Date: 06/02/09 10:48 am Title: Swim Practice
it is shooort!!! T.T
Date: 06/02/09 09:51 am Title: Swim Practice
luvvles it! update more soon!
Date: 06/02/09 07:56 am Title: Swim Practice
-beats you with a bat-
you kno i still love you? lo
haha i forgot i was suppose to write a letter for this haha lol
i really want alix out of the picture.
aww tomi starting to releazie yeaaaa
Date: 06/02/09 02:11 am Title: Swim Practice
Oh man. I am so scared of those letters, haha!
Date: 06/02/09 02:05 am Title: Swim Practice
Oho! Loved it! Update soon! :)
Date: 06/01/09 05:39 am Title: Their Own Little World
plz updateeeeee :(
Date: 05/21/09 08:30 pm Title: Their Own Little World
more!!!!!
Date: 05/21/09 10:09 am Title: Their Own Little World
ohh.. i bet that was Storm ):
Date: 05/20/09 09:17 pm Title: Their Own Little World
aw i lvoe it!
Date: 05/20/09 08:43 pm Title: Their Own Little World
Wow... You updated... I'M SO HAPPY WEEEEEEE!!!! I have a feeling updating again would take a long time.
Author's Response: It's nearing the end of the school year so its crazy with finals but I actually have the next chapter planned.
Date: 05/19/09 11:48 pm Title: Their Own Little World
Good advice, "Annie". However, I always like to say, "If you love someone, set them free. If they don't come back, hunt them down and kill them." I jest (mostly)! Good chapter.
Date: 05/19/09 11:40 pm Title: Their Own Little World
Ooo, this is interesting, i love the way you've got the advice going at the top of each chapter :) Lol, there seems to be a lot of twins in this story, is that of some importance? Or just because? The first chapter you just seemed to contradict yourself a little, with the whole who people thought Annie was, like the prinicpal, but then when Annie's personality changed, they knew it was a different person, but other than that, nothing seems to contradict each other :) and I'm loving this :) Oh wait, this is a little confusing...
He should have known better to ask Bill to break his weekly date with Tom. It never happened, unless someone happened to die and that had only been once, about a year ago. Tom’s goldfish swimmy had gone bottoms up and the younger brother had insisted on funeral services and a memorial. Afterwards the two had a big bowl of ice cream and played video games into the late night.
So Tom did or didn't break the tradition? Because it seems like he didn't, but then it loses the whole point...hehehe anyway, I could just be reading it wrong... lol, is it bad that I might be taking some of the advice? Very level headed stuff :) update soon? :)
Author's Response: Well, the first chapter was hard for me to write because I didn't know how to exactly to present it to people. So maybe the conrtadiction is in there and I really didn't mean for it to happen. I promise!
Also the whole tradition thing. It will be explained later what actually happens on Twin Terror Nights. Then you'll understand how it was broken over a death.
LASTLY! Yes, this is actual advice I have givn several of my friends numerous times. So if you want to, go ahead and follow it. It has helped them and I hope you can benefit from it as well!
Date: 05/19/09 11:31 pm Title: Their Own Little World
ooh pzlpzl update sooonn..thx soso much=]=]
Date: 05/14/09 06:29 am Title: Gummy Desks
love it!
Date: 05/10/09 03:07 am Title: Gummy Desks
NNNOOO!! FUCKING A! This story is sooooo awesome! It's addicting! I'm putting this in my favorite list! I hope you update soon! This is a really great story yo! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Thank you :)
Date: 05/10/09 02:59 am Title: The Legend
Wow, story is already interesting!
Date: 05/05/09 08:58 pm Title: Gummy Desks
intterresting! update more soon, this is really cool!
Date: 05/04/09 04:08 pm Title: Gummy Desks
Interesting that their in relationships with a set of twins. I love that you have a question at the beginning and the answer at the end of the chapter. Really good set-up on that.
Date: 05/04/09 08:35 am Title: Gummy Desks
Wheee, I love your story almost as much as my orange juice!! *takes a sip* And it's GOOD
Date: 05/04/09 05:09 am Title: Gummy Desks
love it x)
Update soon BITTE!!