Date: 04/30/09 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Eeeheehee!
Bill building a sand castle is so adorably innocent.
I can't wait til' sunday! :D
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you're awaiting the continuation! (= Uh yes, Bill's innocence...well...let me tell you, this boy is so mischievous! You'll see that already soon he's clearly not so innocent anymore! :x
Date: 04/30/09 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaawh. So cute. So darn cuuute! :D Love this fic. And the banner is HAAAWT
Author's Response: Lol, thanks a lot! I'm really glad that you like it so far. Aww yes, all banner credits go to Nightingale of course, I'm so grateful that she did that for me!
Date: 04/30/09 11:32 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG... This is so hot. I love every details of this fic, especially the hand-and-fingers thing and when they complete each other thought about thing they all want. I love this one: "Talking about what happened during the nights in the darkness of the bedroom under the blankets was definitely new." Sounds so sneaky >______<
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your feedback! I tried to establish somehow how far their relationship had progressed until now, but in order not to make it too long some things had to stay vague like what you mentioned. And yeah, I agree, if you're left to your own imagination what might have been going on under the blankets, it's somehow hotter than to describe it down to the last detail! It's funny, the whole dialogue when they are at the sand castle came somehow so naturally, and I simply adore the thought of them completing each other's sentences like that!
Date: 04/30/09 11:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Good
Author's Response: Thank you! (=
Date: 04/30/09 06:38 am Title: Chapter 1
that was great! haha:))
more powers!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! More to come soon...
Date: 04/30/09 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
ahah xD great! need more ^^
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, we definitely need more tropical affectionate twins! (=
Date: 04/30/09 02:38 am Title: Chapter 1
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holy cow.....
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you - glad you liked it so far! xD
Date: 04/30/09 01:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, I love the implications of this chapter. And your banner is something truly wonderful. I don't even know if that should be allowed seeing as I felt almost no need to read this, haha. But I'm glad I did, of course.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope this doesn't give too much away, but the drawing itself is of course very closely related to the story :P So you should definitely keep on reading ;) All banner credits go to Nightingale, she's such an accomplished and talented artist, and working together with her is like a dream come true! *major fanboy attack/seizure*
Date: 04/30/09 01:36 am Title: Chapter 1
lmao oh my goodness; the last part was priceless
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Hehe...uh yeah, they are sometimes just brats! :P
Date: 04/30/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1
*_*
That was so sensual and well written. I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Arianne! And I'm glad that you liked it. :)
Date: 04/30/09 12:06 am Title: Chapter 1
mmmmmmmmmm :)
Author's Response: Lololol...thanks for the audible input! :P Nah, glad you liked it so far! ;)
Date: 04/30/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it! *sighs* I'm so full of twin-love after reading this! So perfectly descriptive - Tom's feelings, the sand, the sun, water, everything...and Bill licking his lips should be illegal. That totally got me. We've missed you Andy! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Ohh thanks, Ronda. I'm really glad that I could cheer you up a little! Bill is quite a seducer, no? And yeah, there's so much that Tom feels, he can't say it but Bill knows about it anyway @__@
Date: 04/30/09 12:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. Loved this!
Author's Response: Thank you, really! You are too kind! *is a bit proud that his writing was approved by somebody who's a Grammar freak* lol :P
Date: 04/29/09 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is very cute, lol.
Author's Response: Vielen Dank! I'm happy that you liked it so far... ;)
Date: 04/29/09 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Good god.. *__* Did I miss your writing!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hate it when exams come into the way, but yeah, they were very important >__> Glad that you liked it!
Date: 04/29/09 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
cnt wait for the next chapter, im so excited to see what happens next. Please update normal, dont be one of those authros who strt and nvr finish. XOXO
Author's Response: Hey, thanks a lot! And, if I can, let me take some of your worries away: The story is completely finished, the beta-checking of the next chapters is in progress, and I'm just adding some little details here and there! There won't be any update delays ^_^
Date: 04/29/09 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am madly in love.
I must have more right now D:
I'm not totally sure I can wait until the 3rd. xD
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yeah, I can relate, I also feel like growing closer to them when writing such things. Huh, how mean of me to split it and tease like that :P But the whole story is finished, no delays! (=
Date: 04/29/09 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh hey! it's Andy
what can I say besides 'aw" the way you depict Bill is too lovely for words
and that last part with the sand castle XD that finger action was pretty hot if you ask me...
But what I really loved about the end was how everything was super steamy and stuff and then bam "They had no vacuum cleaner in the dark age, you moron!” LOL
Author's Response: Merci beaucoup! Thanks so much for your kind words, and yeah, indeed, I'm more than glad that you like the way Bill is characterized here :) Haha...lol, well yeah the teasing itself can be quite hot and a turn-on, and of course there are more steamy things to come! ^__^