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Reviewer: izzap Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/17/10 01:57 am Title: Chapter 1

*girlish squeal* Tomstaaaav, woop woop. Ahhh this was so adorable! Well, hot to begin with, of course, but the afterglow was lovely, darling, I loved it. :DD

Reviewer: luvme189 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 12:18 am Title: Chapter 1

holy shit...
never read a Gustav/Tom before, as i already told you.
it just made it's way to my top three, definitely.
not sure if that's because you wrote it, or because the pairing's just amazing.
guess i'll need to find more...

GREAT JOB.

Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you liked it so much, bbygrl! :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: jase Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/09 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was really cute, but now i want to know what happens next. You should do a sequal of them telling the band!! that would be awesome. Great story :]

Author's Response: I don't know if Tomstav is my calling but I'll think about doing something else with them together. :) Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: KaulitzTwinsLover17 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/19/09 05:02 am Title: Chapter 1

*snorts* I've never read Tom/Gustav ever...and this was hot. I was like hoshit Tom's bottoming for Gustav *grins*...I loved it.

Author's Response: I love Tom/Gustav :):):)

Reviewer: i_is_anonymous Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/09 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Tom didn’t like foreplay but that was most definitely Gustav’s favorite part. He wanted to make Tom wither and beg beneath him, he wanted Tom hear Tom’s soft pleas that no one else never heard. That was probably the blond’s favorite part; no one ever heard Tom begging but himself. – probably why Tom doesn’t like it makes him feel exposed. Oh and uuuggghh hot!

Both of the boys were officially desperate for one another.- awh so cute and horney *giggles*

Most times, Gustav wasn’t ever up for taunting but at that point it was fun, yet so torturing for himself at the same time. – that’s always fun.

Tom didn’t want it to end. He liked the feeling of being filled to the point where he thought he might die of happiness, he enjoyed knowing that Gustav was only fucking him and not some other person – a girl. Tom liked Gustav.
At realizing that, he moaned loudly and pulled Gustav into a desperate kiss, loving how the thrusts slowed while their kisses just got hotter and hotter. – awh that’s so sweet

Tom began muttering dirty words into Gustav’s mouth, occasionally moaning but mostly begging for more. – I’d love to hear Tom talk dirty and beg!

“Gus...!” The rest of his name was caught in Tom’s throat as Gustav slammed forward quickly. “Oh yes!” Tom moaned loudly and clenched his muscles around Gustav. – mmmhhh hot!

“Tom?” David said just as they left their apartment. “What’s on your neck? It looks like some kind of hickey or something...” - *giggles* very embarrassing lol

Author's Response: ;) Thanks for reviewing! I'm happy you liked the story. xD

Reviewer: johnnyboylovesleecurtis Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/09 10:50 am Title: Chapter 1

I've never tried this kinda thing before. I really like it though. It was so weird seeing Gustav in Tom instead of Tom in Bill, ya know?
Oh well, I liked this and thought it was cute that they didn't have to say anything to understand what they were feeling.

Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a try and reviewing. (:

Reviewer: Tokio4life Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/09 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

aww!!!

so cute!! *melts*

i love hte way u wrote this, with the thoughts running through tom's head, his and gustav's reactions to the things happening, etc etc. it was just awsome! it really was!!!

and i love the ending too!!!

pretty please write a sequal? (A)(A)(A)(A) PRETTY please? (A) it was too awsome to just stol *puppy eyes*

Author's Response: hmmm, maybe i will, just for you (;

Reviewer: Katjana1989 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/01/09 09:03 pm Title: Chapter 1

That was HOT !
Awww they're in love! :D

Nice work!

Author's Response: danke. ^_^

Reviewer: tinkersowner123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

that was amazing smut

Author's Response: thanksss. (;

Reviewer: SoXSpoke Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this one(and I definitely have a soft-spot for Tomstav, lol), the dynamic between Tom and Gustav seemed natural and not overly exaggerated to their reputations(i.e. Gustav being extremely shy and quiet, Tom being a douchey 'player'). All-in-all it was a very well written fic, Imma go read your other stories now. :]

Author's Response: (; You are so sweet! I thought that they wouldn't really be like that if they were in a horny mood. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lollipopcorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/29/09 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 1

Aaaaw... I loved this Tomstav... So pretty! =D

Author's Response: That was my first Tomstav (;

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