Nein, it has detail, and its really good too, can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Yay! Ok. Thanks for the feedback.

I like this story! i think its awesome, but u need an uber conflict! {but PLEASE no bill/tom deaths. that is bad juju :s!!} mabey then, if u put in a conflict, then u can describe that and keep going on with that. but idk, just throwing some random thoughts out there. either way i think the story is awesome [especially the bj part at the end AMAZING] >.

Author's Response: I will not kill a twin off, I can garentee that. What sort of conflict would you like to see?

I was thinking about the one the girl in the picture was wearing, but now that you mention it, a bright pink bikini with neon green and orange stripes and blood red hippos sounds...eh...horriblexD

That's wasn't a very nice mental picture of TomxD

Author's Response: I don't know.....Kinda makes me wanna do him like that XD

I love this story, but why is Tom so hostile? He sounds like a spoiled little brat that should be turned over my knee and spanked.
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Oh my, my heart just stopped... Wow, imagination overload...
Did I mention I love the story? Sorry, I can't remember much of the last 5 seconds...

Author's Response: *Giggles* You know what hun, if you want to bend Tom over your knee and spank him, go for it! Want a yaoi paddle for it, or is your hand just fine? *giggles*

Really? XD

Author's Response: *laughs* I was shaking.

keep it comin!

Mwahahaha! a floaty chair :) you know, pink might be his color :)

Besides, I'm sure Tom will make you work for it.

damn, that has to mess up Bill's thinking some what. I mean first Gordon is saying don't worry about repaying him, but then he is like, oh, have fun repaying Tom. So maybe not that wording, but that's how I see it.

Bill's eyes widened slightly as he took in slept-in dreads, a toned body, and low slung pyjama pants.

Bill's eyes aren't the ones that widened. Mine just widened a little more than slightly :) One thing that threw me off a little, was one moment Andi was there, and then the next he went to wake Tom up, and he sort of disappeared :) like a magician! I like magicians...lol :) so did he stay in Tom's room, or just sort of walk back out silently. Oh you stuck Saki in here!! *squishes* I love Saki :) he's just so great :)

"He's the bodyguard I always keep at the house"

So does that mean we get to see more of Saki? Andi seems so nice :) want to squish him :) so nice to Bill, lending him clothes, going to go shopping with Bill, with probably a platium credit card... :)

Since Bill was Gordon's little 'charity project', Bill could sleep in the north part of the house. That was Tom's reasoning, at least.

Glad Tom didn't say that aloud. At least not yet :) maybe he never will, but that would certainly be a damper to Bill's mood which is probably filled with awe right now :)

Saki, though a lot larger, reminded Bill of a teacher he had had his first year of high school.

So Bill had a good high school life? Hopefully I'm not taking that the wrong way :) I love that idea :) *skips* that Bill's life wasn't always so depressing :)

Author's Response: XD Pink is definately Tom's colour. I mean wow! Suits him so well. Esp hot pink, you know? Yeah, Gordon meant that as a little joke, like Tom would make Bill play maid or something. He doesn't really know about Bill's past. Gordon's a good guy, try not to be too hard on him XD *Giggles* and yesh. Andi is a magician in training XD And yesh, I did stick Saki in there. I love that guy, so yeah, he'll be around a bit. I wish I could go shopping with Andi and that credit card *sighs* Yes, Bill had an ok high school life. I mean, he dropped out at 15, so it wasn't that long, but still. I actually had a teacher that reminds me of a smaller Saki. The guy loved me (not in the ickycreepy way). So yay for the skipping and yay for Bill's life being good at one point. Thanks SOOO much for reviewing!

"Ugh. Lazy son of mine is still in bed. I tried to get him to come, but it was just one of those days where a tornado, a marching band, an airplane, AND a wrecking ball going through his room couldn't wake him. Not to mention every alarm clock every created."

haha this was funny..
So finally Bill is on Tom's house..this is going to be good, I hope he treats Bill well...
Love the story I will be waiting for an update! :D

Author's Response: I so get in kicks like that where nothing can wake me up. It's wonderful XD Thanks so much for reviewing!rn

aw, Georg's such a sweetie pie. n__n

Aww, so. I read this story all rushy rushy because I was so caught up. :) Well well well, my opinion time now... I like the characters. :) Though I can't really begin to understand Bill's, but after all he WAS near to death and saved by people who he doesn't even know, so it's normal that he's a bit stiff and taken aback, however I wish he showed a bit more personality, he's a bit lifeless, like he takes whatever comes in without many emotions... I really want to see when he spends time with Tom. :) And also, why is Tom so mad about having Bill over..? his friends are so nice to him, especially Georg who's so nice, and I can't really figure Tom out either. It's a problem, since they're the two main characters! XD I just hope you'll post soon, so that I can know more of it. :) Me likes! *tracks*

Author's Response: I like opinion time. I know what you mean about Bill. But then again, he has no idea who these people really are and such, right? As he gets more used to them, and his health is back to normal, he's going to be more like the Bill we all know and love. Tom is mostly mad because Bill's cramping his style. He just hates people and likes to be alone, save for Andreas. Hopefully he'll come around. Thank you so much for taking the time to read it and review. Means alot to me.