Date: 08/12/10 04:02 pm Title: The Moon
WHY ISN'T THERE A NEXT POST BUTTON???? D: C'mon girl! Gotta be kidding me! I NEED the next chapter, I'm begging! please, this was so cute. I mean they're so... "boys" lol. They do things and don't even know why. Well yeah perhaps they're inlove and all but they make it seem so simple... Please continue, the story's direction is amazing!
Date: 08/12/10 03:50 pm Title: New Year
Uh-oh! Mom got home earlier? lol that was pretty funny if you ask me xD
They kissed... It's awkward to read that since they were on a hangover but I bet Tom didn't wanted to because he STILL remembered what he did last night!!!
Date: 08/12/10 03:41 pm Title: Shoes
Poor Tomi :( But I really like your story :D I mean, in all others Tom is so greedy and cocky and such, here he's perhaps the kid he REALLY used to be back then when he was little. I can imagine Tom doing all those things. Loved!!!
Date: 08/12/10 03:33 pm Title: 10 minutes
This song makes me cry like u have no idea and i like how u portrayed that in this story, the son's meaning i mean. Beautiful! and ouch! sorry about that and ur piercing lol.
Date: 05/17/09 05:59 pm Title: The Moon
update osooon plz thx
Date: 05/08/09 01:37 am Title: The Moon
ehhh, i need more D: lol
Date: 05/07/09 04:00 pm Title: The Moon
Next!! ;) I love it! n_n
Date: 05/07/09 10:23 am Title: 10 minutes
hmmm intriguing, I love the way you write, your settings seem rich and fleshy, its nice and Bill and Tom seem to fit well within them. I look forward to more (greedy readers we always want more)
Thanks!
Riv
Date: 04/28/09 07:15 pm Title: New Year
lol i can just picture them both with a hangover and chilling on the couch :)
Date: 04/28/09 07:11 pm Title: 10 minutes
lol yeah eyebrow peircings arent always fun XD but jeez this is gonna be sad :(
Date: 04/28/09 01:59 pm Title: 10 minutes
Awww, I really liked this. I hope you update soon. This is so sad and sweet, and sometimes even pretty funny. It's really good so far. I can't wait for more. :)
Date: 04/28/09 09:21 am Title: Shoes
Very sweet! I loved it! More please?
Date: 04/27/09 10:45 pm Title: Shoes
OMG xD Sweet Tomi *_*...XD and good chap!! ;) yeah, I want more.
For me it was funny when Tom said that they took his shoes...and the pepsi jaja xD OMG poor Tom, maybe his shoes where pretty expensive O_O...x.x
Date: 04/27/09 09:30 am Title: 10 minutes
wow thats sad,
and bill
i wish it was you standing beside him at the alter to
Date: 04/27/09 09:19 am Title: 10 minutes
Is this a one shot? Because this is good, really good. If it is, please write some more and if it isn't, PLEASE HURRY UP THE UPDATE!
Date: 04/26/09 11:28 pm Title: 10 minutes
Hey hun, read your story because I have tattoos of Boats and Birds lyrics on my arms and back. I really liked that it wasn't graphic because the song is so sweet and sad. I think you did a really great job of capturing it's essence, kudos :)