made you smile a little - even the better (=
Date: 05/17/09 09:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
Amazing. Simply amazing. So descriptive and effectionate. The actions the twins did were described so perfectly. I could picture everything happening.
Author's Response: Thank youuu!! :)) I'm actually rarely satisfied with my stories before I can picture everything myself, lol. Aww and yes, affectionate twins belong to my favorite ones, no matter if I read or write. <3rn
Date: 05/17/09 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
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(not coherent enough to write a decent review)
Author's Response: Ahhaaahaha...I guess I should feel a bit proud then :P You're always welcome to come back later and give it another try ;-) On the other hand, the twins have not been really decent and behaving themselves, so you don't need to worry. ^_^
Date: 05/17/09 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
damn, now that was sexy!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much =)
Date: 05/17/09 09:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Whooooooo! Nice story!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you liked it! (=